Description: How did Fluttershy acquire her “Freaky knowledge o’ sewin’!” as Applejack called it? The answer is simple, Rarity taught her! Yet a winter full of struggle takes its toll on the two and brings their friendship to the breaking point.So Being What We Sow When We Sow Part 1
So Being What We Sow When We Sow Part 2
So Being What We Sow When We Sow Part 3
So Being What We Sow When We Sow Part 4
15 comments:
Loved this, manlytears.jpg
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty damn good. Very relatable if you've ever had pets.
ReplyDeleteThis one is even better than the last one.
ReplyDeleteThis is great,though it made me cry.
ReplyDeleteUnlike some of the stories labelled sad.
Wow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteThis is head and shoulders above the average fanfic in so many ways. The plot is amazing, and you can really tell that the author has real experience caring for wild birds. On a technical level, it was very well done, with grammar and spelling mistakes being extremely rare and hardly noticeable when they occurred. The characters and dialog were very believable and well-written. And the ending was so touching!
This is undoubtedly one of the best fanfics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I wouldn't change a thing about it.
I enjoyed it. You do a great job with the development and you integrated the actual show into your story perfectly. The style is very mature and you come off as very knowledgeable about your subject, and most importantly it all flowed well.
ReplyDelete5 stars if I've ever seen them, brony.
Why is this guy's stuff so good?
ReplyDeleteI'm worried he might stop, which would be a tragedy, because it's really really good. I read alot of fiction, not just fanfics, and I would push 90% of it out of the way just to read more of his work.
How does some one with two stories, shoot up on my favorite author list so easily?
I liked the way you weaved it into canon without making it intrusive.
ReplyDeleteThe dramatization was believable and not over-the-top as well, and it brought out the characters in a fashion fitting of their personalities.
I enjoyed reading this work.
Loved how you portrayed Fluttershy. Demure, quiet, but not weak. She fought to do what she knew she had to do, when all hope seemed lost. I like her SO much more now, and I appreciate the attention to detail you had when tying in Rarity and her sewing, as well as the beginning of their eventual friendship.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
So sad what we sad wen we sad...I'm sad.
ReplyDeleteEasily one of the best fanfics I've read to date, if not the.
ReplyDeleteThat was a masterpiece. Like Jank said, it shows Fluttershy's quiet strength.
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That was an amazing story, the best Fluttershy fanfic I've read so far!
ReplyDeleteHo Lee Shit. Dat Ending. I absolutely adore the way three episodes were wrapped together into one story, and all to bring out a whole new moral. I just...I...ALL MY LOVE!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous god no guy sensei-Neji stabs self with kunai dies
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