• Story: Learning Curves

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    [Shipping]  Rarijack? Appleity? I wish their names combined better.

    Author: Tumbleweed
    Description: Before the Grand Galloping Gala, Applejack makes a very...personal request of Rarity. How could the Pony of Generosity refuse?
    Learning Curves

    Additional Tags: Short. Sweet. Saucy
    Monday, May 2, 2011 op
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    35 comments:

    1. FireantMay 2, 2011 at 1:47 PM

      Rare Apples? Elegant Cider? Darling Sugarcube?
      Diggin' in.

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    2. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 1:55 PM

      Jackity? Applerare?

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    3. NetkevMay 2, 2011 at 1:58 PM

      "Additional Tags: Short. Sweet. Saucy"

      Am i the only one who gets hungry from reading that?

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    4. Metal LinkMay 2, 2011 at 2:06 PM

      Rare Apple? Apple Jewel? This is hard.

      @Netkev I just want to know why Saucy is highlighted in yellow as if that's the main reason to read the fic because it's saucy.

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    5. FireantMay 2, 2011 at 2:09 PM

      Not even close to Saucy, to be honest. I like the writing, I VERY like the characters - Rarity is SO much Rarity, as only Rarity Could Get, and this is enough for me to love it.

      And because of that, I feel that even short tag is not enough to inform, how SHORT this was, and HOW much more I need to clo... to READ.

      ;)

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    6. BasharoonskisMay 2, 2011 at 2:12 PM

      Oh wow lol, i just read this on FanFiction.net, and when I click back to Equestria Daily there it is!

      Anyways, it's a pretty nice story, maybe a little short but what's in there rocks. I swear, being a brony is slowly turning me furry...

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    7. DaffodilMay 2, 2011 at 2:17 PM

      I'm confused.

      But I like it. And I want more.

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    8. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 2:21 PM

      A cute little story! I love suggestive stories that turn out to be somewhat innocuous, it's always good for a laugh in my book.

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    9. AndrewMay 2, 2011 at 2:40 PM

      @Anonymous

      Rareapple?

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    10. AndrewMay 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM

      I felt it was of appropriate length. Pretty well-made.

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    11. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 2:46 PM

      This is a good one. The writing is ambiguous enough that you could read it as just Rarity teaching Applejack to dance... or read it as something a bit more X-rated.

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    12. NinestempestMay 2, 2011 at 2:53 PM

      Oh god that was, I think unintentionally, hilarious.

      Saucy is an optional tag I think, just becuase it's SO ambiguous.

      Kudos to the author.

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    13. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 3:02 PM

      First MLP fanfic I've read and it's actually good. Really actually good. Was not expecting it.

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    14. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM

      Very enjoyable, albeit the ambiguity was both fantastic and slightly comical. Characters were accurately portrayed, Rarity was awesome. Has anypony else ever noticed that any shipping involving Rarity almost always has her take the lead?

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    15. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 3:15 PM

      Appletini?

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    16. MiyajimaMay 2, 2011 at 3:18 PM

      I suppose it speaks volumes of me that I instantly assumed they were just dancing and was wondering why it had been tagged as shipping. And somehow overlooked all the suggestive bits.

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    17. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 3:18 PM

      Rarejack? Jackity?

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    18. Lurks-no-MoreMay 2, 2011 at 3:41 PM

      Short, yes. Very short. But also sweet!

      I'm very much hoping for sequels or expansions.

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    19. chinlampMay 2, 2011 at 4:04 PM

      Rajack? Apity? R. Jack the 3rd?

      I don't know.

      This was good though, little short, but good.

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    20. NinestempestMay 2, 2011 at 4:43 PM

      The pairing is refered to as AppleRare.

      Gosh guys.

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    21. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 5:34 PM

      Decent, but predictable and generic as hell.

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    22. StreakTheFoxMay 2, 2011 at 6:00 PM

      It wasn't bad...
      It wasn't too good either, unfortunately. Kind of just the "same old same old" if you ask me. You did well author but, I would have liked a better story than "come to my barn so we can make out". Ya know?

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    23. mbulshtMay 2, 2011 at 6:04 PM

      My Little Pony: Dancing is Sensual?

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    24. AliceMay 2, 2011 at 6:36 PM

      @Anonymous: Probably because she fits the Older Woman stereotype a little bit, while the rest of them basically act like teenagers.

      This was short and sweet, though. Write more! :)

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    25. EscherMay 2, 2011 at 8:07 PM

      I did rather see the twist coming from when the music started, but it was very cute none the less.

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    26. LordOfTheWrongsMay 2, 2011 at 9:45 PM

      @Anonymous
      You really think Rarity would let anyone else lead?

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    27. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 11:07 PM

      Rapplety. Jaritack. Rari-apples-for-mah-brain. Hmmm... Well, Apple Jack is orange, and Rarity is white... So why not dreamsickle?

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    28. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 4:37 AM

      > Darling Sugarcube

      Works for me.

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    29. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 8:22 AM

      Applejarity.

      (ohmigosh more than 3 syllables)

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    30. Nova25May 3, 2011 at 11:28 AM

      @Anonymous
      Applerare just sounds tghe best, I think.

      That or Rareapple... Bit Applerare writes better too.

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    31. KkatMay 4, 2011 at 7:18 PM

      Oh this was a little piece of wonderful. Short, but beautiful; both Applejack and Rarity were perfectly in-character.

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    32. ultra8May 6, 2011 at 3:01 AM

      That rocked on a very hilarious level. Cleverly designed so you can (almost) read it both ways.
      Keep it up.

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    33. AnonymousJuly 13, 2011 at 10:13 AM

      ...

      Am I the only one who figured out they were dancing?

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    34. Gallant VisionJuly 15, 2011 at 3:54 AM

      That was awesome! I loved it very much! <D

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    35. AnonPonyJuly 28, 2011 at 1:33 PM

      Wow. um. well.
      Eeyup.
      That's all i can say, really.
      Eeyup. 5/5.
      i think. i don't even know.
      5/5.

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