Author: Larathin Bradley
Description: They say living well is the best revenge, but after Twilight destroyed her reputation Trixie is struggling just to get by. And while she may not be Great and Powerful anymore, she's powerful enough to get her revenge...Powerful
Additional Tags: clinic, revenge, magic, Trixie, Manehattan
16 comments:
Good oneshot.
ReplyDeleteThe only problem I had was how quickly she inverted her opinion of rage to acceptance.
I may actually have to read this, and this may actually get me to accept Trixie into my arms... THE HORROR!
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the story. My only issue with it is the last 2 sentences. Made a 5 star story change to a 4 star story to me. It was just such a sudden change of behavior for no real reason.
ReplyDelete*slow clap*
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ReplyDeleteThis fanbase is WAAAY too big.
Pick option D. I dare you. Oh wait.
ReplyDeletePowerful indeed. Good show Larathin :D
ReplyDeleteTrixie really can't blame Twilight for anything.
ReplyDeleteNo revenge to be had, it's just Trixie swallowing her pride.
As i commented on Fanfiction.net I like this story more than the standard "Wobbie Trixie" fare because it does have Trixie realizing as she tells the story of what happened that she can't blame Twilight for her humiliation, her own egocentric behavior was responsible for her fall, not the fact Twilight cleaned up the mess.
ReplyDeleteamazing story, I feel for trixie living that kind of life. so many emotions are bouncing inside my head right now. great story
ReplyDelete5/5 stars. keep righting buddy :)
Wow this might be the best written fan fiction I've read.. Great job. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteVery good, quite touching and I can feel the change that turn Great and Powerful Trixie into Just Trixie. Bittersweet and 5 stars from me for that.
ReplyDeleteCould use some minor revisions, but a very touching and enduring story that adds a lot of depth to Trixie while acknowledging and building off of her canon.
ReplyDeleteIf there's one thing I'm adamant on, though, it's that the last two words should instead be "Take that."
Just Trixie is best trixie.
ReplyDeleteGreat little redemption fic for Trixie! I don't think I could take this kind of setup for Gilda, but for her it works fantastically.
ReplyDeleteThis story deserves more comments. I have to say, I would love to see this continued.
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