
Oh, hello.
Don't mind my sister. She just gets so angry at times, and it's hard to reason with her. I'll sit her down with her favorite cup of coffee- she just loves her coffee, you know- and we'll have a talk about this moon business. We'll get you down from there soon. I know how cold it gets.
She's really a gentle, caring sister once you get to know her. She just gets a little carried away sometimes... all she needs is a little encouragement that everypony likes her sun. I'm sorry about all this.
I saw everything you said before. I love you all, too.
Also that ridiculous RP in the comments compiled for everypony.
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693 comments:
My goodness. You have no internet for two days and look what happens.
ReplyDeleteAh, well, I'm a robot. Moon is no problem for me. I think I'll just chill and watch Torrential and Fluttershy with my Enhanced Sensors o-o
@Fluttershy
ReplyDeleteAll we have to do is hope for the best!
I think a Night Forced Celestia would be sending everypony to the sun, if she's sending us to the moon as she is now...
ReplyDelete~My Dearest Fluttershy~
ReplyDeleteAs I write this, the guards continue to search for me. I could easily evade them, but I fear they would return for you. Please, go somewhere hidden, go anywhere, just be safe! I love you, and always will, but you deserve more than I can give you right now. I promise that when we can finally live a normal life together, I will return to you, my love.
~Torrential
To Torrential my Love
ReplyDeleteI send you all my love and hope for your safe return to me. I had a lovely dream last night about you. Oh, Twilight made a necklace for you to help protect you. I wish you hadn't run off so soon so I could give you it. Till once we meet again Torrential, I will wait for you to return, no matter how long it takes for you to find your way back I will wait.
Fluttershy
PS I love you, don't ever forget that ♥
@Sir Leadhead
ReplyDelete[Umm hi, if you haven't there's a couple news topics before this. If you're interested that is.]
Fluttershy, I love you, but I know that you would never truly be happy if you came with me. I could never put you in danger, not even for the sake of our love. I love you Fluttershy, and I hope we can have a life together after this is all over.
ReplyDelete@Torrential Rains
ReplyDeleteB..but I would be with you after all. This necklace that Twilight made is supposed to make you invisible from Celestia. That may be a great aid in our escape.
No, I'm sorry but I won't let you come with me. I know it hurts, but if anything were to happen to you, I would never forgive myself. Even if nothing happened to you, you would still have to live a life of fear, and you don't deserve that!
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ReplyDeleteB..but I don't to be away from you Torrential, I don't know what I'd do if I lost, you. I'll just worry about you and hope to see you safely return to me. I can only pray Celestia nor her guards catch up with you, she will pay!!!! I'd rather not go into how exactly. It's not a side of me I like to talk about.
ReplyDeleteBe safe my love, I will always be with you
Fluttershy...
ReplyDeleteDon't do anything rash, I could never forgive myself if you were hurt because of me.
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ReplyDeleteI know I'll just keep doing my part to make sure everything works out. I'm not really all that special, but...I'll certainly do what I can!
ReplyDelete@Torrential Rains
ReplyDeleteNo worries Torrential, I think I can handle myself. After helping to take down Nightmare Moon.
I don't know what I would ever do if I lost you
@T.O. Brony
ReplyDeleteumm hi there T.O. you've missed so much since yesterday.
Uhhh...
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TO, when did you get here?
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Yes, but Fluttershy, you had the Elements of Harmony on your side then. Anyway, I thought you said you preferred to solve thing diplomatically?
@Torrential Rains
ReplyDeleteUmm I think Twilight said that.
I only resort to that..if umm it's absolutely the last option. As I said I really don't want to talk about that, I'm not very proud of myself when that... happens.
Well...it's the weirdest thing. I just saw that I was back here, with some others, I think and well, it was kind of sudden. I think I caught some kind of breif glimpse of grey and yellow...it might've had to do with the effects of being transported so quickly, though.
ReplyDelete[I've started on the Google Docs Rough Draft of a Fanfic based off of this. Well, it's more of a collection of the conversations we've had so far. I think it will be very useful to the person who does write the fanfic.
ReplyDelete[oh thank you, I was gonna screen cap some of this. I sat and re-read through much of this earlier today. Why do I feel like I'm gonna tear up in some parts?]
ReplyDelete[oh one more thing, thank you for continuing this. I've never rped ponies before, this was truly a joy to do]
ReplyDelete[I haven't either, but I've done it with other franchises, so I guess it just came naturally!]
ReplyDelete[Well, it may be due in part to the fact that this entire time, I've been saying things I would actually say in real life. All of that stuff about me making it awkward happens IRL all the time. I also basically distilled my personality into a character. Intelligent, kind-hearted, and over-analytical.]
ReplyDelete[I'm also kind of being myself, but with some slight tweaks]
ReplyDelete[I added you to the editor list Fluttershy. I'm about halfway through the original topic, where TO said he was happy you had a date.]
ReplyDelete[Lol, I just saw the post where you said, "I completely understand, I don't want to risk anypony's safety.
ReplyDeleteand I apologize to ask again, but are you a Major or are you not permitted by Celestia to tell anypony. I don't want you to get sent to the moon over that."
You are freaking prophetic.]
[awesome, there was quite a bit of dialogue between me and Twilight last night. Not sure if you saw some of that. When you get all this done, would it be possible you could e-mail a link to the doc? The email on my profile is my pony email]
ReplyDelete[Well, Luna did get sent to the moon. Twilight suggested Fluttershy would get sent to the moon after her taking Celestia's bird. It just sounded like the perfect line. I never imagine we'd actually end up there.]
ReplyDelete@T.O. Brony
ReplyDelete[I have as well but not for maybe 6 or so years. Amazed how easy it was to do, easier when you can just get in character and not have to design a new one]
[Still, that's pretty funny!]
ReplyDelete[I noticed something else too, the longer we went on, the better or spelling and grammar became.]
ReplyDeleteWow, that was a great na- err, night, yea, night. No napping on the job here! He-heh...eh...Wow, look at that. Day already? How those nights fly!
ReplyDelete[Oh, hey Luna. You want to be included in the fanfic too?]
ReplyDelete[really, I hadn't even noticed there was any grammar issues. Well besides Twilight calling me Flautershy. Also sorry if I poof I'm off to get some dinner. Least I have tonight off.]
ReplyDelete[Will you be back on tonight? I'll keep working on it either way.]
ReplyDelete[definitely, as I said to Twilight I'd like to see how this all pans out. I don;t want the story to end, just yet.]
ReplyDelete[Ok, cool. I'm up to me and Twilight trying to find you in that wreckage.]
ReplyDelete[if and when you're up for continuing let me know. I'll be checking this topic every so often.]
ReplyDelete[Wait, I thought you said you were leaving...]
ReplyDelete[to get some dinner, which is what I'm eating right now. Mmmm! sorry for any confusion if I caused you any]
ReplyDelete[ I actually took precautions in case Sethestia decided to delete the posts and was going to save all the comments verbatim, then sort through them later, since I know I missed a lot. I actually read the last question as 'if you were to impersonated your sister, Celestia, how would you do it?'
ReplyDeleteIt's also been several years since I've done some real roleplay, but Ive acted outside my usual, Pinkie-esq ways. I've done a few quick things as reactions to pictures, but nothing that could really be called 'role playing'.
I tried to bring-in Scootaloo yesterday, just to have her flying through the lunar-sphere,
Wow, those other topics are distracting... ]
[I literally facepalmed when I read this... I thought you said you WERE GOING TO get some dinner... I derped... Anyway, I think we should continue on the new derpy topic.]
ReplyDelete[WAIT I knew I saw Scootaloo yesterday, my eyes weren't playing tricks on me. Luna you aren't Cereal are you?]
ReplyDelete[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/oh-god-luna-hired-derpy.html this one? Yes, I went to my Kitchen and made something quick to eat. I kinda had a late lunch.]
ReplyDelete[Ok, I'm at me trying to get us off of the moon]
ReplyDelete[phew was afraid you ranned off, whenever you want to pick up. Let me know.]
ReplyDelete[I thought this one would have died after the derpy one went up.]
ReplyDelete[I think we're to continue this over there, not sure were Torrential ran off to]
ReplyDelete[Still here, working on that collection of comments though...]
ReplyDelete[Fun trying to work a story out it isn't it?]
ReplyDelete[oh I don't want to pull you away from that. Will continue checking back and forth to see if we've picked up. I'll be working tomorrow night, should have Wednesday off I hope...]
ReplyDeleteLet's see... I'm at the part where we had just gotten to your cottage]
ReplyDelete[Well Major.Fluttershy.I'll leave to this.I have engagements to take care of today.I shall see you later.]
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ReplyDelete[Alright, I'm at the part where, well... Wow, I'm seriously embarrassed to say, "When we professed our love to each other?" in front of you? Wow, that's some statement as to the power of realistic conversations.]
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ReplyDelete[Huh? I was saying that I'm actually embarrassed IRL to post that I was at that part...]
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ReplyDelete[err whoops, nevermind. I forgot where that was going.]
ReplyDelete[Ok, anyway, I'm up to the part where I flee into the forest, so I'm ALMOST done... Man, compiling these comments took FOREVER.]
ReplyDelete[really want to thank you for doing all this, least will have a copy. Then hopefully someone can turn this into a quality fanfic. Be sure to email me the link whenever you get done]
ReplyDelete[YAY! I'm finally up to this page! Once I've got this one copied, I'm done until we continue!]
ReplyDelete[woohoo! Now you got my and Twilight's conversation from last night right? Learned alot about things I didn't know till she said.]
ReplyDelete[Nice, almost back to the fun!]
ReplyDelete[DONE!YESYESYESYESYES.jpg]
ReplyDelete[I had to split it into 2 seperate docs though, it was seriously lagging my computer.]
ReplyDelete[gosh it was THAT long, well it did spread over a day and half roughly. I guess I could see that now. Let me know when we're ready to commence]
ReplyDelete[I sent you the links, I guess we just pick back up on the derpy post...]
ReplyDelete[thank you, will be nice to re-read through it all from the beginning. Whenever you're ready.]
ReplyDelete[Already started]
ReplyDelete[ I'm not Cereal, but I did have a second Google acc I made months ago (Possibly even one from before Blooger got bought-out by Google, if I can ever remember it). I may even have a third, I don't know if this is linked to my youtube I made or not.
ReplyDeleteI tried setting it up, really just to draw-out a Dash, but the posts always seemed to disappear, and no browser would let me finish editing the profile, so I gave-up. ]
{Can I get this sent to me? I really want to read this and possibly help bring it into a fanfic :3}
ReplyDelete@Wandering Sol [You should message Torrential Rains for that, I theenk.]
ReplyDelete@Wandering Sol
ReplyDelete[I can email you the link to the doc, I've got it all updated to about the last point. I never imagined there'd be this much interest in a little love story.]
@Fluttershy
ReplyDelete[Ok, next post on Derpy's topic is up! Or was up at 4 this morning...]
@Fluttershy
ReplyDelete[Email'd!]
[Sol, she's at work, send me one, I'll add you]
ReplyDelete[who the f posted links to our story? @Torrential I sent links to the Doc soon as I got her mail.]
ReplyDelete@Fluttershy
ReplyDeleteI think I have an idea who...
(Seth, because I sent them to him!)
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ReplyDelete@Torrential Rains
ReplyDeleteWell, that explains everything then.
OMG, ! just finished what you guys have so far. It is so amazing! If you don't mind my saying so, Fluttershy ships are the best! I really hope this becomes a fic
ReplyDelete@Rockin' Brony
ReplyDeletet-t-thank you
funny thing is I've never read a shipping fic.
I really hope so too, there's so many great parts in there. We're working on making this a reality :)
@Fluttershy
ReplyDeleteI usually don't unless it looks really promising, even then most of the time they leave me a bit underwhelmed compared to some other fics. Then again I haven't been a brony very long...
I'm so psyched to see the finished product!
@Rockin' Brony
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment man! Good to know that someone out there is enjoying the not-even-close-to-nearly-finished product!
Did I mention your post-scripts made me lol? A lot...
ReplyDeleteYou should probably do the "&preview" thing to your Google Docs links when you send them to people.
ReplyDeleteOoo, Major/Torrential Rains has an OC pic! Sweet!
ReplyDelete@Rockin' Brony
ReplyDeleteThanks man, I appreciate it.
Can I use this image?
ReplyDeleteThat's odd that my other email would notify me of posts here. Especially on a thread this old...
ReplyDeleteWait, I remember this place!