• Story: I Need a Freaking Drink

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    Description: An incident in Ponyville ends up getting Twilight and her friends arrested, but one pony is in far more trouble than the others.
    I Need a Freaking Drink
    Monday, March 14, 2011 op
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    10 comments:

    1. Roy G. BivMarch 14, 2011 at 3:18 PM

      Poor Fluttershy!

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    2. PacceMarch 14, 2011 at 3:24 PM

      I always lose interest a little when ponies start swearing...

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    3. Adrian BronyMarch 14, 2011 at 3:29 PM

      @Pacce

      forgive my orwellian editorness but I did decide to change that on second thought... Didn't really pay that part much mind until someone mentioned it.

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    4. Adrian BronyMarch 14, 2011 at 3:56 PM

      alternate DA link for those that hate google docs pages: http://fav.me/d3bn8fz

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    5. Albatross !!z0yT7Pqnr+yMarch 14, 2011 at 4:53 PM

      @Roy G. Biv
      Second.

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    6. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 4:56 PM

      Fun but too short. Could've been a fun "Rashomon" style story where each pony recounts the event in their own POV. Pinkie Pie's story would have been hilarious.


      Hmmm, I wonder if I can write it...

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    7. Adrian BronyMarch 14, 2011 at 5:16 PM

      @Anonymous
      Yeah I wanted to do it rashomon style but I only had 24 hours to write this thing. and I am neither fast nor clever enough to write a story like that in such a short time.

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    8. TannerMarch 14, 2011 at 5:24 PM

      Nice story! Ditzy the lawyer made me laugh quite a bit

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    9. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 5:47 PM

      This was awesome! Too bad Ditzy is no Phoenix Wright.

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    10. MadsMarch 14, 2011 at 6:02 PM

      Fun indeed but this leaves me craving more. Toothpaste, after all. One thumb, might re-read.

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