Story Updates October 23rd

Story update time! We have a pretty big set this time around, most of which are 5 star. I notice most of the comments on these are people waiting for specific stories to update. I'd suggest checking something new out if your favorites are still being written. For the most part, stories on EQD should all be good in their own merits. A few slip through the pre-readers, but the filter is pretty heavy.

Story: Pony Age: Origins (Update Part 15!)

5 Star

[Crossover][Adventure][Grimdark] I think this time slot is dedicated to throwing random crossovers out and seeing how you guys react. Naruto didn't work so well yesterday, but the pre-readers actually liked this one! (I honestly gambled with the Naruto one since no one would review it, sorry :p)

Author: OmegaPony11

Description: The Ponyspawn have invaded Equestria, and it is up to the newest addition to the Grey Wardens, Twilight Sparkle, to find them means to drive them back! With her friends and allies at her side, can Twilight defeat the evil tide before all of Equestria is devoured?

Pony Age: Origins

Labels: Adventure, Author: Omegapony11, Crossover, Everypony, Grimdark, Incomplete, OC Ponies, Star-5, Story, The Great and Powerful TRIXIE

Story: Fractured Lightning (A Crack in Thunder) (Update Part 6!)

4 Star

[Adventure][Comedy][Dark]

Author: Eonseig
Description: On an expedition to the extreme north of Everfree Forest, Twilight and the CMC accidentally set an ancient being free from a

A Crack of Thunder

Labels: Adventure, Author: Eonseig, comedy, Everypony, Incomplete, OC Ponies, Star-4, Story

Story: Metanoia (Update Part 6, 7, 8!)

4 Star

[Adventure][Normal][Sad][Dark] Has Twilight ever had control of her magic? Sometimes I wonder.
Author: UnderstatedHyperbole

Description: After Twilight finds herself suddenly losing control over her magic, our equine heroes find themselves heading back to the site where they became the Elements of Harmony as they track down the wayward unicorn.

Metanoia

Labels: Adventure, Author: UnderstatedHyperbole, Everypony, Fluttershy, Grimdark, Incomplete, Luna, Normal, OC Ponies, Rainbow Dash, Sad, Star-4, Story

Story: My Little Hangover (Update Part 7!)

5 Star

[Normal] [Comedy] [Crossover] [Adventure] "This... is freaking beautiful. This right here? This is how you do a crossover."-Pre-Reader with a WoW dragon name.

Author: Mousetrap

Description: It's Twilight Sparkle's 18th birthday, and in time-honored pony tradition her friends have dragged her to Las Haygas, the world-renowned City of Lights. They promise to give her a night she'll never forget. And with the lights, the glamor, and a few shots of Liquid Rainboom, it seems they're poised to deliver just that.

But when Twilight wakes up to a destroyed hotel room, a hangover so painful it leaves her unable to do magic, a missing pony, and a slew of unanswered questions, she is forced to wonder: did they party too hard? Now, the five ponies must clean up their mess by piecing together a night that none of them can remember, all the while searching for a friend that could already be halfway across the desert...

It's a lesson they'll have to learn the hard way. Some ponies just can't handle Haygas.

My Little Hangover

Labels: Adventure, Author: Mousetrap, comedy, Crossover, Everypony, Incomplete, Normal, Star-5, Story, Twilight Sparkle

Story: Transcendence (Update Part 9!)

6 Star

[Normal][Sad]

Author: Corejo

Description: When Scootaloo moves to Ponyville, she meets a certain cyan pegasus who becomes her idol. Things go well for the filly until a pivotal moment in her life causes her hopes and dreams to come crashing down around her. Broken and betrayed, Scootaloo must learn to accept her reality and embrace her inner strength with the help of her father and two best friends.

Transcendence

Labels: Applebloom, Author: Corejo, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Incomplete, Normal, OC Ponies, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Sad, Scootaloo, Star-6, Story, Sweetie Belle, Wonderbolts

Story: My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic (Update Part 8!)

5 Star

[Crossover] A TF2 Fic! It's about time!

Author: Axle and Wheel

Description: After a mishap in a magic duel, the ponies are transported to the Team Fortress universe. They'll take the classes places while The Engineer tries to find a way to get them home.

My Little Fortress, Teamwork Is Magic

Labels: Crossover, Derpy Hooves, Everypony, Incomplete, Other, Star-5, Story, The Great and Powerful TRIXIE

Story: The Eversleep (Update Story 2 Part 5!)

5 Star

[Grimdark][Sad][Normal] I don't see how something can be all three of those tags, but, alright.

Author: EvenMotion

Description: When the world turns upside down for the Kingdom of Equestria, is
it impossible for it to recover? When final words are spoken, all of
Equestria will be forced to take sides. A select few must shoulder the
burden of restoring balance to the kingdom, doing whatever it takes to
bring back the peace, risking the sacrifice of all they hold dear.

The Eversleep

Labels: Author: EvenMotion, Celestia, Complete, Everypony, Grimdark, Luna, Normal, OC Ponies, Sad, Star-5, Story

Story: Too Shy for a Rainbow (Update Story 2 Chapter 4!)

5 Star

[Shipping][Comedy] Apparently this kind of takes place after Silent Ponyville, but works on it's own.

Author: Jake Heritagu

Description: In an attempt to make her feelings known, Fluttershy begins to persue the target of her delicate heart's affection. However, when her interest seems to be oblivious to her feelings will she find the inner strength to admit her true feelings to the one she desires? Or will disaster follow her at every turn? (Takes place 1 month after Silent Ponyville, but is not required reading material)

Too Shy for a Rainbow

Labels: Author: Jake Heritagu, comedy, Complete, Everypony, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Shipping, Star-5, Story

Story: Wooly Fetlocks and the Fashion Factory (Update Interlude!)

5 Star

[Normal] [Crossover] [Comedy] [Shipping]

Author: Pen Pal

Description:

Wooly Fetlocks, the legendary fashion designer, has finally returned from his mysterious sabbatical. His wondrous and beautiful fashions flow to the far reaches of Equestria once more. Of particular interest are his affordable designer socks, of which five packages contain golden tickets which will allow the bearer entry to the hidden world of Fetlocks' factory. Luna is deeply enamored with Fetlocks' socks, and actively seeks a ticket. Will Luna acquire a golden ticket? Will she win Fetlocks' secret prize? What mysteries await inside of Fetlocks' Factory? Would you mind altering this? If so, thank you. If not, I understand.

Wooly Fetlocks and the Fashion Factory

Labels: Author: Pen Pal, Celestia, comedy, Crossover, Incomplete, Luna, Normal, OC Ponies, Rarity, Star-5, Story, The Great and Powerful TRIXIE

Story: Heavenly Turmoil (Update Part 4!)

[Grimdark]

Author: TheManWithTwoNames

Description: Princess Celestia struggles to distinguish reality from illusion as Discord begins to seep into her brain. But... isn't Discord still imprisoned in stone?

Heavenly Turmoil

Labels: Author: TheManWithTwoNames, Celestia, Discord, Incomplete, Luna, Star-Needed, Story, Twilight Sparkle

45 comments:

PoldekPLOctober 23, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Yay! Hayngover!
Chaos15October 23, 2011 at 5:59 PM
A TF2 fic? Color me intrigued!
FlameheartOctober 23, 2011 at 6:00 PM
well i know what what im going to be doing at work tonight ^^
theblitzOctober 23, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Second! XD
theblitzOctober 23, 2011 at 6:01 PM
DAMN IT XD
TheManWithTwoNamesOctober 23, 2011 at 6:02 PM
TF2? Why that's just crazy enough to work!
PropertyofPinkiePieOctober 23, 2011 at 6:09 PM
still no story's for me...
hypnotix666October 23, 2011 at 6:10 PM
I am still waiting for chapter 11 of "though the eyes of another pony"
AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 6:10 PM
THA HANGOVER IS ONLY ME WANT TO READ STORY
Heavy Weapons GuyOctober 23, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Through the eyes of another pony and Pony Space...
Y U NO UPDATE.
Angelo27October 23, 2011 at 6:15 PM
@hypnotix666 and here I thought I was the only person ripping his hair out in anticipation.
ShayuaHaiseOctober 23, 2011 at 6:17 PM
I'm still waiting for Paradise. A long wait indeed.
CitationNeededOctober 23, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Only like one time since these Story Update posts have been implemented has a story I've been reading actually been updated.
Seth, I swear you made this whole thing just to troll me.
Also, why do so many Grimdarks seem to get updated in here?
AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 6:19 PM
I'm currently reading Transcendance and Heavenly Turmoil, both are very good fanfics. :D
RarityfanOctober 23, 2011 at 6:32 PM
four updates I need to read... there goes two hours I should be working on homework
AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 6:33 PM
New Hangover, (WHERE'S MY MR CHOW EXPY?) New Eversleep, (fuck this universe's Celestia for studying the Neighcronomicon instead of tending to those lovely nieces of hers, Twi's dead, LET IT GO, what the fuck), NEW HEAVENLY TURMOIL ZOMFG GRIMDARK DISCORD PWNS READ THIS.

I still need to give Pony Age a try. Thedas is too awesome for a crossover not to work.
MasqueradeOctober 23, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Must... Read... ALL the updates!
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pilcharOctober 23, 2011 at 6:35 PM
transcendence updated.... THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
CelestiaOctober 23, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Only problem with story updates is I have a bad tendancy to have already bumped into the update.

And i'm already reading (or have read) everything that I would like.

I do like Equestria dailys sorting of fanfictions though, I don't think i've read anything truly awful here, everything i've disliked i've disliked becuase it wasn't to my tastes and not becuase it was badly written.
DPV111October 23, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Oh god new Metanoia. I promised I would not read further unless the implied character death at the end of the last one stayed implied.
AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Transcendence <3
SuperwalnutOctober 23, 2011 at 7:01 PM
Yes! New Fractured Lightning!
EonseigOctober 23, 2011 at 7:12 PM
Holy crap, someone who was actually excited to see me update...
bloopOctober 23, 2011 at 7:12 PM
@DPV111

Shenanigans!
Kd7sovOctober 23, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Oh, I don't doubt that most of the stuff here is good. But a lot of it - most of the [COMEDY], for instance, and crossovers with things I've never watched - is not to my taste.
GratlofaticOctober 23, 2011 at 7:52 PM
Woo! Jake Heritagu got in :)
FavoOctober 23, 2011 at 8:04 PM
So we heard Derpy likes muffins
DiseasedLemurOctober 23, 2011 at 8:10 PM
>that feel when you see an interesting fic, but get discouraged because of it's size

D:
iWuvTehPoniesOctober 23, 2011 at 8:11 PM
Still no Blood is Thicker Than Friendship? *cries*
EddmarioOctober 23, 2011 at 8:28 PM
For the people waiting for certain fanfics to update, all I gotta say is "BITCH, PLEASE!" I'm still waiting for there to be ANY update of Midnight Crusaders.
JolttixOctober 23, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Through the eyes of another pony, where art thou?
CoconutswallowOctober 23, 2011 at 9:28 PM
@Eddmario
This. So much this.
KnifeponyOctober 23, 2011 at 9:53 PM
MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC MEDIC
Jess887October 23, 2011 at 10:06 PM
@Angelo27
@hypnotix666

you guys too? Princesses damn the waiting. I wrote a fic in the wait.
moffittOctober 23, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Probably about time i get to reading Transcendence, been always looking at it.
AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 10:39 PM
Any news on 'The Creature That Came to Ponyville' from Friendly Uncle?
Wesley_WOctober 23, 2011 at 10:41 PM
WHERE THE FUUUUUUUUU IS DUSK AND DAWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
CloudstreamOctober 23, 2011 at 11:58 PM
Finally My little fortress got updated!
Pony Age: Origins seems nice, will read it.
AnonymousOctober 24, 2011 at 12:18 AM
@WesPLOOP

In "Endless Sky".......seriously, there are two fillies named that in the story.
The JackOctober 24, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Woho! Stuff I read updated! =D
ricojesOctober 24, 2011 at 1:52 AM
yo dawg we herd you liek muffins in muffins...
CátsyOctober 24, 2011 at 1:55 AM
I always wanted to read Transcendence but I always feared it'd just end with Scoots getting herself severely crippled or having to witness Rainbow Dash die in a horrible way that left Scoots traumatized.

I do need to start reading some newer ones but I'm back logged as it is. I will some day read it, 6 stars or no.
MawxterOctober 24, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Yet another update without "Through the Eyes of Another Pony". Sad face
GayettixOctober 24, 2011 at 12:24 PM
No Growing Pains :/ Meh. It seems I have to read those sad fics. Not that they aren't good, they're just so - sad.
Eversleep still gives some hope though.
SanguineOctober 24, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Cantering Death, Y U NO UPDATE?!