• Story: Scootalove

    [Normal] I don't know why you'd write a story about a chicken, personally.

    Author: nukeiffum
    Description: It's Mother's Day for SCOOT SCOOT SCOOTALOO.
    Scootalove

    Additional Tags: Mother's Day, Immaturity

    39 comments:

    1. Chant it with me!

      No more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!
      No more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!
      No more Scootabuse! More Scootalove!

      D'aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww, this story made my heart melt

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    2. It's SO CUTE.

      hey cereal, I can't seem to find the post about adding new stories, so I'm just gonna leave the link here.

      I didn't write it, but the author has asked me to ask you guys to put it up.

      >It's grimdark
      >It's a continuation of cupcakes
      >They REALLY want feedback, so that's part of the reason they wants it's up here.

      Anyway, it's called Apple Pie.
      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c1dn5jCUutSIbwrH9IG8bXK_TEIqYS_YXUofJ6lIvjE/edit?hl=en#

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    3. I object to scoots being a chicken mr. velocity.

      the idea of scootaloo being adopted makes sense

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    4. *Peers at link..* Nope!

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    5. Kill me, I'm a PONYMay 8, 2011 at 7:27 PM

      @Arc Tempest

      1. Open the link.

      2. Scroll to the bottom to see how it ends.

      3. ????

      4. Yeah, I don't feel like fucking up my perception of Pinkie anymore. Already feel woozy about pie >.>

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    6. @Chris

      I believe in Scootalove!

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    7. @Kill me, I'm a PONY

      lol sorry.


      TBH I don't really care if it goes up, but my friend does, and I'd like to see it up for that reason.

      well written aside from a few minor spelling mistakes.

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    8. Someone get out so I can read it!

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    9. @Anonymous
      everyone should open the doc. download a copy. and close it. share the doc.

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    10. Kill me, I'm a PONYMay 8, 2011 at 7:48 PM

      @Arc Tempest

      Oh it's fine lol. I don't doubt that it is good, I just murdered enough of myself with cupcakes. And some other stories...

      That, and I have access to pie way more than cupcakes

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    11. @Arc Tempest

      I lol'd kinda

      It's at the top of the page right under the banner, email it to him!

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    12. http://pastebin.com/eNdnk2qd

      For those of you who can't get to the google docs version.

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    13. Uploaded to Mediafire since there seems to be too much traffic here:

      http://www.mediafire.com/?og24angonckcnoq

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    14. Damnit nuke YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE WRITING SCOOTABUSE

      Y U LIE

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    15. After this, I don't think I can support Scootabuse anymore.

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    16. Happy Mother's Day, everypony!

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    17. I liked this I really did. And I never supported scottabuse when I heared of it. And I plan on using these backstories if it's okay. It really fits the charicters well and it touching at the same time.

      And as said above, happy mothers day everypony!

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    18. It was a cute story. But after I read it I had this thought...

      "Hey Applebloom, what are you getting your mom for mothers day?"
      "MY PARENTS ARE DEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD"

      ...and then I felt bad.

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    19. @Anonymous

      LMAO

      I've actually never heard of Scootabuse. Odd.

      But I liked this story. It was affectionate c:

      @Arc Tempest

      Oh hell yes! I'll need to remember to read that tomorrow!

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    20. Confound thees pony's! they drive me to tears T_T

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    21. Awwww.
      That was heart-warming and kinda makes sense since we never see her parents.
      Course we don't see alot of their parents so I'll just say it works for the story and keep it at that.
      Overall a very good story.

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    22. @Wraithwood: +1. An amazing story.

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    23. It was... good.
      I liked backstories of Rarity and AJ, and how they cope with their mothers. Also Rainbow with her 20% Cooler Wisdom was quite neat. However, as it is pointed out, ending was rushed greatly. Don't get me wrong I Really Liked It, it was sweet and cute and daww and all that stuff, but it simply happened a tiny bit to fast ;)

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    24. Good story, cute ending, I don't feel like it was rushed at all.

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    25. a tear was shed

      it'd be great if you put everything into just a teeny bit more detail

      but damn
      i loved that ending

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    26. I'm surprised a lot of you enjoyed this fic. I really rushed the ending in an effort to get it out on Mother's Day, so it doesn't really live up to my standards of quality. The conversation between RD and Scoots was supposed to be a lot more emotional, but my rushedness kinda cut a lot of that out.

      Anyways, I might write another oneshot in the future about Rarity's falling out with her mother, but that'll happen whenever I get the urge to write something like that. My hooves are already full with school and that Memories story. ┐('~`;)┌

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    27. Inconsistency detected.

      '“We moved to Ponyville because Rarity had kind of a huge argument with our mother about her dream of being a designer, but that was a long time ago! Even if we don’t really get to see her much over in Ponyville, we always write to let our parents know how we’re doing, and on days like these Rarity sends her some sort of present!”'

      Rarity went to school in Ponyville, as evident by The Cutie Mark Chronicles.

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    28. @nukeiffum

      If you eventually have the time, would you consider rewriting the last part to make it more in line with what you originally intended? You knocked my socks off with the story the way it is originally, but now I want to see what you would have made if not constrained by time, and I think others would too.

      Just, if you have the time, you know. Because if you don't then we will always be left wondering what you had planned. *puppy dog eyes* Pleeease?

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    29. @Anonymous

      If I laughed at this, does that mean I have to go to ponyhell? It does, doesn't it?

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    30. There needs to be reaction images on this site. I know I've said it before, but I say it again. Words simply don't do the sheer amount of D'AWWWWWWWWW in this justice

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    31. How is this a shipping story? If anything, it's a bit sad...

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    32. not sure why this is listed under 'shipping' in the story archives... unless there's a sequel where the sight of Big Mac in a tuxedo drives every mare in 100 miles crazy. :P

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    33. so, it is clearly a normal tag, and a normal story, but the list has it in the shipping section. I really liked the story, but it would be enjoyed by more people if it was in the right spot.

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    34. I approve of the Scootalove! Scootayay! :P

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    35. Oh, wow, this fandom ages interestingly. Cereal makes a not-trite joke about Scoots being a chicken, and Scootalove isn't yet a word!

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