Description: When Trixie's spell backfires, will the girls be able to save Ponyville before it's consumed by the ulitmate in terror? A love letter to all the wonderfully twisted corners of the fandom.Equestrians In Undergarments
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[Shipping] Uhhhhhh, sorry... blame Pacce. Friendoff entry and all derp. Inb4 CNN decides to report on ponies and stumbles on to the site with this up, just like Penny Arcade last time, and Allspark/MLP arena before that. Yaaah. (Changed the picture, Trixie is probably the least tame one, and shes only in the story at the beginning anyway!)
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Labels: Author: Pacce, Everypony, Fanfiction, Shipping, Star-4, Story, The Great and Powerful TRIXIEShare This!
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I'm not surprised that someone did this and it was pretty funny. The only thing I can say is:
ReplyDeleteTHE POWER OF PANTIES COMPELS YOU!
THE POWER OF PANTIES COMPELS YOU!
it would be infinitly less wierd without the panties
ReplyDeleteOh for the love of Lyra. >_<''
ReplyDeleteSethisto and Pacce, you...just...you.
*parks behind flame shield*
@pollardy But the weirdness of the panties is kinda the point.
ReplyDeleteHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG
ReplyDelete*clopclopclop*?
ReplyDeleteloving the wave of shipping fics that came today <3
ReplyDeleteI lol'd, this one was really funny actually.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if the image that you changed it to is really any better :P
ReplyDeleteno the change is definitly better
ReplyDeleteThis is easily the most quotable fanfiction I have ever read
ReplyDeletePacce, you will always be my favorite writer on the blog. <3
ReplyDeleteWow. This was actually one of the best fics I've ever read. So funny, full of raunch but silly enough to keep it from getting embarrassing. Excellent use of Gilda, wonderful character voices throughout. 5 stars, would lol again.
ReplyDeleteoh lawdy lawdy...I haven't yet stopped laughing. Well played.
ReplyDeleteAlso, alternate DA link:
ReplyDeletehttp://dizzypacce.deviantart.com/#/d3boi89
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ReplyDeleteI read this expecting something funny, judging from all of the comments.
ReplyDeleteInstead I got all of the terrible, stupid jokes this fandom has been for some reason dying laughing over conjured in one fic. Oh and all of the shipping ever in one fic.
If I were to point to any fanfic to show a newcomer why this fandom is complete shit, it would be this fic.
I would give you one star, but that would be implying that I actually cared enough about the fic to cast a vote for it.
As for the rest of you who actually think this was funny, I suggest you all go watch the show "Big Bang Theory". The jokes are right up your alley.
Pacce, you mad genius, I love you.
ReplyDeleteFirst off, thanks for making a story out of one of my favorite posts in the Blog. It's about time someone did something about it, and the way you made the situation feasible, logical, and above all, hilarious, was laudable.
Second, I loved how you used Trixie and Gilda here. Bitches Do Stick Together, it seems, and the hilarious exchange of dialogue in between the main-cast about Gilda's style of fighting was excellently in character and hilarious.
Third, Trixie having a love-shrine dedicated to Twilight Sparkle had me falling out of my chair in laughter. Though I normally love this shipping as a serious thing, seeing Trixie be a creepy stalker was absolutely hilarious. (I had a line in my head with Trixie going "Damn you and your sexiness!")
Fourth, thanks for making Derpy semi-intelligent and incredibly unique. Her reaction to the underwear situation was very interesting, and her dialogue was the right blend of smart and stupid to sound positively Derpy Hooves.
Fifth, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my stars, I can't breathe! Seriously, Dash having that moment with the panties and having a sudden need to want every single pair of panties in Ponyville was genius. Your bolding it for extra effect was doubly awesome.
Sixth, Twilight Sparkle's moment was hilarious. It kind of reminded me of Rarity's Magic Book, one of my all time favorites, except more concentrated on the funny.
Seventh, Rarity's Show was absolutely side-breaking. The Rarity/Jack shipping was great, but Rarity's lines that sounded so like her and so incredibly dirty (peppered with clear signs that this has happened before, to boot) were one of the best things I have ever read. Her calling out into the darkness was perfect.
Eighth, Rainbow Dash's celebration in the hill of underwear was perfect. I can just imagine her diving into the holes and popping up here and there with bits of unmentionables hanging off from her.
Ninth, Pinkie Pie's sudden appearance was great. I can't understand why she doesn't fall through the clouds when only Pegasi can walk on them, but her serious dedication to eradicating the undergarments was a great foil to Rainbow Dash's perverted dedication.
Tenth, excellent grammar and descriptions. Everything moved smoothly, and above all, each scene was very clear in its hilarity and the voices of the characters.
Finally, thank you for making this. It's kind of like Butters' work, except more hilarious and less awkward to read. (Not that your work is bad, Butters; it's just that I prefer humor more than your brand of sexiness mixed with plot.)
I will probably love this, shipping tag or not. TO THE PRINTER.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Cottonmouth on this. This story was pointless, the character portrayals were subpar, the narrative style wasn't particularly interesting, and the "humor" that everyone's praising was no more than desperate references to in-jokes that have no wit to speak of. This wasn't a story about My Little Pony, it was a story about the fandom for it, and the fact that so many fans enjoyed this meandering romp through immaturity is a discouraging reminder that even though we've moved beyond our 4chan origins, we've still got a lot of growing up to do. 1 Star.
ReplyDelete(Doubtless this shall be another review to mysteriously vanish, as any comment on this site that has anything but unhelpful, blind praise within it, but it bore saying anyhow).
@ruff1298
ReplyDeleteWowy, wow-wow! That's a heck of a review.
A couple of things I wanna address:
The Trixie love shrine is actually a gag that I don't think I got across very well, I was trying to imply that she was going to have a three way with her mirror AND a picture of Twilight, but a shrine is funny too.
Though my interpretations of other side characters may vary from story to story, Derpy will always be my Osaka.
This was my love letter to a LOT of the more PG-13 stuff and up that has come from this fandom. The Twilight thing was wholly inspired by Rarity's Magic Book and the AJ/Rarity thing was my nod to Swayback Mountain.
In the interest of storytelling let's say that Twilight at some point gave Pinkie a cloud walking booster shot.
Funny you mention the grammar as the story was even done as it was posted. I spent the next couple of hours chatting with folks as I edited it. It was a lot of fun and folks enjoyed needling me and watching me rush to fix the mistakes.
All in all, this was a blast to write and I'm glad that so many folks enjoyed it.
Prickle, Mutt, Buttersc0tch; this one's for you and all of you with dirty minds and a love of poni.
Maybe next time I'll include some chubby ponies...
And for folks who want explanations for the WHY of the panty madness. Trixie screwed up royal and instead of creating something to humiliate the ponies, she made something embarrassing that directly stimulated the pleasure centers of their magical pony brains, but, because of they were worn over their naughty bits, it also... stimulated their naughty bits. And poor Dash had the misfortune of rapidly gaining three whole pairs that focused all of their energy on her causing her to go into a delirium which only got worse as she acquired more and more. Derpy and Pinkie weren't effected as badly because they didn't use them properly or keep them on for very long.
But all of that would have been very boring to read in story and would be something Twilight would have to say and she had her hooves full...
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI haven't deleted a single comment aside from ones people request.
The spam filter sometimes picks up long stuff/anon stuff with links, that's about it.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI would equate it to running into a thread on 4chan and doing the following.
DESU ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US THE CAKE IS A LIE "XXX... I..." 'WHY' GRAFICS CAT BUT WHO WAS PHONE A CAT IS FINE TO I LIKE TURTLES etc. etc.
Except you would rightfully be called an idiot and mostly ignored by everyone.
ruff1298 pretty much said everything I thought about this. A Hilarious declaration of love for all those stupid, raunchy in-jokes of the community. Obviously you should avoid reading this if you're offended by anything other than show-perfect characters. Also, extra points for Derpy having a more-or-less working brain. Two thumbs, will read again at some point!
ReplyDelete@Cottonmouth
ReplyDeleteI'm sure in your own mind you think you're giving helpful criticism Cottonmouth, but you just come off as a whiny crybaby. A lot of your reviews sound like that, not just this one.
Throwing insults, doubling back, and doing it again is not any kind of professional review that is smiled on in this community. It doesn't matter how bad you think a story is. You should at least strive to be respectful.
I'd suggest you learn how to give a proper review in the future instead of a tantrum if you want anybody to take you even remotely seriously.
I haven't finished it yet, I've gotta get going. But what I've read so far is pretty goofy and enjoyable. <3
ReplyDeleteThough a lot of people may whine about this fic, I'm of the opinion that the raunchy in-jokes are a huge part of what makes this fandom so special and enjoyable. This was an excellent tribute to some of the best of them. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh my Celestia. That was utterly HILARIOUS and SILLY. I approve. Though it might help that I never saw lingerie ponies as any... attraction, the first time I ever saw it, my first thought was O LAWD LOL.
ReplyDeleteAlso, Cottonmouth, I actually do love Big Bang Theory. :3
Panties! GLORIOUS PANYTIES! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!
ReplyDeleteWAT?
ReplyDeleteI loled out loud... mustnotdrawraritystrip
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure any criticism AT ALL isn't smiled on in this community. Most of the people in it are blinded by what they quickly label as "friendship" when in actuality its just a way to sugarcoat everything.
The truth of the matter stands that if I were to never been on /co/ and read this fic, I wouldn't know WHAT the fuck was going on.
Characters randomly trying to make out with each other, panties, weird in-jokes...
All for what? To give "tribute" to people who are already lauded with praise everywhere they step. This 'friendoff' is nothing more than tripfags drawing/writing for each other, and this fic is the crowning example.
As for you, none of my reviews ever come across as whiny. They may be a bit harsh, but that's called criticism. Stop trying to be an idiot by fighting against the truths I typed down.
wtf did I just read? lol
ReplyDelete@Cottonmouth
ReplyDeleteA person identifying themselves as a venomous pit viper going around giving caustic criticism...
Please don't feed the parasprite.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteThat seems to be the fandom's answer to everything.
"IT'S A PARASPRITE."
Labeling me as some troll to deter your flaws is a short-sighted thing to do.
Still, I don't want to plague this AMAZING! story with any more of my TERRIBLE truths, so go ahead and keep living in ignorance. I won't post here anymore.
/popcorn
ReplyDeleteYou guys may hate lingerie ponies but they never cease to entertain!
This was very silly!
ReplyDelete(and yet so awesome, oh my god)
ALL OF THE PANTIES, ALL OF THEM
@Sethisto
ReplyDeleteIndeed.
And share some of that popcorn!
@Kloudmutt
ReplyDeleteNEVER fight inspiration.
@Cottonmouth
ReplyDeletecottonmouth, I respect your criticisms more than any other person on this site because of how brutally honest you can be, but it seems to me that you only hat this fic because "... all of the terrible, stupid jokes this fandom has been for some reason dying laughing over conjured in one fic. Oh and all of the shipping ever in one fic."
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Sr. Pace wrote this as a joke in response to the ponies in lingerie gallery for the friend off. It was mean to be a satire on the fandom as a whole. Take the fic for what it is. That being said, i will agree that most of the story/jokes came off as lewd; however I still had a damn good time reading it. I hope you're still on to read this.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteYour right. In the end what I gave this fic wasn't really criticism, it was basically just blind hate.
It's obvious that this was written for a distinct group of people. I'll try and actually measure next time whether my judging is based on the writing or the subject at hand.
What is this I don't even....
ReplyDeleteFunny story, dirty and cute at the same time. Aside from the dirty part everybody was characterized fairly well I think. I lol'd pretty hard.
SILENCE, CAT-BIRD
ReplyDeleteI lol'd.
A few scenes from this fic are worthy of their own pictures. Maybe something for the next friend-off
ReplyDeleteCottonmouth, I appreciate your interest in quality fiction. But you're complaining about a [Shipping] fanfic titled "Equestrians in Undergarments" about perverted fandom injokes (and tagged as such) that was written in a very short period of time (and tagged as such).
ReplyDeleteThis is not a reasonable target for critique.
@Star Whistle
ReplyDeleteActually, I love critique.
I just prefer it to about something other than just the concept.
To explain: if I tell a fart joke and someone just says they don't like fart jokes, then all I've learned is that particular person doesn't like fart jokes. It'd be much more useful for someone to say that I sucked at TELLING a fart joke because then at least I'd have to consider what I might have been doing wrong.
This was silly, it made no sense, and well
ReplyDeleteI loved it!
I love the serious stories, but sometimes, a simple concept is just so funny, I can't help but laugh and love.
I read everything on this...it's just too funny.
ReplyDeleteI love Derpy's moment. XD
I wanted to write an underpants story, and I just couldn't think of anything good enough to do the pics justice. And here comes Pacce with this hysterically funny, well-written and just generally awesome story.
ReplyDeleteHighlights for me: Trixie/Gilda repartee, Derpy cameo, Rainbow Dash's new obsession.
Five thumbs up!
Just finished it. I had no idea I was so close to the end.
ReplyDeleteMany many laughs were had. <3 Oh so many tear-inducing laughs.
Pinkie/Dash and Rarity/Applejack fic? NOT BIG SURPRISE. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PPptwspx41U
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ReplyDeleteWell, this was pretty funny. And crazy.
ReplyDelete0_o;; ...what the bloody hell did I just read? xD
ReplyDelete@Daichi
ReplyDeleteA story about ponies in panties.