Friday, July 1, 2011

Story: The Search for Bighoof

[Adventure][Comedy] Hey! Cheerilee finally got a story!  About time. 

Author: Lucres
Description: On a Filly Scout camping trip in the Whitetail Woods,
Scootaloo is determined to prove she’s not a chicken. In order to do
so, she sets out on her own to find and capture the legendary creature
known only as “bighoof”. Unfortunately, she’s about to find out that
the Whitetail Woods can be more dangerous than their serene appearance
suggests. Can Fluttershy bring her back safe, or will something else
find her first? Also, Cheerilee completely loses her mind!
In Search of Bighoof

Additional Tags: Episode-style, Scouting, Cryptids, Skepticism, Scootalove

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wat

Sunset Rose said...

I have it saved. The concept sounds interesting.

Homfrog said...

Scootaloo! Scoot-scootaloo!

Chris said...

Insane Cheerilee is excellent. Also, I really, REALLY appreciate your restraint in not throwing a teaser/reveal onto the end--I find those kinds of 'gotchas' only detract from stories.

zorinlynx said...

This story makes me <3 Fluttershy sooo much. :)

Baree said...

Heh. I'm glad we're seeing more of these one shot normal stories. Not to dark, and rather light-hearted in places. I like. Well written, touching here and there. Good stuff. I didn't really buy Scoot's second running off, that seemed a bit forced. But that is a minor complaint. Over all, really enjoyed it, nicely done. (Yes, copy pasted this from my DA comment. Sue me :P)

Anonymous said...

Excellent! I could see this being a real episode, minus the poop probably.

Lucres said...

@Anonymous I swear I didn't intend to write a story that involved so much pooping, it just turned out that way!

Conner Cogwork said...

Cryptids, Ponies, Epic pegusai and freaked-out Cheerilee? Lots of win contained in this one.

Anonymous said...

Absolutely Wonderful

Delta Pangaea said...

It's finally happened Cherilee! You've LOST your MIND!

Just like Zecora fics, Cherilee fics are insta-read on my list.

KoshLovesYou said...

Adorable, and with a show-like message! Great chance to star one of my fave CMC, too.

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