• Story: Within and Without (Update Complete!)

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    Author: Cloudy Skies
    Description: Twilight and her friends are approached by Princess Luna who asks a few simple questions that trigger a long and perilous journey. Did you ever stop to wonder what became of Trixie, Gilda and Blueblood after your encounters? Who will benefit from seeking the answers - you, them, or I?
    Within and Without (All Links)

    Additional Tags: Long, Peril, Perserverance, Self-Realization, Affection
    Tuesday, September 27, 2011 op
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    211 comments:

    1. TwiLunieNovember 24, 2011 at 6:45 PM

      An amazing read. I loved EVERY MINUTE of it!

      There are not nearly enough good Twiluna fan fics out there, but this one topped all of the ones I've read thusfar.

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    2. ColdGoldLazarusDecember 12, 2011 at 2:10 PM

      I am not that big a fan of Twiluna. I will say that straight up. I have been, am, and will be a FlutterTwi shipper.

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      Damn, was this good!
      This is the kind of psycological romance/adventure that I only wish I could write! Everyone is in character, and then some; and overall this is just plain brilliant! I shall have to keep an eye out for anything you write, because I know it'll be good. In short... 6 star.

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    3. StarsDecember 18, 2011 at 7:34 AM

      A very, very good story. My only complaint would be that the last two chapters and the epilogue felt a touch disjointed.

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    4. Niels OlofJanuary 1, 2012 at 12:43 PM

      Thank you for this wonderful story. I delighted in how well the characters worked, and how they interacted and grew. Somehow, you have managed to make me love these ponies and their dear princesses even more.

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    5. Cedric BaleJanuary 1, 2012 at 2:35 PM

      This was an amazing story, I'm very glad I found it. Wish I'd found it while it was still in-progress.

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    6. Nova007February 22, 2012 at 11:58 PM

      brilliant hope for a sequel someday

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    7. AnonymousMarch 10, 2012 at 9:51 PM

      It's been a long time, but I plan to re-read this story sometime soon. It was the first multi-part fanficiton I ever read, and sticks with me to this day. It was a magical experience, and though over time I've found many other great fictions, this one continues to hold a special place in my heart. Thank you! :D

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    8. kesssandrraApril 15, 2012 at 9:26 AM

      I realized that I have yet to comment, and I must remedy this atrocity immediately.

      I loved this fic. It's the only ponyfic with more than 10 chapters that I've ever finished, save my own (and I'm not done writing it yet!). It's #1 on my to-recommend list. I loved the sequence of events, the characterizations, and the fact that somehow, you juggled the Mane 6 + 1 plus ships successfully. Beautiful work, and thank you for sharing it.

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    9. MagicLlamaApril 23, 2012 at 8:19 PM

      Ummm... what? Complete revamp? Whoooooaaaa...

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    10. Cloudy SkiesApril 23, 2012 at 8:31 PM

      Oh dear. First off: The GDocs links are outdated! Please use the FimFiction link! The new version is at http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18270/Within-and-Without

      All chapters have been revised, with special attention to ch16 and the bridge between 21 and the epilogue for consistency. Another epilogue has been added.

      This isn't an attempt to "change" the story; it's still a Season 1 fanfic. It's merely an overhaul (with additions) to make the fic the best it can be.

      Thank you!

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    11. AnonymousApril 24, 2012 at 1:27 AM

      It's funny how this story gets a total revamp just two days after I finally read it.

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