• Story: My Gift

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    Author: SoundofRainfall
    Description: Luna's mental breakdown before trying to bring forth eternal night, as told from her point of view.
    My Gift

    Additional Tags: Madness, Arrogance, Equality
    Friday, December 9, 2011 op
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    19 comments:

    1. X X XDecember 9, 2011 at 11:00 AM

      cool

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    2. GypsyDecember 9, 2011 at 11:11 AM

      I like to believe she was raped in the day

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    3. Shadow HeartDecember 9, 2011 at 11:11 AM

      Poor Luna T_T

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    4. Matt NeighborsDecember 9, 2011 at 11:13 AM

      "Madness, Arrogance, Equality"

      Sponsored by the NAACP?
      /rimshot
      /I kid, I kid

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    5. SigilDecember 9, 2011 at 11:21 AM

      Very interesting.

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    6. kawolineDecember 9, 2011 at 12:18 PM

      @gypsy

      lol, WHAT!!!!???

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    7. WardenDecember 9, 2011 at 1:15 PM

      This was intriguing.

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    8. MaquabraDecember 9, 2011 at 1:21 PM

      Sounds cheesy. Has anyone here read it already?

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    9. moocow1452December 9, 2011 at 1:26 PM

      Usual Stream of Consciousness rant, nothing special really.

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    10. Corky64December 9, 2011 at 1:36 PM

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    11. KliceDecember 9, 2011 at 2:30 PM

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    12. KliceDecember 9, 2011 at 2:32 PM

      Nice story ! I really like the concept.

      I don't know where else I could ask, so I'll do it here : Is somebody knows where to find a nightmare moon fight story in Celestia's point of view ?

      Thanks in advance and sorry for polluting the comments.

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    13. CloudhammerDecember 9, 2011 at 3:15 PM

      Very dark and menacing, I like it so far, will keep an eye out for sequels

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    14. GypsyDecember 9, 2011 at 3:31 PM

      @Karrotline

      well ya see you don't turn into some freakin' evil version of yourself because you got jelous of ponies fuckin' sleeping and shit, no, for that crazy mofo it had traumatizing to get what she had. So I'm like she probably got raped in the day so because of that experience she got trauma

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    15. MaquabraDecember 9, 2011 at 6:16 PM

      @Corky64:
      Well, this idea is actually overused. After reading a few dark/grimdark fics, I must say that they are pretty much repetitive. What's worse, when I was trying to write my own one, I was finding along the way fics with my "original" ideas o) Don't want to write the same shit for the 100th time so I need to come up with more ideas before I continue... Time to go totally off-canon.

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    16. SleepingcobroxDecember 9, 2011 at 8:32 PM

      I will say that this story of Luna's perspective really works here. I suggest you all read through this story to the very end

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    17. AnonymousDecember 10, 2011 at 1:03 PM

      Well, you already got my review on FF dot net, but I'm still going to comment here anyways~ (: This story is breathtaking; perfect example of why you'll always be my favorite author!

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    18. Pokeball 2525December 21, 2011 at 2:11 PM

      I must say it is decent a decent fiction, grammar

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    19. Pokeball 2525December 21, 2011 at 2:12 PM

      I must say it is decent a decent fic, grammar was good flow was good but it felt like an unbalance in the atmosphere,too much head-cannon and not enough cannon from the mind of the princess of the nigh.The nicknames that Celestia gives her the way she acts when she running and most of all the Luna's monologue to herself doesn't feel like something Luna would say.Granted Luna doesn't have much screen much less the royal family and time and your head-cannon will be your head-cannon but all the same I felt my immersion constantly being ripped away from me whenever I started to read Luna dialog or your narration of her inner thoughts. But it's also your competing with great stories like upheaval:breaking point and heavenly turmoil casting some pretty big shadows on your work and shaping the communities view on the possibilities of the royal family mentality. Some decent works on Luna as the a character would be Night's favorite child and a few other but keep doing what your doing it's great work.

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