• Story: Off-Limits



    [Comedy] [Random]

    Author: Carmine
    Description: Pinkie is awoken one night by a mysterious mare that somehow ended up in Sugarcube Corner. When said mysterious mare tasks Pinkie with stopping Rainbow Dash from doing something 'super-duper incredibly terrible', will Pinkie be able to stop her in time? Or will Rainbow Dash's evil plan succeed?

    Off-Limits

    Additional Tags:
    Time-travel, Short, Pranking, Thwarted, Evil

    21 comments:

    1. I need to try reading thi one..

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    2. Cupcakes redux? Idunno.....

      Seems interesting enough. My schedule is clear, so let's have a nice read...

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    3. It has a mystery. Must read to figure out mystery!

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    4. @invizibilit3
      Either friend-shipping (Two characters become friends) or shipping that is very light. A crush or a 'I like you' story. Doesn't go in depth as to the romance of it.

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    5. Mysterious mare? This isn't gonna turn out to be Pinkie from the future, is it? Well, might as well read to find out.

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    6. would "how to woo your lady in 9 easy steps be light shipping"?

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    7. This story was amusing, but Rainbow felt kind of out of character. Really, with her skulking in the bushes and rubbing her hooves together in evil glee, she might as well have been called Snidely WhipDash.

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    8. Wow, that was well written! I got some tips for writing my fic! Hehe, I can't wait until Scootaloo sees Raimbow Dash after the story ended....

      Also, is it just me, or was anybody else reminded of "Feeling Pinkie Keen" with the whole "finding out something that hasn't already happened" thing? The author could have incorporated that in there somehow- but nonetheless this was a great fic :)


      I liked the comedy in it. Very original :D

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    9. Equestria Girls we're unforgettable
      hooves on hooves bikinis on top
      is the bad thing Rainbow Dash is going to do is get a bikini from parasprites, thus exposing adult material to kids?

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    10. @11Bolts the show was made manely for kids. The Equestria Girls was made manely for bronies

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    11. Well lots of people here are kids.

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    12. That was great. I liked how much Pinkie there is.

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    13. Meh. I've read better. The whole time travel thing was incredibly out of place and the rest of the fic wasn't all that impressive either.

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    14. I don't know about this one. The writing wasn't bad, it was just really boring. There was also the completely unnecessary and unresolved nightmare at the beginning, which didn't really help matters.

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    15. Nice little story, thanks for sharing :-)

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    16. A fun, twisted, adorkable, embarrassing little story. Very entertaining, thanks for sharing!

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