• Story: Photo Shoot

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    [Grimdark] "Like a sharp needle applied to the skin, Photo Shoot is an interesting little instrument filled with insanity and intrigue."-Pre Reader #23 (Showoff)


    Author: ItsTheWhinyGuys
    Description: She shall pay. She shall pay dearly for snubbing Rarity and her fashions...
    Photo Shoot Docs
    Photo Shoot DA

    Additional Tags: Anger, revenge, murder, dark humor, Photo Finish
    Monday, May 23, 2011 op
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    19 comments:

    1. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 2:05 PM

      Aw hell, Photo Finish is screwed.

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    2. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 2:11 PM

      Ok, the ending to the first part is kinda funny in how it counters the first chunk. That ending paragraph is just cute :D

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    3. Shadow PhoenixMay 23, 2011 at 2:14 PM

      Since Rarity and Photo Finish are my 2 favourites, I didn't think that I'd like this very much. It was actually quite well-written and made the most of Rarity's perspective.

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    4. Hikuro14May 23, 2011 at 2:16 PM

      It was a good story. Kinda short though.

      Got my heart racing at some parts.

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    5. T.O. BronyMay 23, 2011 at 2:17 PM

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    6. T.O. BronyMay 23, 2011 at 2:18 PM

      Fluttershy would probably have a more cunning plan, such as say...leaving a 'special order' for Pinkie...

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    7. RedCoreMay 23, 2011 at 2:28 PM

      Pretty good, just felt too short.
      I would gladly read a chapter 2 of this.

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    8. sponszMay 23, 2011 at 2:29 PM

      >Anger, revenge, murder

      mfw i saw the header image

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    9. NinestempestMay 23, 2011 at 2:38 PM

      Heh, that was fun for what it was. A tad short.

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    10. FluttershyMay 23, 2011 at 2:41 PM

      But, but it needs more. The ending just well....

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    11. BareeMay 23, 2011 at 2:43 PM

      I never ever read Grimdark. Ever. Except for the fallout crossover, but that one doesn't count.

      Somehow though, I knew I wouldn't mind this story. And I was right. Anyway, yeah, its ok I guess. Written well enough, but it doesn't really stump the reader. Kept me occupied for a few minutes anyway.

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    12. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 3:36 PM

      Lol.
      This was great. It'd like a second chapter,though.

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    13. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 3:58 PM

      I am now envisioning Rarity dressed as agent 47.

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    14. EponaMay 23, 2011 at 5:01 PM

      yayy! I loved it! REVENGEEEE MUAHAHHAHAHA

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    15. ItsTheWhinyGuysMay 23, 2011 at 5:42 PM

      To all those saying this should be longer/needs a continuation: it is quite possible I will extend this a bit, seeing how there were a few parts I had wanted to expand on here and there, but I really did envision this more as a one-shot; I don't think I'll be doing a sequel, to be honest.

      Anyways, thanks for the critique and support!

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    16. La BarataJune 2, 2011 at 2:02 PM

      GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    17. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 12:53 PM

      Rarity + Grimdark = Perfect Combo
      Nice story!

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    18. A G.July 16, 2011 at 3:18 AM

      And then rather than either of them or any of the major-minor characters, it shall be her assistant herself who pulls the trigger.

      For the mistreat that she had done, thou shall pay its price.

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    19. RoxorAugust 7, 2011 at 6:40 AM

      Pretty good. As obvious as the ending was, I think it works.

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