Author: Fenix
Description: After an ancient spell from Twilight goes awry, Fluttershy finds herself in a new world of powerful creatures. Whilst Fluttershy struggles in the newfound world, Twilight is forced to leave Equestria to find the spell to bring her back. As Twilight and her friends journey through the outlands of Equestria, Fluttershy attempts to uncover what shadows lurk just beyond Hoenn's sight.
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Additional Tags: Long, Pokémon, Rescue, Adventure, Peril
219 comments:
Second!... er... WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT?!
ReplyDeleteThat took a long while :3 BUT at least it's out! Can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteChapter 12 wasn't pre-read? Blimey. I'm liking the dual nature of this fic so far, as well as the Yogscat references =)
ReplyDeleteI love the story so far. You've really developed the start and made it work. My vote just increased from a 4 star to a 5 star.
ReplyDeleteNice job!
Even though I changed my name, I'm Ponies!!!
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I just want to tell you that the picture on the fanfic is my new facebook profile pic.
That is all.
KAWL
ReplyDeleteJapanise coltur meets Amrican show. epic. Can't wait for more!
ReplyDeleteI've been enyoing the story, really like how you went into describing the evolution, it's certainly not some they go into much detail in the animated series.
ReplyDelete@Melon Hunter
ReplyDeleteThank you! Always trying to improve from one chapter to the next.
@Ponies!!!
Thanks for the compliment! Hopefully the pace and intrigue will keep up to deserve that high praise.
@yusha
Thanks for reading!
@andmos
I don't know how much Japanese culture includes drunken tailgating outside of sports stadiums, but I'm glad you're enjoying it.
@Battra
I always thought of it as a cop-out whenever they discussed Pokémon evolving. Having an animal completely change their shape, size or species right in front of you should be a crazy experience, and I know I'd freak out much the same way if I saw that. I guess they're just used to it. I'm glad you're enjoying this and thanks for reading!
As a Yognaught, I can't help but yell out "PROFESSOR GRIIIIIZZZZWWAAAAAAAAALLLDDD" every time his name comes up
ReplyDelete"HELLLOOOO? I APPEAR TO HAVE DIED!"
Really enjoying it so far, I can't wait to see more! :)
ReplyDeleteFinally! Chapter 13's out! I think this is the best ponyfic made, but I haven't read that many.
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised with lack of comments on Chapters 13 and 14. Anyways, I like what you did with Trixie/Watson/Watsie. And while I'm glad that Dash put her anger aside, it seemed a tad sudden. Still, good chapter.
ReplyDelete@darkartsfart
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment! Most of the readers who comment on the story fled to FiMFiction, just to let you know. Anyway, with Dash's anger, I wanted to think that because Wattsie wasn't reciprocating her emotions and acted less like Trixie, Dash found it easier to calm down and see what Wattsie was just trying to help. It still may have been quick, I'm not sure.
this fic is so good i have decided to do a read through of it and put it up on youtube. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vz4Yg5lgeFA&feature=plcp
ReplyDelete@skytail
ReplyDeleteAwesome stuff! I took a listen, and while it was weird to hear my old writing, it sounded great! I'm glad you enjoy the story so much!
@fenix
ReplyDeletei feel honored that you took the time to listen to it, so thank you. do you have a release date for Ch.15 part 2?
@skytail
ReplyDeleteIf editing goes smoothly, I'd say a within the next few weeks. My pre-readers can be a busy bunch, so ETAs are always a toss up.
this series is pretty good ^^ i do very much hope to see more fanfics like this one, me being a fan of MLP and Pokemon
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