Author: BillyColt
Description: Taken from a thread on ponychan where the TC asked for a bedtime story. Done in the style of a simple fairytale, about a filly looking for her father.Bedtime Story (All Links)
Additional Tags: Normal, fairy tale, short story.
20 comments:
wow, that was such an awesome story.
Very cute. The fairy tale quality worked well.
Owl pellets?? As in poo?? And she had to carry them in her mouth?? That's pretty nasty.
Well done!
much more of an old Grimm-style fable than a bedtime story (sans the creepy moral to scare kids straight). I couldn't help but see the owl as Owlowicious (or however you spell it).
Goddamn that owl.
Hey, OP of that. Topic here. Really glad it got posted. Nice to see it here.
@AnonymousRegurgitations, actually, not poo.
happy end "yay"
@Anonymousits a kids story what did you expect
@Anonymous
@Rainbow Brisk
That's the best kind of story, the kids are too scared to get out of bed till morning! ;-)
Hells yes, something I wrote got published on EqD.
I'm so happy I can't take it.
Im gonna party till I drop.
@AnonymousRegurgitations, actually, not droppings. Common in birds of prey. Can't digest everything, so they regurgitate some of it.
Still pretty gross, yeah.
clever story. loved the last riddle.
Krass McWriter... Do you have any more?
@Anonymous
Like stories or bed time stories?
For the first one I got a fic on why theres so many time lords.
For the second, I COULD make more, its a bit tricky since I like to throw big words, but there for kids so... Yeah.
I liked that last riddle too
Oh, it did get posted. It just didn't get bumped.
Who can find my story when its 5 pages deep?
I enjoyed the lessons learned in Krass's stories, but the errors in grammar and spelling distracted me a little too much. I'd recommend that Krass seek a beta reader/editor when writing future stories, just to add that professional polish.
Loved the one about the spoiled filly, really touching
Bedtime stories is one of our bonding activities with our daughter. I remember we used to tell her quotes about sleep too so that she'll remember the importance of getting enough sleep.
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