• Story: Silent Assassin - The Final Word

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    [Crossover][Grimdark] A Pony Hitman crossover, who would have thought?

    Author: Lios
    Description: One might think that not many people in Equestria have need of getting someone "removed." None know the contrary to that better than the greatest assassin in the world, known only as "47."
    Silent Assassin - The Final Word

    Additional Tags: Violence, Stealth, Murder, Assassination
    Wednesday, June 15, 2011 op
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    19 comments:

    1. Pinkamina Diane PieJune 15, 2011 at 11:11 PM

      Sounds pretty good to me.

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    2. Ivan2294June 15, 2011 at 11:16 PM

      ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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    3. Ivan2294June 15, 2011 at 11:17 PM

      *Sees Pinkiamina Diane Pie*

      ..........Okay WHAT THE FU-Ah forget it.

      I'm starting to wonder if Ponies taking over the world is such a good idea....

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    4. Roman500June 15, 2011 at 11:20 PM

      That was better than I expected a hitman/pony fic to be like. Good job, looking forward to more.

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    5. PrideJune 15, 2011 at 11:21 PM

      Huh, I appear to have been included in this story.

      In a very nasty way.

      I approve. Wholeheartedly.

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    6. AnonymousJune 15, 2011 at 11:23 PM

      @Ivan2294
      If you mean the picture, it is Fluttershy, not Pinkie Pie.

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    7. AnonymousJune 15, 2011 at 11:25 PM

      Great story.

      Oh hey look new banner. Happy Luna Night everpony.

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    8. Ivan2294June 15, 2011 at 11:26 PM

      @Anonymous

      I mean the person who made the first comment.

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    9. Pinkamina Diane PieJune 15, 2011 at 11:44 PM

      @Ivan2294

      I was being sarcastic. Sadly though, I have not yet found a way to type sarcastically. But the picture is good, if kinda creepy.

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    10. VelvetJune 16, 2011 at 12:18 AM

      I'm in too, and I seem to have quite the malicious streak!

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    11. AnonymousJune 16, 2011 at 2:52 AM

      Good story. Punctuation's a little sketchy at times, but it never becomes a major issue.

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    12. RickJune 16, 2011 at 5:38 AM

      Quick question before I read this, is Agent 47 in this? Because that would be pretty damn cool.

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    13. LiosJune 16, 2011 at 7:20 AM

      @Rick

      Of course! What kind of Hitman crossover would this be if he weren't?

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    14. ToonNinjaJune 16, 2011 at 7:57 AM

      VERY entertaining.

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    15. MelodiaJune 16, 2011 at 9:51 AM

      Ok so normally I wouldn't read a grimdark-tagged story, but this one kinda seemed possibly interesting...

      ...and I guess it was. But I don't really feel it's much of an MLP fanfiction. With very few changes one could write the story and have it apply to humans. None of the canon characters are here (outside of one /possible/ hidden one), and hell the fact that the protagonist and his victims were all male made it even more detached.

      It's not a bad story, and while it's better than many so-called fanfics I've seen where it's an original piece masquerading as one (plus of course, it's still a fic for Hitman, I would wager)....I dunno.

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    16. LiosJune 16, 2011 at 10:14 AM

      @Melodia

      I've been thinking if this fic gets popular enough I'll make future 'missions' involving canon characters, with obvious targets such as Blueblood and Gilda.

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    17. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 1:06 AM

      I would have thought he'd have a bar code cutie mark...

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    18. Midnight ShadowJune 17, 2011 at 1:58 AM

      the estate of the late, lamented midnight shadow wish to offer their condolences to you, the reader, for the sheer amount of awesome you'll never, ever read due to this foul, heinous crime.

      *stirring music*

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    19. Super Scattman.June 22, 2011 at 6:29 PM

      wtf is the picture a crossover with?

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