[Grimdark][Sad][Random] It's pirates! It's ponies! It's
Author: Squall Chaser, aka "Blunder Dolt"
Description: Twilight Sparkle is just trying to sleep, after falling ill to a case of dragon-pox. Unfortunately Pinkie Pie won't let her rest. She keeps going on about Pirate's in Sky Mirror Lake. She manages to convince Rainbow Dash and the two try and get the other four to believe them. Unfortunately Dash and Pinkie have a history of playing practical jokes. What will happen when the pirates descend upon an unsuspecting Ponyville and capture the bearers of the Elements of Harmony?Corsairs, Cannons, and Colts Part 1
Corsairs, Cannons, and Colts Part 2
Corsairs, Cannons And Colts Part 3
Corsairs, Cannons And Colts Part 4 (New!)
Additional Tags: Pirates, Dragon-Pox, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Boat.
33 comments:
La Barata, The Drunken Pony Pirate, approves of this fanfic.
ReplyDelete>sad
ReplyDelete>grimdark
>main 6 get kidnapped
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Yeah, I'm working on Part 2 right now, it's going to get a little wild, and a little more grim-dark.
ReplyDeleteBy the way Good job with the pic on this one, I love Monkey Island!
ReplyDeleteNoooooo!
ReplyDeleteA predatory privateer pony has put my punny pot-boiler in peril by possibly purloining the piratical persons who previously would purely peruse my parable :'(
I look forward to reading, although I'll have to be careful not to steal* too many ideas!
-Pineapple
*I meant "pay homage" to! Honest gov! You can trust me, I'm a pirate!
To be blunt, you really need an editor or pre-reader of some sort. It's an interesting idea, but there are enough grammatical errors and awkward sentences that the fic is really bogged down, unfortunately. Commas, especially, seem to be in short supply.
ReplyDeleteYeah sorry about that, I haven't actually written anything like this in a while. I don't really have any one I know to edit this.
ReplyDeleteI'll work a little harder on the 'edit' step next time.
To come and see my pirate pony,
ReplyDeleteAt the top of someones story.
Does so greatly please,
That you may just have heard my squees.
At this drawing thing I am still so new,
But to see it here does pride imbue.
So now I guess it does behoove,
To go practice and my art improve.
Good story so far, but there some minor grammatical and spelling errors.
ReplyDeleteAgain, sorry about the errors there guys. It's hard to get someone to pre-read my bronie work.
ReplyDeleteDid I just misspell brony?
ReplyDeleteDat picture, monkey islands Guybrush Threepwood refence FTW!
ReplyDeleteHuh, pic changed?
ReplyDeleteWell, my pic for a while in the light did linger
ReplyDeleteEven if it's in sight no longer.
It may have confused an editor,
My pony pirate mariner.
It was drawn for an artist training day,
And just happened to mach the theme again today.
So someone might have thought,
That at seeing early entries they'd been caught.
But it was just by chance,
That a pony with a sword I'd drawn in advance.
@Blunderdoltcomics
ReplyDeleteThat was a mistake; there was a bit of a mix up over at HQ. I went and changed it back to what it was, because frankly I like Guybrush pony better. Sorry for the confusion!
Wow, thanks for the kind ratings guys, I'm working on Part 2, it's going to take a bit.
ReplyDelete@fetchbeer
ReplyDeleteBy the way in case I forgot to mention earlier, nice pic Fetchbeer.
KOL?
ReplyDeletepicture=epic
What is KOL?
ReplyDeletePart 2 is on it's way! HUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH... yay. I'm sorry, in advance, for any spelling or other errors that may occur while reading. I hope this doesn't affect your enjoyment of this story.
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ReplyDeletePart 3 will be along soon. I'm taking a short break for Midsummer. It starts on June 19th and ends the 23rd. Thanks again, for your kind remarks on my first work.
ReplyDeleteWhew, managed to get Part 3 on its way. I decided to pull a late-nighter and finish it.
ReplyDeleteChapter 4, is being written as we speak! Whew man, Midsummer was fun! Even though I thought of taking a break from writing, I wrote a Ditzy story between chapters! I hope it gets the pre-readers' seal of approval this time!
ReplyDeleteAwesome story so far, the pirate theme is refreshing.
ReplyDeleteGlad that Firebrand, going to be interesting to see what happens to him. I like the relationship that's being developed between him and Storm too. It kinda makes Storm a sympathetic villain because she has to keep up her image despite her personal feelings.
Okay, it's awful pun time.
ReplyDelete*Ahem*
Shouldn't there be a "shipping" tag on this?
*Ducks rocks*
Oh, wow... That is a bad pun... I wonder, did anyone get the Red Vs. Blue quote?
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ReplyDeleteOh yeah, Firebrand is to awesome to kill off! That name was totally improv, but I think I'll keep him around, who knows things may turn out good for him *Wink* *Wink*.
Is..is the story DEAD?!
ReplyDeleteIt's not dead, I just haven't had time to write much lately, it'll pick up again soon. Nice to have a concerned fan though.
ReplyDeleteLove this, and I have only ONE thing that you need to do......
ReplyDeletePLEASE
TYPE
FASTER!!
That's all.
I'm working on Chapter 5... I'll have a random Pinkie thing before then though.. Check out my facebook page.
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