• Story: Through Simple Eyes

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    [Normal] Calling Big Mac Simple!?  The dude is a mathematics genius if the fans have any say in it! Also Written by PhoenixReece
    Description: A day in the life of Applejack's quiet brother. Everyone's got their own opinions, what does Big Mac think that he doesn't say out loud?
    Through Simple Eyes
    Saturday, March 12, 2011 op
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    9 comments:

    1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2011 at 11:28 PM

      Entertaining piece. I'm no writer myself, so I can't say much more than that Big Mac is always fun to read and that having all six main characters was nice, if a little contrived. Needed more Derpy though. Because everything's better with Derpy.

      Also, that ending. Darn near fell out of my chair when I read it. E'yup.

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    2. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 12:11 AM

      Thoroughly enjoyed it. Decent characterization.

      And I really should add another star just for that ending...

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    3. TekaramityMarch 13, 2011 at 12:55 AM

      Big Mac! Great choice. I'm drawn more toward 'fics that touch on side characters. Gotta admit, I also felt that half of the main cast felt shoehorned in, but the spontaneous (and welcome) appearance of a Pinkie song made my day. I liked it about as much as I expected to - which is to say, 'twas fairly good.

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    4. Desert RoseMarch 13, 2011 at 7:46 AM

      That was really good. I hope there's an update.

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    5. PacceMarch 14, 2011 at 3:15 PM

      That was a wonderful read.
      I look forward to whatever else you produce.

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    6. NaxtsMarch 14, 2011 at 3:45 PM

      This was great! Its a really good story and I thought that the way you characterized him and the other ponies were really great and I thought that it was a really cute story.
      I love it =)

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    7. AnonymousMarch 16, 2011 at 1:46 AM

      I liked it. Seemed like it could be Big Mac having these thoughts even though it could also have been Forrest Gump.

      Also even though I laughed at the L4D reference Im still not sure if it has any place in the story.

      Only complaint is that I would like to think that Big Macintosh has friends of his own or at least others who he has a relation to (Not counting Keith), yet we dont see him enteract with noone but the main cast.

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    8. ultra8March 18, 2011 at 3:41 PM

      Sweet little story. Definately 5 star worthy.

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    9. JonathanOctober 26, 2011 at 8:25 PM

      in all honesty i think bigmac and fluttershy are mostlikely to get togather, why do you ask? (and im serious here) flutts has a huge bondage fetish (return of harmony episode 2) and big mac is just as quite and polite, not tomenchion strong... so yea

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