Author: Ben. X
Description: Something's up with every pony in Ponyville, and Rainbow Dash is caught having to choose who she loves.Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 1
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 2
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 3
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 4
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 5
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 6
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 7
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 8
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 9
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 10
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 11
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 12
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 13
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 14
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 15 (New!)
Everypony Loves Dash Chapter 16 (New!)
Additional Tags: Dash ships with EVERYPONY
190 comments:
Keep going!
This is kinda wonderful. I love how you're writing the characters!
The story link accidentally has the Blogger address stuck on the front, so 404. (Stripping that part off gives the right link.) The owner shows up as Skxtyd if you want to label her/him for it too. (Since the text is too long for a 4chan post I'll assume that she or he is the author for now.)
Once I get some sleep then I'll actually read the story too. :)
Oh my. It's a charming tale.
But, the suspense, it's killing me!
@Fairy Slayer
Woops, fixed it.
That happens sometimes.
Well, you really can't fault their taste.
@AnonymousCool, loyal, and athletic? Rainbow Dash is probably the first crush for half of Ponyville!
I bet
***probably spoilers***
Rainbow Dash wakes up and it was just a dream.
Then she notices everypony in her bed.
***spoilers***
Oh man I worked so hard trying to keep with the puns, then screw up with the title?
C'mon.
This reminds me of the love potion episode of Fraggle Rock.
Or the Care Bears episode with Oopsy and the love colonge.
Which lead to 'love zombies'
What a marvelous story! I <3 it!
This art is so hilarious. The way Twilight told RD about her love is so funny and unexpected for me (Yes, I know she loves reading, but so literally =D )
Anyway, STARVING for moar!
@Anonymous
Or that episode of Buffy where everyone falls in love with Xander. Well this has been the bast scavenger hunt ever!
Cool fic.
I find this story rather riveting, but what exactly is shipping?
From what I can tell, it looks like semi-SFW rule 34 for MLP.
@bubsAKAvermin
Pretty much ponies loving ponies, sfw or not. Though I don't upload the straight up porn stuff.
@Sethisto
Ah, I see what you did there.
>Awesome.
Dash, confirmed for pimp in Chapter 4.
All the young ponies love Rainbow. Tender young Dashfu, they say... If I give you my number, will you promise to call me? Wait until Big Mac's away!
:D
Can't wait for the Rarity chapter.
aww, she left another one
Wow, Dash is really getting passed around a lot in this fic, lol. :P
She's gonna have to choose one eventually; my bet's on Pinkie being the one with the legitimate crush, and somehow something happened to all the others at her party.
Aw this fic just gets more cuter and funnier with every chapter. It's what I love about this crazy fandom lol. That and the art.
I say Zecora it just having some fun with Ponyvile.
She is going to kiss every single pony in Equestria before this is over.
@Pacce
I'm okay with this.
But only if I'm somewhere on that list.
hmm... with the others she mostly seems to give into their advances so as not to disappoint them or make them feel bad, although with Pinkie she kind of seemed to actually get into it after a few seconds, lol. A sign? :P
End of the fic is going to end with a massive outbreak of Mono in Ponyville. Calling it now :B
@Anonymous
That's just because Pinkie was esüecoaööy unimposing.
It's pretty much balanced regarding the characters, so no one can judge yet:
Flutershy being D'AAAAWWW
Twilight going Twilight
Pinkie partyin', even in makin' out
and Rarity being Gaga
Can't wait for AJ. Will there be also some Derpy or some Lyra-Bonbon-3some?
@Anonymous
lol, I meant especially.
Damn typos
@Anonymous
That's a pretty impressive typo.
I plan on getting a few background characters, (I'm doing a Derpy one now) but since they are background characters, they won't get a whole chapter just for them. They'll get a little bit where they announce they're feelings, Like Scratch did.
@BenX
>they're
fffffffffffffffff
Ooh! Is that a Stephen Hawking reference I spy?
@Pecan
uh
Probably not.
Chap 7
BLANK FLANK WOOOOOOOOOT :3
lol, Derpy wuvs muffins.
>Chapter 7
Well that was short and cameo-a-riffic.
@Pacce
Er, I mean cute and caemo-a-riffic.
Cute as always.
But c'mon, it's Sweet Apple Acres! Applewood? What the heck?
@Anonymous
What are you-
OH CELESTIA NO
A definitive age fro Rainbow Dash?
Heresy! Compleat poppycock!
My rage is fueled with the power of a thousand suns!
@MasterMask
Would you prefer I censor it?
@BenX
You're right, it isn't Stephen Hawking, I can't remember what it is, though.
I was talking about the struck-out "And whispered no."
@Pecan
Oh, that's the Watchmen.
Part 8 ended with me trying so hard and failing at keeping myself from laughing XD
>Part 8
I dunno, should I be this touched by that?
Well I am...
Confound these ponies indeed.
So, figured out a way to ship Dash and Applejack eh? After I saw you post about how much trouble you were having I thought it was going to be a bit longer!
I thought you did a pretty good job, keep up the good work! :3
I think it turns out that RD loves all her five friends, no exception.
CONFOUND THESE PONIES!
I didn't like 8th chapter, the other chapters were fine, some funny, some cute. But this one...
I bet the author ships this.
But writing this must be hard, because a lot of people have different dash ships.
@Anonymous
I KNEW SOMEONE WOULDN'T
I really like this arc so far. It'll be interesting to see where this leads to. Great fic!
@BenX
I guess it's because it was a little too much.
I mean, it went like this:
"Hey let's cuddle!" "ok!"
"Hey let's kiss!" "ok"
"Hey let's make out" "hmph!"
"Hey kiss me" "ok"
"Hey let's cuddle, kiss, make out and then tell me you love me" "I love you too"
I keep waiting for this to be a Valentines of April Fool's Day prank
@Anonymous
Yeah, I suppose it was a little much.
I keep trying to up the ante though, making Dash feel more and more uncomfortable until she SNAPS.
I'm all for shipping Dash (preferably with Pinkie, lol), but my only real complaint about this series is that the installments are too short, and feel more like a tease than anything. This one, in particular, needed a longer and more descriptive making out scene, lol. :P
I dunno about anyone else here, but when I'm making out with someone IRL it tends to last for some time, LMAO. Written makeout scenes should, similarly, not be the absolute briefest scenes in their respective stories.
"Look at my wrist, I really must be going."
This is the best written series that I've ever read in terms of fanfiction. Keep at it!
@Anonymous What you seem to be forgetting is that these are ponies. I'm perfectly happy with having the make-out scenes be as bland as possible. Detail leads to squick.
@Anonymous
I dunno. That they're ponies isn't really made all that evident in much of the writing... it's entirely possible to write a make-out scene for these characters and not mention any pony-specific stuff at all. Also, the fact they're sapient kind of nullifies the issue.
Loving this. Currently my favorite fanfiction yet.
A failed attempt by Spike to have a herd of lesbian friends?
>at the beginning Applejack and Pinkie are discussing about who Dash loves.
>now, dash has told them both that she loves them
I love where this is going
CAT FIGHT, CAT FIGHT!
This is just awesome!
Whoa, never thought I'd find myself shipping ponies, but is there any way to keep track of this story? I'm hooked now.
NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE NEED SEX SCENE
@Anonymous
Sir I am going to have to ask you to calm down.
Wait, people didn't like chapter 8? I thought it was really sweet and romantic.
The chapter I didn't like so much was chapter 6. I have nothing against Raridash but I thought Rarity was a lady? Wouldn't she show a little restraint and refinement in her seduction?
Otherwise, I really love the story and can't wait to see how this turns out.
Also, lol at the horny anonymous before me. U DESPERATE BRO? U DESPERATE?
ANONYMOUS IS A FAGGOT.
OH FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY. <3 Doing great! Can't wait to see what happens next.
You really need to update this more often. I need to see what happens next.
Hey! Just got done reading through all 10 chapters! I just wanted to say that I
Really fucking hated it.
Sometimes I'll look at a fic, read through it and say "wow, this is just your average run-of-the-mill shipping fic and could have read 'and then they kissed' and saved me a few extra moments of my life'".
This fic was literally 'and then they kissed' written 10 times in a row. I really tried to find some other way to describe it, but I just can't.
There are perhaps EXTREMELY TINY droplets of what remains of the original characters as the same scenario is replayed for ever chapter.
"Hey Dash, did you come to kiss me?"
"No I came for a question"
"Kiss me instead"
"NONONONONO ok"
"blushed, stroked, kissed, dazed, shy, (insert corny love phrase here)" are in constant reuse throughout these scenes as well, making them stagnate like swamp water.
I am embarassed that my fics have 5 stars on them, because that would imply that they are the same caliber as this flaming piece of shit.
You may say "You should criticize with less rage" but due to the writer's completely retarded writing style and frequent use of "THE CAKE IS A LIE" type of jokes, I can tell he/she/it is the same type of people that I would probably find on gaia online spamming ^_^ emotes. I have no respect for those people.
To top it off, the fandom devours this pile of feces like no tomorrow, craving more of the emotionless writing that is recycled every chapter.
You know what you should honestly do? Call it a troll right now. Come out and say "I CANT BELIEVE YOU FUCKERS ACTUALLY THOUGHT THAT WAS GOOD! HA HA HA" and everyone's eyes will hopefully open and we can begin an era of not celebrating completely shit writing.
Or you can keep pumping out chapters for everyone to shit themselves over, and further satisfy the complete retards that actually enjoy this stuff.
I for one can't wait for the next chapter, where Dash will obviously make out with Celestia!
1 star.
@Cottonmouth
I think it's supposed to be ridiculous dude, lighten up.
...Luna, really? What's next, Celestia?
@Cottonmouth
Well, you can't please everyone, I guess.
I can't tell whether to be more hurt that you hate my fic with such a passion that you'd write so much about it, or that you accused me of using the '^_^' emote.
@BenX
Don't worry bro.
Cottonmouth hates everything that isn't spike with such a passion. And he hates Dash because she's an asshole, well not exactly, he hates us for liking asshole Dash.
And he thinks his tastes > your tastes
@Cottonmouth
"umad" is all I can really say about it, lol. It's completely absurd and that's part of the humor. I think it was funny and accurate how every pony shows their "love" for dash, and dash is being too nice to say "no fuck you all I'm leaving."
Well, different strokes for different folkes I guess.
@Anonymous
Huh... do I know you?
Anyways.
I am not mad that it's "not Spike" or that it involves Rainbow Dash.
I'm mad because it is a completely mediocre piece of writing that is for some reason celebrated by a large number of people.
If I wrote say... a Twilight x Trixie fanfiction and basically copied (with a few changes) the first chapter 10 times, you SHOULD call it a giant piece of crap.
Instead, it would probably be hailed as the greatest story on the blog. That just shows how blind this audience is to remotely good writing.
Also blog owner, if this was supposed to be "ridiculous", shouldn't it at least have SOME value of reading it?
What do you get from reading? "Rainbow kisses x" Rainbow kisses y" "Rainbow kissed z" over and over and over again? YOU DON'T. Defending this garbage is only showing me what complete morons some of you are.
I see everyone who says this as good as the same people who walked out of Transformers 2 shouting about how it was "the greatest thing ever". That's bad, FYI.
I try really hard to love this fanbase, but sometimes I just shake my head in disappointment.
This entry was a little too short, even for this series; and nothing really happened to justify even putting it up at this point.
One man's treasure is another man's trash, I suppose. I understand the dissatisfaction @Cottonmouth is expressing beneath all the rage, what with repeated scenes and whatnot. But I like to look at it as "junk food" (as well as Transformers 2), and I don't know about you, but I LOOOOVE junk food =3
This story is great, hoping to see more! =D
@Cottonmouth
You hate the smiley face emote? Really? Dude . . . who hates the smiley face emote?
You do obviously, but, I mean . . . geez.
I like this story. Its really interesting and I think its kindda funny how every scene plays out like a cheap porno. Except with kissing instead of sex.
You've got me interested though, And I look forward to reading another part.
Anticipation... I have it...
i can see this ending sadly with rainbow getting to the bottom of it then missing when everypony loved her
then a twist where she spikes everyones drinks with whatever the love potion thing was
I just realized something!
This story CAN'T end until Gilda shows up!
I mean, c'mon!
HOW IS THIS GOING TO END!?
WILL THE PONIES THINK DASH RAEP DEM?
WILL THEY EXECUTE SPIKE?
WILL DASH RESPIKE THEIR DRINKS WHEN SHE MISSES THE LOVE SHE GOT?!?
WHAT HAPPEN1!
"Spiked their drinks" +1 internets.
Pretty sure dosing members of the royal family with any kind of potion without their knowledge carries a death sentence, lol. Spike seems pretty out of character now that he's finally shown up; he might hava an ironic sense of humour, but he's not irresponsibly enough to do something like this, lol.
Also, there's no way Rarity would be a better kisser than Pinkie, lol.
SUDDELY CELESTIA OUT OF FUCKING NOWHERE
W-why do I get the feeling Gilda wasn't even drugged and that's just how she usually talks to Dash?
Troll Spike is the best Spike.
If you wrote all this just for the pun of 'Spiking the punch', I will hurt you brony...
@Cottonmouth
lol, you're taking fanfiction far too seriously. Transformers 2 is one thing, people actually got paid to make something that bad which is reason enough to get mad it. These fanfictions are done for free and in the authors' free time. Doesn't matter what they do.
Curses, and I wanted this to be just Dash being so cute and adorable that being drugged wasn't required. Oh well. Who knows? Maybe it turns out Spike spiking the things wasn't required at all and was simply a Red Herring!
"Come on Dash. Literally Everypony thinks you’re the coolest pony ever. Nobody ever notices me, even though I’m just as cool!"
that was written for cottonmouth
This fic is cute and I can't wait to see how it plays out.
Haters gonna hate. 'Nuff said.
officially read all dash shipping here do I have a problem!?!?!
@Connman116
If doing that is wrong, then I don't want to be right.
@MyLittleBrony
Set yourself up for that one, brony.
Spike, you little troll, you! Going to be interesting how all this works out.
As soon as I realized how much the first chapter felt like an insane shipping version of "The Ticket Master", I started over with "Yakety Sax" playing on loop in the background.
Good times.
"Cottonmouth's inane rambling"
Dear Princess Celestia,
Last month, Cottonmouth sadly didn't learn that if you try to please everypony, you often times end up pleasing nopony, especially yourself. And I learned this: When somepony does you a favor, like writing you a funny fanfiction, you shouldn't be overly critical of something generously given to you
-Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle
Well. Ok, I get the point that this story is CREATED to be over the top and ridiculuous to maximum level, and I kinda enjoyed the general Idea of being Loved be every-friggin-pony around - kinda creepy in a LULZ way! But, to be honest, it could be wrapped up in a single chapter - spawning SO many chapters based on the simple, circular chaing of commands here simply stop to work its magic. And then, it became tedious to read. So, 3 stars here - it was fun, but WAY overdone ;)
Over 100 comments, even though I haven't updated in forever?
I consider this a great success.
I should also probably update.
@BenX
Yeah you should
Rainbow pony is BEST pony.
@Sethisto
can you add an "intolerant" button to comments?
@Cottonmouth
You're actually kinda funny
...it's ok, we still love you
..........^_^
@DooDawDay
Best way to end a comment
ever
Anyone else getting a Googledocs permission error on the latest two chapters?
Need premission. Herp.
Aww, man! It's been so long since I read all of it that I forgot. Well, looks like I got a good bit of reading to do :P
I just realized Gilda said "It's always something," in Part 12.
*massive groan*
I sent him an email to unlock it, de-bumped until then.
I say it should be called Everypony loves Rainbow. you know, rainbow, Raymond? I crack myself up.
Love this story, personally hoping for Twi or AJ in the end. Pinkie would be alright.
Normally I don't care much for shipping, but I've really enjoyed this series! The use of the love potion keeps it plausible without romantic pairings destroying the show's continuity.
so, I am now in chapter 8, and I wonder what caused this mess.
my current ideas:
- a GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXY conspiracy
- Zacora's shady new drug
- Celestia fooling around
- friendship
"except scratch, she's cool"
I lol'd
Needs one last chapter, and i'm good.
Or a two parter finale.
Chapter 14: Ouch, Zecora dialogue with genuine rhymes! No wonder these last two chapters took forever. Bravo.
Fortunately for me, I didn't have to wait a month and a half... lol.
Now hurry up and get to the conclusion >_>
Not a fan of shipping but this was funny good job.
A long time ago I told myself never to get into this shipping stuff because it sounded so incredibly creepy, but here I am, sitting in front of my screen at two in the morning having just read all fourteen chapters in a row and I must say, well done. A lot of it was genuinely funny, the characters were spot on and I found myself giggling like a little girl (being a full grown man) more than once at imaginary magical ponies making out with each other. Somehow what I imagined to be creepy turned out to be cute, and didn't even seem sexual to me at all. Like it shouldn't, I mean, we're talking about a kid's show here.
A month and a half? wow, I hope i don't have to wait much longer for more chapters.
MAI HUNGRY EYES DEMAND MOAR
Two awesome chapters! This is probably my favorite [Shipping] story on the blog, if only because it tackles a subject I don't really care for so light-heartedly and outrageously.
That said, I think it could probably stand to have one more chapter, wherein all the ponies get cured and deal with the massive awkwardness of what they just did.
NEEDS MORE UPDATES!
Will there be another chapter where everypony is all awkward?
@Anonymous
What this one said. Epilogue maybe?
I would really like to see their reactions once Rainbow Dash tells them their whole story.
Trixie gets to make out with Dash's candyvag AND accompany her on the adventure while Gilda doesn't even get a hug. *crosses arms* That bitch can't win for losing.
Anyway, still funny.
that was pretty funny, i'd like to see what twilight does to spike because of that mess.
also, aaaaaawwwwkward friendship times ahead.
I'm surprised that RD hadn't tried to beat Spike to a pulp just yet....
This story gave me a boner. Not even kidding.
KEEP GOING!
is it over? o.o? CAUSE IT NEEDS MOAR!!!! FREAKIN HILARIOS!
Into the first few chapters I made the prediction that the whole incident was caused on the account of Spike.
Essentially, I had thought that it was perhaps an outcome of a ploy to make Rarity fall in love with him at Pinkie's party, but it went terribly wrong and either he assumed it to be a dud or was off trying to fix it on his own.
I was close enough though, I guess.
ummm... DONE?!?!?
your kidding right? you NEED to finish this. PLEASE? I neeeeed resolution. I know i'm supposed to assume that since they have an antidote now, the whole thing is better. but why not have RD distribute the antidote and SOMEpony is still in love with her and now finally has the courage to confess her feelings? or just SOME kind of closure! hell! have everypony love her anyway! or have NOpony love her, jesus, at this point i just need closure, have the death star wipe out equestria as an example to princess leia! I don't know, SOMETHING!
... you know, if you want too...
@DooDawDay
but ya, I thought it was really good...
Pinkie. Forever. And ever. And ever. Anyway, real nice job man.
@Anonymous *eyes widen* O_O..I-I...I love you dash. KISS ME~
YOU GUISE ARE THE BEST
>Comments telling me to finish it
Give me a second, geez.
I'm going to have probably two more chapters, then I'll get to the endings.
I agree with the others we need closure or something have Dash's friends still love her after they are given the antidote or have Dash love them(I mean she has said she loves them back and she kept getting intimate with them more and more) or if you just what a single definite relationship have one pony still love Dash even after they got the antidote(if you do this I suggest a pairing that is not done by many people like DashXDerpy; like have Derpy try to give Dash a love letter like before and Dash tells someone to give her the antidote only to find out that she was already given it or something). I WANT TO READ MOAR!!!!
Also I just have to say I found this story very hilarious harem in stories are usually funny and that is really true in this case.
I was smiling and laughing all the way through the story. I wouldn't be surprised if Rainbow Dash decided to murder Spike though....
What did I just read?...
omfgrainbowhadathreesomewithcelestiaandluna
I really enjoyed the humorous take on shipping. Despite some bothersome issues with grammar, I found myself laughing pretty hard at times.
*facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof**facehoof*
Chapter 4 - How can you scratcha record to where it says, "I love you"? That would be the (considerably) the world's greatest pick-up lines.
Chapter 9- o.O did…did I just get a boner?!¿¡?!¿¡ (no joke)
why is it that lesbian ponies are cute??????? TELL ME JESUS TELL ME!
(D4SHTH3R4INB0W)
BEST STORY YET I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE
Ha. The best parts in my opinion were, "Except for Scratch. She's cool," and Rainbow Dash having a threesome with the princesses. Great story.
I assume there's one last chapter to release.
Dunno if it was mentioned in the comments but the tenses change a lot and it's really distracting :( .
I hope Rainbow Dash goes with Flu-HHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG
I laughed so hard at the Rarity chapter.
I had only one thing on my mind: "Mrs. Rarity, you're trying to seduce me, aren't you?"
@BenX
>nearly 2 months later
>no update
I am disappoint.
Yay, this updated again! With two good but...very short chapters. Yes, you are a good procrastinator.
Nopony rests untill everypony's boned Dash.
Was the fight with the giant snake ripped off from "It's a Dangerous Business..."? Because that's what i thought of, and it made it all the more comical. Glad to see this finally updated!
Yeeesss the perfect way to tell a story. You release some juicy bits and then walk away for a while and come back, and you have us all squealing with joy when it gets updated. As much as I hate to say it, such "procrastination" gives the story time to become fresh again in our minds, so to speak, making it an overall better experience.
There are quite some mistakes in the earlier chapters but I can't help but ignore them for the story is too fun. :P
That was far more entertaining than it should be, poor Rainbow Dash... or should I say lucky?
Never thought I'd see this story again! Haha
It's a good read.
This one made me giggle. Waaay funny.
I have a feeling Pinkie's still going to love Dash.
Good read, as usual,but the grammar seems sloppy. Makes it a little hard to feel invested when my mind is nitpicking every paragraph.
@ToonNinja
Meanwhile, here I am not even spacing words properly.
...Do as I say, not as I do.
I thought this was finished already to be honest. Not that I'm complaining.
There needs to be a crossover ship fic with Rainbow Dash and Samus Aran: the respective whores of their medium. Or perhaps they team up to sexually conquer every living thing in each of their universes? The possibilities are endless.
But srsly, no more Skittles jokes plz.
Ship ALL the ponies! :D
there are, uhm, a couple problems in the last two chapters.
" ... bolted off in the opposite direction, Spike gripping Dash’s tail ..." opposite directions but Spike's on Dash's tail?
"It was about to snap again when a large box suddenly hit it in the head by a huge box." probably should take out the last few words from that sentence.
"Spike around for the source quickly while ..." Spike what now?
there are more, uhm, but those are a few of the things i noticed. don't get me wrong, this is a really funny series and i'd love to see the end. i just want to help out if i can.
sorry ...
This was.... Really bad. Terrible writing, I don't know how people like this.
@Anonymous It's parodying shipping fics. The writing is intentional.
@Minalkra
You're right about the other two but the first one would be opposite direction from the monster. They were walking in one direction, tripped, noticed the monster behind them and went running in the opposite direction. Clear enough for me I guess.
So... will the pricesses get some antidote? Or will the fic end with Dash being taken to Canterlot to be their shared concubine?
Enjoying this story a tad too much probably. It's nice to read a bit of randomness after so much Adventurous Grim-Dark serious fics.
My Celestia I remember when this was first posted nearly half a year ago... Wow this is kinda nostalgic. Also please please please keep writing this bro!
@Anonymous
Depends on whether or not the author has ever seen The Outer Limits...
...which would be hilariously awesome, BTW...
I find it funny how I read the "MAKE ONE MORE PUN" part in chapter 16 in Samuel L. Jackson's voice.
Read some of Cottonmouth's fics and Im not exactly impressed by them. :/, sure; I can't do better, but at least I admit it. Lol.
.................^_^
Sorry everyone, I've just been so busy and everything, I figure I'm not gonna finish the story. Sorry, I knew you were wanting an end, but you can figure out the rest here, I'm sure.
JUST KIDDING! That was me, I'm nopony important, trolololol. It ain't legit, I'm sure he's working on a great ending to match his awesome writing. ;p
If it were me, I'd make everyone take the antidote except Pinkie Pie. Otherwise I'd hang myself from the highest cloud.
Still waiting for the point where one of the other Mane 6 confesses to Rainbow Dash that SHE DIDN'T ATTEND THE PARTY OR DRINK ANY PUNCH AND SHE ACTUALLY LOVES HER WHARRGARBL
oh god what is wrong with me
"EVERYBODY OUT!!!! Except Scratch, shes cool."
NEEDS AN ENDING
This fic really needs a conclusion, I'm seriously hoping there is one D:
Also, where is Octavia for this? It would of been really interesting to see that.
I was pretty sure this was going to end with the antidote being given out to anyone, but the mane cast are still in love with Dash.
Now we'll never know.
MAKE ONE MORE PUN! I DARE YOU TO MAKE ANOTHER PUN MOTHERBUCKER!
I know that wasn't actually written, but I read it as a parody of "Say 'What' again!"
This needs a conclusion!
throw me on the list of people who'd like a conclusion.
Or did Ben X quit?
Man, I need to finish this.
Yes you do need to finish this. Granted the chances of it going the way I like best are slim but you never know...
Also I enjoyed this it was silly and fun. Hence the comment of wanting you to finish this.
As one famous pony would say, "So awesome!"
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