Author: Jake Heritagu
Description: In an attempt to make her feelings known, Fluttershy begins to persue the target of her delicate heart's affection. However, when her interest seems to be oblivious to her feelings will she find the inner strength to admit her true feelings to the one she desires? Or will disaster follow her at every turn? (Takes place 1 month after Silent Ponyville, but is not required reading material)All Links After the Break!
Google Documents
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 1
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 2
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 3
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 4
Too Shy for a Rainbow Epilogue
Deviant Art
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 1
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 2
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 3
Too Shy for a Rainbow Part 4
Too Shy for a Rainbow Epilogue
Additional Tags: Romantic, Comedy, Shipping, RainbowShy, Shenanigans
[Shipping]
Description: Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have been dating for almost half a year now and have been through a lot, both good and bad. Their relationship seems stronger then ever, until Rainbow Dash goes to the first ever Wonderbolts open audition. This could be Rainbow's chance to join the Wonderbolts and make her foalhood dream come true! But when doubt rises about being a Wonderbolt driving a wedge in her relationship, Rainbow Dash has to decide what to do and which is more important. Will she make a decision that brings happiness to both her and Fluttershy? (Takes places three months after Silent Ponyville 2)The Rainbow's Surprise Prologue
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter 1
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter 2
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter 3
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter 4
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter 5 (New!)
The Rainbow's Surprise Chapter Epilogue (New!)
Additional Tags: FlutterDash with a Romantic Twist
122 comments:
both links lead to chapter 1
ReplyDeletegonna read this soon tho n.n
at the beginning of the third line of the description you have "fine" rather than "find"
ReplyDeleteComedy shipping 1 month after a grimdark story with multiple potential endings?
ReplyDeleteGonna be interested to see how this plays out.
God, Angel is a fucking cunt. Seriously, I hate that little shit sometimes >.<
ReplyDeleteI can't tell if it's a good or bad thing that I swore when I found out it wasn't complete.
ReplyDeleteI like it, but I do wonder why it's set in the continuity established by Silent Ponyville. Will there be some sort of link to it eventually?
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, and Fluttershy is written perfectly. Also, Angel is the biggest douche other than maybe Prince Blueblood in all of Equestria. I don't normally read this kind of thing, but Silent Ponyville is pretty much my favorite fic, and I'm glad I gave this a go, and I want more.
ReplyDeleteAlso, speaking of Silent Ponyville, when the heck is beastarium going to come out for that? I want my monsters explained, lol.
Two things.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it is fun to simply watch the shining tip of the ice berg instead of having to inspect the cold and lonely underbelly.
And whenever Fluttershy uses her stare a fairy dies and a good story comes crashing down.
I can't read this.
ReplyDeleteToo messy.
Rainbow Dash Can't dress in style eating like that.
I don't really like this.. at all? o_o I like the concept, but it seems sloppily thrown together and honestly I have no idea how this got onto ED. I found spelling errors at every turn at more often than not, Rainbow Dash didn't act in-character. Good try though. XD
ReplyDelete@Ace2401
ReplyDeletehttp://jake-heritagu.deviantart.com/art/Silent-Ponyville-Beastiary-215677102
There's the beastiary, I'm sorry you missed it ^^
@Anonymous
Spelling errors? You mean ones that weren't caught by Spell checker, Google Docs and two prereaders? Please point them out to me so I can fix them, as I don't like leaving errors in a story. (Also keep in mind that if there is a misspelled word in dialogue, that that's how the character said it, not an error of spelling)
Also I did my best to make them act in character (and most people think they do), so if you have suggestions about how the characters would act to improve the story please don't hold back. I'm very good at taking criticism so please don't hold back ^_^
@Everypony Else
I know it's hard to see any connection to Silent Ponyville right now or where it's going (or even the iceberg analogy), but trust me, I don't write things without a reason~ I promise I won't disappoint you for having read this ^_^
@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteThanks, I've been looking for that.
Really interesting to see all of those, and you have a really interesting explanation for cupcakes Pinkie. Did you draw all of these, too? They're really well done.
I can't wait to see how your new story lines up with Silent Ponyville, as well. I might have an idea. . .
@Ace2401
ReplyDeleteYes, I did draw everything. As much as I love getting fanart, I draw most of everything myself. ^^
And I'm glad you're looking forward to what's next in the story! It won't take too long to see the connection, but this is also going to remain a mostly light-hearted story so I'll hope you'll still like it =3
I think Rainbow Dash wasn't in character enough. I felt sometimes Fluttershy was having a conversation with Twilight Sparkle, your choice of words for her sometimes being too formal. I couldn't help but read some of her lines in Twilight's voice. I think Fluttershy could have had more realistic dialogue too.
ReplyDeleteEverything else was fine though. I would definitely want to read more. I'll most certainly be looking out for an update.
Want part 2 NAO! Very good job!
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to say, I tried out what Fluttershy suggested on cooking and made delicious delicious pasta. Thank you fluttercook!
ReplyDelete@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteFor some reason I really like how you drew cupcakes Pinkie even though her character really creeps me out.
And I'm excited to see how it connects regardless of how it happens. I actually like light-hearted stuff more anyways. One of the many reasons I liked Silent Ponyville so much is that it cured me of Cupcakes, for lack of a better way to put it.
Oh, btw, while I was busy complimenting you I thought I may as well mention I stumbled upon the June Friend-off today and saw your story "Celestia the Maid". That was pretty great too, and totally adorable. Happy Luna is best Luna.
I guess you can consider me a fan of yours :D
This whole story just makes me want to hug Fluttershy even more than usual.
ReplyDelete@Ace2401
ReplyDeleteI LOVE having fans! You people make me feel so awesome that you are made of so much awesome :3
Thank you for enjoying my work! I promise I'll keep making stuff you can enjoy ^^
Goddamnit, why is the header image for this so damn cute
ReplyDeleteWhat magic science have you applied here to achieve this level of d'aww
WRITE FASTER. ;)
ReplyDeleteMLP fanfic cliche #9, Fluttershy is to much of a pussy to express romantic feelings.
ReplyDelete@Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony
ReplyDeleteI wanna see the rest of this list.
@Hio590
ReplyDeleteDitto. I am curious as to what number "If it moves, Rainbow will be shipped with it" is.
@Dave Mustang, the cynical Brony
ReplyDeleteFluttershy is too much of a pussy to express any feelings most of the time. Sometimes ya gotta stick to the character; if I was writing a Bible fanfic, I wouldn't have Jesus go around curb stomping Judas. (actually, I probably would, come to think of it, but that's just me) It's in the nature of boat-based freighting with Fluttershy, seems to me; though the author doesn't need to focus on it quite as much, ignoring her timidity simply to avoid cliche would be silly.
@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if you've been told this before, or if it's just me..
I LOVE your stories. I LOVED Silent Ponyville. especially the references. xD.
But whenever I see somewhere in the story it says "Pinkie Pie said, mouthing away a mile a minute" or something like this, "Her heart beating a mile a minute" or something of that similarity..I find it annoying :s.
Keep it up on this one, I'm really enjoying how this is progressing.
ReplyDeleteFlashback Dashie in this most recent part gave me a sad :( I'll forgive you for the OOC jerkiness, since she probably was a lot different as a little filly!
ReplyDelete...other than that, I'm really enjoying the story though! Keep going, please!
One thing I noticed is, in part three, it says that rarity wants to know what fluttershy is thinking, right after rarity herself saying as much. Department of Redundancy Department. Other than that, fantastic. Cant wait for chap 4, and I only wish that my knowledge of general writing wasn't right about what is to come... (but even then, it will still work out... * continues to work out all possible events*
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see another update. Little curious why Fluttershy tore up that letter...got an idea though...
ReplyDeleteDon't let the anons get to ya, haters gonna hate. All you can do is love and tolerate the shit out of them.
Hmm. I love this. how many chapters will there be?
ReplyDeleteI hope this ends well ^.^ One of the best stories i ever read so far.
Yay/Awwwwww it's the last one! Welp, better save it for tomorro- oh what the heck. Might as well read it now.
ReplyDelete"Wait... THAT'S what "girlfriends" do? Celestia... I've been flying too much!"
ReplyDelete-Rainbow Dash, after the third date
And then the rest takes place in my mind, and has no place on this blog.
what the fu-
ReplyDeletewhat happened at the end of that? what.
FlutterYay for Lunafyre's picture!!
ReplyDeleteI knew her work would get here!
Have to let her know!
Massive "DAAAAAAAAWWWWWW" at the end there. That was extra cute.
ReplyDeleteI gotta tell ya, I'm a pretty adamant shipper of AppleDash, but this, this is good in my book.
I really liked this story, too bad it was a bit short.
ReplyDelete@LosthopeOfDusk
ReplyDeleteI agree.. I to really enjoyed this, It's kind of sad it come to the end so soon!
Minor spoilers
ReplyDeleteHmm. I rather enjoy the notion of Rainbow never having thought about anypony romantically. But considering that, giving her a bit more time to think about stuff would have made more sense.
Still, not bad all in all. Decent fic.
I liked it. Need more Rainbowshy/PinkieShy/ Anyone else who has a stark contrast to FS. I love a good contrasting pair.
ReplyDeleteI can't help myself here.
ReplyDeleteD'AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
also, Pinkie being able to look into somepony's eyes and tell what they're feeling is awesome somehow.
@Brony Neumo
ReplyDeleteThat's pretty much my reaction also. I'm normally not big into having Rainbow Dash hook up with Fluttershy, since they seem too different. But this was a pretty good story.
Also, I really liked the ending. With having Dash going into the relationship just to give it a try rather than it turning out that she's been in love with Fluttershy also.
erm, did I miss the comedy tag somewhere? Other than Rarity's teachings, this almost seemed like a sad story.
ReplyDeleteAfter the amazing ride that was Silent Ponyville, I was all in for this one. I was certainly not disappointed.
ReplyDeleteI do sort of see what some of the other comments have pointed out, about the dialogue from Flutter and Dash seeming kinda off...but for the life of me, I couldn't put a hoof on exactly how it could be improved, and it didn't bug me too much. And Pinkie Sense? Win.
All said, would totally read again.
Daww... I loved this. <3 Rainbowshy FTW! Just wish there would be a continuation. Wonder how Rarity would react if/when she found out just who Fluttershy was talking about. x3
ReplyDelete@Oleetar
ReplyDeleteEheh...well the stark contrast to the flashbacks was supposed to make the ridiculousness of what's happening in the story comedic. That was the idea. I probably failed at this as this was my first time trying to write comedy ^^;;
I'm glad everyone liked the story though. I did my best to keep it both in character and interesting to read, while giving nods at my other fic. I probably will write up an epilogue once I get a chance too.
I love all the comments too, read every single one! I'm so happy my fics have been so well received and I hope you all look forward to more ^_^
D'Awwwwwsome
ReplyDeleteThat is all.
This story must never end!! We Need MOAAAARR!
ReplyDeleteAwww... It's over... I hope you continue this universe (Silent Ponyville > Too Shy for a Rainbow > ???), it's a really good one. ^_^
ReplyDeleteDat ending.
ReplyDeleteDAT. ENDING.
LIKE. A. BOSS.
YES!
ReplyDeleteTHERE'S AN EPILOGUE!
Well that was nice.
This story made me d'awww ^^
ReplyDeleteThis story made my heart burst a little bit more every chapter I read.
ReplyDeleteLoved it through and through.
yay~
ReplyDeleteOkay, Pinkie's been covered, Then Rainbow and Fluttershy, Who next, Applejack? Twilight? Rarity? ...Luna?
I'll be honest I wasn't that keen on chapter 4, so a massive well done with the epilogue for bringing things back beautifully and tying the whole story up nicely. Massive thumps up!
ReplyDeleteHeh. Ok, I'm gonna be honest here... That epilogue really didn't add much to the story. Its well written, somewhat cute, but... The story just doesn't need it. It doesn't ruin it or anything either, so its not as if it has to go or anything. But yeah... The story would have been pretty much the same without it.
ReplyDelete@Baree
ReplyDeleteWell that IS the point of an Epilogue you know XD
@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteIf you say so. I like to think of a way to tie up some final loose ends, or maybe a final mini chapter. Anyway, it hardly matters I guess ^^.
@Baree
ReplyDeleteWho says I won't tie up loose ends? I always am aware of questions and curiosities I leave my readers with. As a single experience this story works out for those looking for what the story offers. But as a whole, its going to go further with more that I bring out for those who enjoy the collective of my works <3
So, Does that mean you'll be doing something the rest of the mane 6? ...Does Twilight go mental from still having Pinkie's dreams in her memory or something? lol
ReplyDelete@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteThe epilogue was cute. It's Lightheartedness was a good contrast to the sympathy and heartache conveyed in chapter 4. Loved this story, as well as Silent Ponyville. I hope to see more from you soon. Great job!
@Anonymous
That would make for a very interesting story concept.
AUGH the diabeetus in the epilogue! Must...click...post...HHHHHNNNNNGGGGGG
ReplyDeleteSigh, I was hoping for some more, hmm, saucy. But very well written and I enjoyed it the whole way through.
ReplyDeleteI like the fic for one reason: finally, a pony responded to a love confession with something other than complete exuberance. It seems like every single time it goes: "I lub you!" "OMG I lub you too!" Nice to see a twist sometimes.
ReplyDeleteSigh, I was hoping for something more... Saucy.
ReplyDelete@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteOh, no, don't get me wrong. I wasn't hinting at anything with that, I didn't mean to say you had loose ends to tie up or anything. Just stating what I think a prologue is. And I could very well be mistaken about that, too.
This was adorable! Loved it! Encore! *claps her hooves*
ReplyDeleteD'aww.
ReplyDeleteAhh, haha! <3 This was adorable. I thought everyone was pretty in character. Dash does seem like she might be kind of oblivious to the romance feelings. I cracked up that she wrote down "Hugging?" on the list with a question mark.
ReplyDeleteI would like to counter some of the "dialogue seemed out of character" comments. I think given the established relationship, plus the additional info given in the story, a unique interaction and dialogue is highly warranted. It is hard to do, and thus often not done except in unique circumstances(twilight and Princes C for example)
ReplyDeleteDash seems to treat Fluttershy a little different based on their history and that is what makes the story believable in this case.
P.S. Brony Points for those who read longer points, keep up the good work, and the epilogue bumped this from a 4 to a 5 star in my book.
Bit late, but I figured I'd read through these (didn't take too long I suppose, chose a late hour though xD)
ReplyDeleteI give ya a solid hoof up on this ;) (Too tired to consider being enthusiastic as feck, apologies)
I liked what I read, made for a great shippin' without being too mushy or too "hardcore" (while I'll admit I like both sides >_> <_< xD)
A great read, epi was great, 5/5 for me ;)
~Red
-Still checks the comments here on occasion-
ReplyDeleteYay! I'm glad everyone is still enjoying this story! X3
@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteLol, I still am subscribed to this comment thread. So I may as well say this because I never get tired of saying it: Jake, YOU MONSTER! You write this fic and the first couple of chapters of Silent Ponyville 2 to make FlutterDash my OTP and then you write that scene with Rainbow Dash, and the mirror/window thing, the Dark Creature and the blood splatters? T_T
JAKE, YOU MONSTER!!!!!
@Jake Heritagu Enjoying it? That thing was AWESOME. I hate when fics cut you off as soon as they manage to admit their love to each other, and the epilogue took care of that well enough. If you can put it together right then I'd love it if more was added.
ReplyDelete@banannagram
ReplyDeleteActually, more was added, because this story was actually a set up for Silent Ponyville 2. If you haven't read any of the Silent Ponyville saga other than this, then all I have to say is GO GO GO NOW!
Flutterdash is quickly becoming my favorite shipping, and I was actually opposed to shipping just last week. I just can't find enough of them. Awesome job, author! And anyone have any recommendations?
ReplyDelete@Zamoonda
ReplyDeleteFor starters, see my comment right above yours, and as for more FlutterDash (which there isn't nearly enough of) read Off the Edge of the Map. That's a truly epic story.
Also, FlutterDash grew on me when I previously didn't like shipping either. XD
@Ace2401 Aah, cheers! Just searched for it in google plus site:equestriadaily.com, so found it. Gonna search for Silent Ponyville right after. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteAnyone else think Angel looks totally hilarious in that pic up there?
ReplyDelete... You give my Flutters a happy ending, or I SWEAR I'll buck your sorry flank so hard you'll kiss the moon!
ReplyDelete(Translation: You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the good work! (Though you DO need a pre-reader desperately! Seeing quite a few wrong words, like past instead of passed, ect.))
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
THIS MUST CONTINUE. NOOOOW.
ReplyDelete"Complete" tag?
ReplyDeleteI think NOT
Anyways, hoping for some goofy wacky ending that explains everything, so RD is forgiven for being kissed, and FS is forgiven for spying.
If that DOESN'T happen, someone's gonna pay
@spell nexus I feel the same way I want this to continue, a small kiss isn't enough to satisfy me or anyone else, lets move the story forward a bit into some...hmm idk as Ranbowdash would saw 'Cuddleing?' *Writes down on list with a menacing grin.*
ReplyDeletesay*
ReplyDeleteIt should be against EQD rules to write about Fluttershy crying. At least not without [Sad] and [Dark] tags to warn us.
ReplyDeleteSo Jake, plan to continue Disgaea: Disharmony of Friendship?
ReplyDelete@DPV111
ReplyDeleteEventually yes. Sadly everything on my mind is Silent Ponyville right now, with the game in full production and all the fan art and side stories.
I will finish the Disgaea crossover, however it'll have to wait till its on the fore-front of my mind and I can do it justice ^^;
@Jake Heritagu
ReplyDeleteThat's cool. As long as it's not abandoned. I really love some of these crossovers and suffered enough heartbreak with Twilight's Final Termina apparently being dead after 3 godly chapters.
Ok everyone who believes that RD cheats on Fluttershy raises his or her hand. None? No surprise. The story itself isn’t bad, but I think it would’ve been better if Fluttershy and Rarity just continued to follow RD without starting to think that she’s a cheater.
ReplyDeleteThis kind of plot has been done to death. It’s one of those stories where it looks like that the friend/mate is unfaithful but in the end he/ she is not. Sure maybe you’re playing with our expectations and it turns out that RD is indeed a cheating bastard and had a threesome with Lyra and Bonbon. However, this story takes place after “Too shy for a Rainbow” and “Silent Ponyville 2”, so that’s not going to happen.
Personally I’m more interested in the reason for RD’s strange behavior. I guess sit has something to do with the filly FS wants and how RD can continue their relation while begin with the Wonderbolts. Perhaps she went to the official fanon lesbian couple for some relationship advices? But why did she work in Carrot Tops garden? And why did Rose kiss her? I’m curious to hear RD explanation.
How goes the progress on the rainbow's surprise chapter 3?
ReplyDelete@Yonasomun
ReplyDeleteWell, be happy to know that the 'maybe cheating' plotpoint isn't the focus of the story! Its actually just the helpful set-up to what happens next X3
I hope to finish Chapter 3 very soon, and you can see what I mean~
Oh mai gawd dis is da bestest moast adooreble fan fikshoon evah!!
ReplyDelete*Sighs* Should have called it when one had a chance...
ReplyDelete*Waits for next chapter*
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
@The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor
ReplyDeleteI'm the new official pre-reader! How'd I do guys? :3
so why exactly did you decide it was time to make me shed manly tears with part 3?
ReplyDeletebecause it was helpful, looong overdue
d'aww
ReplyDeleteI read both, the first one I did have a problem with what Dash said to Fluttershy at the end. It just didn't make sense, That is like me turning to my roommate saying, I dont like you more than just as a friend, but since you like me lets give it a shot. There has to be something, even if its just a slight attraction for anything to go forth. Nevertheless, decently written.
ReplyDeleteNow, after reading The Rainbow's Surprise, it was like a different author. The story was much more engaging, better written, and held my interest so that there was no time to stop and think about the occasional spelling/word use issues. And yes, I did have to stop at the end of chapter three before I read the last part, as I knew what was happening, to shed some manly tears of happiness. well played!
Looks like Dash made up her mind to join the Wonderbolts(she is probably a sure bet to get in) so be interesting to see the rest/or third story about the troubles of being apart. Defiantly looking forward the next installment! Keep writting, your getting better and better.
@Ryllian Dash
ReplyDeleteToo be fair on Too Shy for a Rainbow, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy had quite the history even before anything that happened in the show, and Rainbow Dash wasn't attracted to anyone, period, but didn't want to hurt Fluttershy who had been harboring feelings for Rainbow Dash for a long time.
And it sounds like you haven't read Silent Ponyville 2. That adds so much to both stories you really are doing yourself a major injustice by reading these without reading that.
@Ryllian Dash
ReplyDeleteOh, and on that note, Silent Ponyville 3 is the next story in this continuity.
Just go here: http://silentponyville.deviantart.com/
You won't regret it.
SET PHASERS TO D'AWWWW.
ReplyDeleteSeriously, that first story is freakin adorable.
I'll read Rainbow's Surprise once it's finished (I always liked reading fanfics in one sitting), but amazing work, Mr. Heritagu.
I'll definitely be checking out Silent Ponyville now!
@MPerce
ReplyDeleteRead Silent Ponyville 1 and 2 before you read Rainbow's Surprise. Silent Ponyville 2 is really required reading for it.
So the surprise was marriage proposal? I was so sure that it would’ve something do to with the foal Fluttershy wants. So it was unexpected and romantic. And speaking about romantic: Rartiy did a good job by making RD “pretty” for Fluttershy. She really knows what her friends like. It also speaks for RD that she was willing to endure the “girlyfying” for her marefriend.
ReplyDelete“Rainbow Dash always dresses in style. Rainbow Dash always dresses in style.”
Uhm sorry where was I?
However, I don’t like the explanation for the kiss. Ok I guess Rose wanted to help RD earn the money for her gift and that’s the reason why she “hired” her instead of just asking a friend or relative for help. But what are the odds that they are rehearsing a kissing scene in the middle of the street, at the very moment Rarity and Fluttershy spying on them?
Wow... Nice. Serenity? That's almost the exact same name as Trevor's name for Flutter's daughter! XD Still, not too surprising! Yay for happy Flutters! *Squee*
ReplyDelete~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
How can Fluttershy geht a foal with RD ???
ReplyDelete@MaSc: obviously they're going to adopt one -_-
ReplyDelete@Kilrha
ReplyDeleteTurkey baster...But thats not the point here :P
@Jake Heritagu
I did notice some gramatical snaffu's, but nothing that I bothered to notate. I figured it was either writing style (which is great IMO) or simply my mind not getting it.
Your ability to add in so many layers of emotion and emotional variant was well done. I will say that I saw through the "is she cheating on me" plot twist even before it developed based solely on the fact that the element of Loyalte is incapable of such an act. However, having it add to the drama was still great, and I will say I was thinking of alot of things for the reason to make the money BUT buying a ring...So Good on ya Mate! Got me on that one.
*brohoof*
awwww... i never cry at weddings...until now
ReplyDeleteNot sure if incredibly sad at last paragraph, or happy that there'll be more.
ReplyDeleteI'll just go with d'aww cos Ilovedthe story as a whole :3
I love love love this saga you are doing between all your different fics.
ReplyDeleteTo say the last paragraph was engaging would be an understatement, ¡thank you!
ReplyDeleteIn my eyes the wedding chapters are certainly an improvement over the previous ones. Therefore I’m glad that the story didn’t end right after the reveal of the big misunderstanding. The wedding scene itself is very good and it’s nice to see how the rest of the Mane Six and the CMC involved. And there’s Lance…. Urge to kill rises… but I like the scene, although wonder why he had a sudden change of heart. RD understandably still doesn’t like him, I wonder what will happen if Lance wants to see his grandchild one day.
ReplyDeleteSo there’s something wrong with Ponyville. Let me guess, it was built above an old buffalo burial ground? So who’s the next to end up in Silent Ponyville? Luna seems like a very likely candidate after all the stuff she went through in the last 1.000 years but after Lesson Zero Twilight Sparkle herself could be an interesting choice, too. Well time will tell.
GOD DANG IT SINCE I READ THE ENDING YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER FANFIC AND I DONT KNOW THE NAME *BANGS HEAD ON PILLOW* WHY ARE BRONIES DOING THIS TO MEEEEEE!?!?
ReplyDeleteI love this story.
ReplyDeleteI love Silent Ponyville as well, especially the canon endings. I also love how in the 2nd one, all the endings that were back in the library all had "Don't use that spell ever again!"
I like these stories because they give me a break in between the horrors of Silent Hill/Ponyville. They're nice, fun, and just well-written.
Just felt I should point out that chapter 2 of story 2 mentions a piece of paper that Rainbow was holding in her hands. In her HANDS!?
ReplyDeleteI loved this story so much.
ReplyDeleteI hope you make more of these!
The ending slightly ruined it for me. I'll have to keep an eye out for your next fic.
ReplyDeleteIs this story going to be continued somehow?
ReplyDelete@VoThall
ReplyDeleteIt already has, these stories are part of the Silent Ponyville Chronicles.
Yes i know but i mean Rainbow and Fluttershy story. I have already red Silent Ponyville 1&2. Btw these stories are awesome ;P
ReplyDelete@VoThall
ReplyDeleteWell, SP3 is ongoing right now, and Jake's supposed to get back to those two eventually.
OK, thank You ;)
ReplyDeleteAmazing stories. SP 1&2 were amazing, but my favorite HAS to be The Rainbow's Surprise. Loved every scene. One thing that angers me and others too I'm sure though... WHY DID YOU HAVE TO PUT A CLIFF HANGER!? Brilliant, but I nearly had a fit!
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