Counterpoint in this is what COULD have happened if Fluttershy's Courage had failed in the story of the same name.
I wish I could get in contact with the author for a private critique. Strong and dark story with a glimmer of hope at the end, but there are things he could do to make it stronger and less anticlimatic.
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Whoa! There's a real big problem with that bottom part! Text on the left is unreadable due to being cut-off.
@Anonymous
Wow, thank you for pointing that out.
I fixed it.
Ahh see thats why I like google docs! I can be lazy while you fix it for me lol.
This would fall under "sad: as well?
This is the sequel to Fluttershy's Courage, isn't it?
Not sequel. Counterpoint.
Counterpoint in this is what COULD have happened if Fluttershy's Courage had failed in the story of the same name.
I wish I could get in contact with the author for a private critique. Strong and dark story with a glimmer of hope at the end, but there are things he could do to make it stronger and less anticlimatic.
@Anonymous
I have to agree with this. After the strong start the ending seemed very... flat. It was good, but the ending let it down.
Aww :(. All my favorites had to die :(. No really... even Derpy.
ill admit it. this made me cry.
ill admit it. this made me cry.
Was kinda boring
@WPK4F I am currently crying manly man-tears of manliness.
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