• Story: Night of the Pinkie Pie

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    [Normal] Pinkie Pie...you so crazy.  Yah I got nothin.  Back to bed!
    Description: Ponies are disappearing on suspicious holidays. Pinkie Pie has a new cupcake range... and a cleaver.
    Night of the Pinkie Pie
    Sunday, March 27, 2011 op
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    23 comments:

    1. ZarkanorfMarch 27, 2011 at 9:15 AM

      Woah, where's the title with this post?

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    2. JbanJboyMarch 27, 2011 at 9:19 AM

      Yeah, this post seems a tab bit title-less, but, I enjoyed the story none-the-less. Seems like a fun little take on "that" story, seems to have started like it was going to be Grim-dark, but I thought that it had a neat little clever twist at the end.

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    3. Cray0nMarch 27, 2011 at 9:26 AM

      Damn, he didn't use my cleaned up version...
      I am now a sad.

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    4. Ebon ManeMarch 27, 2011 at 9:28 AM

      Oh Pinkie, you so crazy.

      I was actually eating a cupcake when I read this and was uncomfortably reminded of certain infamous works on this site. What does it say that my appetite did not disappear at the reminder?

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    5. ZarkanorfMarch 27, 2011 at 9:38 AM

      That story went from scary to incredibly silly.

      And now the three fillies are scarred for life.

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    6. CupsMarch 27, 2011 at 9:51 AM

      I'm glad you submitted this here! It's a quick little chunk of comedic joy. It's just... fun. I love fun things. :D

      My favorite memory from this will always be Pinkie's quote from inside the bush, when I still wasn't sure if this was grimdark or not, because either way it was just epic.

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    7. DaffodilMarch 27, 2011 at 9:53 AM

      If MlP was aimed at a slightly older age group, I could see this being an episode. It's adorable.

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    8. RidleyMarch 27, 2011 at 9:57 AM

      I was so worried before I read the flashback, and I haven't even FINISHED that other fic. Great job, everypony was in character and it was fun to read. :)

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    9. Star WhistleMarch 27, 2011 at 10:05 AM

      Oh, Pinkie... don't you know it's creepy to make a life-size sculpture of your friend?

      @Ebon Mane
      That's because you're an omnivore!

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    10. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 10:23 AM

      Some quotations and stuff were kind of odd

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    11. Cray0nMarch 27, 2011 at 10:39 AM

      @Anonymous Yeah, I noticed too. Some of the wording and the misuse of quotations marks made it kind hard to read. I edited it up a bit to make it easier on the reader, but I guess he decided to use his original instead. It was a really fun story nonetheless.

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    12. SirLeandreaMarch 27, 2011 at 11:59 AM

      That really was good. I so wanted to scream cupcakes but this is so much better. Definatly a good link to throw at people who just read the original.

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    13. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 12:18 PM

      Highly enjoyable story. I noticed some awesome references to "Bittersweet" as well as "Cupcakes".

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    14. Nova25March 27, 2011 at 1:29 PM

      Well... sure seems an incalculable amount of times better than a certain ''story'' (as far as one could DARE call ''that'' grimdark thing, a story...), which name shall not even be thought.

      For a second I feared it might have been a Replica of ''that'' story.

      But, raspberry jam! So, it's all good. (I might sound confusing, but just a bit)

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    15. SandmanMarch 27, 2011 at 1:51 PM

      Nice story, but the quotations are weird.
      The story seems familiar though.

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    16. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 2:04 PM

      @Sandman You might be thinking about the story where "Cupcakes" was a hallucination suffered by Rainbow Dash, who then went to Pinkie Pie to sample cupcakes that she accidentally mistook for being made from ponies. (They were actually made from rainbows.)

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    17. BlueshiftMarch 27, 2011 at 2:33 PM

      Which quotations are coming up weird for people, I can't spot anything wrong D:

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    18. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 2:39 PM

      @nova_25

      >post comment on da
      >copy
      >paste
      >profit?

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    19. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 2:44 PM

      @Blueshift You didn't use them properly. Each time a character speaks, you should begin a new paragraph. You also didn't make it very clear who was saying what. It's understandable, but you could have used an editor.

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    20. SandmanMarch 27, 2011 at 2:52 PM

      @Anonymous No, I've read that and wasn't that fun.

      It was more that the plot is familiar, and not to any pony fic.
      I think it was a short story about a boy thinking a women was killing and cooking dogs, he saw dog heads in her oven and her wearing what looked like a blood-stained apron. In fact she was a sculptor and was making clay replicas of the dogs.

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    21. Cray0nMarch 27, 2011 at 3:08 PM

      @Anonymous

      *ahem*

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    22. Lurks-no-MoreMarch 28, 2011 at 3:58 AM

      Pinkie is someone I could easily see making life-size edible versions of her friends. Especially Rainbow Dash. (Subtext, what subtext?)

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    23. RainbowfinchbirdMarch 28, 2011 at 1:18 PM

      me:Night mare moon????????
      Nightmare: WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
      Me: fights to death
      nightmaremoon dies
      R.I.N.P Nightmare Moon
      RINP means
      Rest
      In
      No
      Peace

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