• Story: The Price of Loyalty (Update Complete!)


    Author: Semolika
    Description: Rainbow Dash, the most talented flier in Equestria, is struggling with strange emotions. Though normally confident and bold, she begins to grow quiet and nervous when in the presence of a certain lavender unicorn.

    When a terrible storm strikes Ponyville, Rainbow Dash is the first pony to drop everything and come to the rescue. However, when Twilight Sparkle insists on keeping an eye on her, Rainbow finds herself fighting two battles on completely different fronts: one to overcome the perils of the storm, and another to confess her feelings to the mare of her dreams.
    The Price of Loyalty Part 1
    The Price of Loyalty Part 2 (New!)

    Additional Tags: Storm, Sadness, Confessions, Shipping, Determination

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