• Story: Apples and Acres (Update Chapter 6!)

    by
     
    [Grimdark] Applejack time!  Another one not for the faint of heart!

    Author: Anon Writepony
    Description: Applejack's descent into depression and madness, as well as the effects it has on her family. 
    Apples and Acres Chp. 1-3
    Apples And Acres Chp. 4-6 (New!)
    Tuesday, March 22, 2011 op
    Labels: , , , , , ,
    Open in app
    Share This! Facebook Share Twitter Share

    44 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:26 PM

      I wanna read it, but it says I need permission...

      ReplyDelete
    2. Anonymous WriteponyFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:31 PM

      @Anonymous

      Author of the story here. Try this link. I think OP must've copied the link from the address bar instead of the "share" link.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LOK1VCif5wF2IYJU708_yfQPy5J44m_2dDSmIQAthrw/edit?hl=en&authk
      ey=CPvErpsG

      ReplyDelete
    3. SethistoFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:43 PM

      @Anonymous

      There are a few people in there reading it now, I am not sure. Maybe try creating a google account.

      ReplyDelete
    4. SethistoFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:45 PM

      @Anonymous
      Actually I just logged out to see if I could still access it without being logged into google, and still was able to enter. Were you the same person having this trouble with the other story earlier?

      ReplyDelete
    5. SethistoFebruary 8, 2011 at 3:08 AM

      @Sethisto

      I found a bunch of your posts in the spam folder for some reason, I fixed them.

      ReplyDelete
    6. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:50 AM

      i cant get to it either

      ReplyDelete
    7. Anonymous WriteponyFebruary 8, 2011 at 7:13 PM

      Edited viewing settings. Hopefully everything is sorted out now. Sorry about that.

      ReplyDelete
    8. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 5:38 PM

      ...I just want to ask, will there be a happy ending here? I don't like to read Grimdark, because it tends to ruin the show for me sometimes... This story is really good, but I just want to know if it all ends in tragedy. Hope you can tell me...

      ReplyDelete
    9. Anon WriteponyFebruary 13, 2011 at 5:44 PM

      @Anonymous

      I wish I could tell you, but doing so would ruin the suspense and the story overall. I can tell you that there are various high points throughout the story while accompanied by those low ones that all grimdark stories have. Whether or not you want to hop along for the whole ride is up to you.

      Glad you enjoy it so far!

      ReplyDelete
    10. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:52 PM

      @Anon Writepony
      Well, I think I will stick with it. I mean if worst comes to worst I dont like the ending, and that's all. Plus a definitive end will actually help me a bit as my mind tends to wonder quite a bit, especially on these sort of things. I try to complete unfinished stories in my head, and don't always like the results and get hung up on them, but a real end helps me get over it.

      Also, I do quite like the story. Some of the things Applejack says in the newest part seem like the lyrics to a song almost... Hm. While im here, would you mind if I try to do that? Make some song lyrics to it? It would be a great song, about her growing insanity...

      Oh my, I have rambled, haven't I? Sorry about that!

      ReplyDelete
    11. MasterMaskFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:36 PM

      @Anonymous
      So I guess no one wants to hear the song? I already wrote a bit...
      Oh well. I'll just wait until the story ends, then. I can keep it to myself. Can't wait for the next part, man.

      Btw, I have a name now!

      ReplyDelete
    12. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 1:08 AM

      Some parts seem like how I imagine what it would be like to actually start losing you mind. I sort'a picture the whole "song lyrics" part as being part of the delusion, although I may be wrong about it. Good stuff. I await the next chapter.

      ReplyDelete
    13. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 2:30 AM

      I love this! Can't wait for an update. <3

      ReplyDelete
    14. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2011 at 8:12 AM

      Seconded!

      ReplyDelete
    15. CottonmouthMarch 6, 2011 at 1:54 AM

      Been waiting for this update! Good to see this fic is still being worked on.

      ReplyDelete
    16. Anon WriteponyMarch 6, 2011 at 2:22 AM

      @Cottonmouth

      Glad you like it! Sorry it took so long to get the update out; I'll definitely work harder to make new chapters release as soon as I possibly can.

      ReplyDelete
    17. AnonymousMarch 6, 2011 at 3:47 AM

      Older Applebloom x Older Spike?.......


      THIS IS WHAT I HAVE WANTED ALL OF MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE. DEAR GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.

      YES YES YES. OH MY GOD ITS SO GOOD.

      Can't wait for next chapter. Thank you for writing.

      ReplyDelete
    18. AnonymousMarch 6, 2011 at 5:03 AM

      I've been waiting for this! Thanks for continuing, keep it coming!

      ReplyDelete
    19. AnonymousMarch 6, 2011 at 8:29 AM

      The waiting will soon be over...

      ReplyDelete
    20. NaxtsMarch 6, 2011 at 8:13 PM

      Wow. I'm in awe. This is a really good story! I just can't wait to see the next part, this story is just so suspenceful. Its scary almost.

      ReplyDelete
    21. AnonymousMarch 6, 2011 at 9:27 PM

      I'm reading too much grimdark D:

      This is very good. I love the whole *spoiler for people who haven't read any of it and are lame enough to check the comments first* part!

      ReplyDelete
    22. GigMarch 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM

      I'm really liking this story. To be honest, I prefer the psychological aspects of a grimdark fanfic rather than gore and violence. This is doing a perfect job of being dark and suspenseful without incorporating brutality. I'm looking forward to the rest of this.

      ReplyDelete
    23. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 11:51 AM

      I like this story but with so many characters speaking with a harsh Southern dialect, it is kind of hard to read.

      ReplyDelete
    24. CrimeofKickingMarch 16, 2011 at 10:53 PM

      wow... Next to Normal and MLP.
      Two great tastes and whatnot!

      Great story so far.

      ReplyDelete
    25. CottonmouthMarch 22, 2011 at 10:37 PM

      I don't trust Doctors, and I don't think I should trust this one either.

      We'll see. Good job and I'm looking forward to chapter 7.

      ReplyDelete
    26. Hikuro14March 22, 2011 at 10:59 PM

      Looks to be a promising story. I normally don't read grimdark stories, but this one has potential.

      ReplyDelete
    27. EponaMarch 23, 2011 at 12:21 AM

      crosses fingers for appledash ship next chapters**

      ReplyDelete
    28. AnonymousMarch 23, 2011 at 1:15 PM

      Did you really have to call the doctor "Madden"? Now I can't get that freakin' video out of my head whenever I read this story.

      ReplyDelete
    29. StahiMarch 23, 2011 at 2:31 PM

      @Anonymous

      aeiou

      ReplyDelete
    30. NaxtsMarch 23, 2011 at 6:00 PM

      I've been waiting for a really long time for this update. Though unfortunately. I don't really think that the new chapter really... Delivered.
      But still. I really like this story and I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.

      ReplyDelete
    31. smexyponyMay 18, 2011 at 2:17 PM

      this is pretty interesting.
      when do you plan on finishing this, anon writepony? please say you plan on doing so

      ReplyDelete
    32. NopeMay 31, 2011 at 6:52 PM

      Darn it all, chapter 4-6 I can't access because they "violate our ToS". Any chance there's an alternate link? I hate leaving a story unread D:

      ReplyDelete
    33. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 6:01 AM

      Yeah, CAN'T GET TO CHAPTERS 4-6. THEY VIOLATE THE TOS OR SOME BULLSHIT.
      But yes, nopony can acess the final three chapters, still.

      I DEMAND this to be fixed... if... that's okay. It's a good read.

      ReplyDelete
    34. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 10:40 PM

      I cant view chapters 4 to 6. Google Docs says its in violation of the TOS?

      ReplyDelete
    35. AnonymousJune 3, 2011 at 4:57 PM

      epicly brilliant story so far, had me close to tears D:. but same problem as everyone else with chapters 4-6 =/.

      ReplyDelete
    36. Ddude28June 3, 2011 at 11:15 PM

      I can read them just fine.

      ReplyDelete
    37. AnonymousJune 4, 2011 at 12:43 AM

      "We're sorry. You can't access this document because it is in violation of our Terms of Service."



      ...FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

      ReplyDelete
    38. NopeJune 5, 2011 at 4:33 PM

      Ah good, I can read 4-6 now. Gonna have to read 1-3 again to refresh my memory, but if said memory serves, that ain't a bad thing. ONWARD TO READING!

      ReplyDelete
    39. Anon WriteponyJune 16, 2011 at 3:39 AM

      Hey everypony!

      Thanks so much for liking the story, and I apologize for having not updated it in such a long time. I still don't know when I'll be able to update it next, seeing as how the upcoming chapter will be incredibly lengthy.

      The main reason for this hiatus is because of the work I'm pouring into My Little Musical; I prefer focusing on one thing at a time, and unfortunately, MLM has been demanding more of my attention.

      Sorry and thanks again!

      ReplyDelete
    40. RoxorJune 21, 2011 at 11:15 AM

      Should I feel bad for enjoying the Sanity Slippage scenes?

      ReplyDelete
    41. AnonymousJune 24, 2011 at 12:41 PM

      Man, I am LOVING the interaction between Spike and Applebloom.

      ReplyDelete
    42. La BarataJuly 17, 2011 at 1:24 AM

      ...So, gonna finish it?

      ReplyDelete
    43. Ddude28July 18, 2011 at 10:21 AM

      Yeah I was wondering that too. Is this going to get finished?

      ReplyDelete
    44. La BarataSeptember 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM

      Yeah, dude. I've got brain damage, and I've been updating my fic. What's your excuse?

      ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)