Author: Squeak
Description: A blue box has fallen out of the sky, and crashed right into Twilight's Library! A strange brown stallion, calling himself the Doctor stumbles out. Soon after, strange stone Pegasus are everywhere, one of resident weather ponies has vanished, and Twilight is tossed in the middle! The Doctor and Twilight have to find out what's going on, before it's too late!Number 12
Number 12 Part 2
And part 2: Traveler!
Description: The Doctor and Twilight leap into the future, though it may be a far darker place than they envision. In the mean time somehow the Doctor keeps crashing around Ponyville, something to do with Fluttershy, but what?Traveller (New Part 9!)
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184 comments:
Thanks Blog Pony!
ReplyDeleteTo Be Completed. Either tomorrow, or the 5th. Sunday if my cold gets the best of me. In the mean time. Enjoy!
Comments appreciated!
Love it already.
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear it! It should be done soon!
ReplyDeleteI was waiting for this!
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying this story, but the grammar-nazi in me is getting twitchy every time it sees the weeping _angles_ (as opposed to ANGELS).
ReplyDeleteIt makes me sad for geometry. :(
Sorry, I just noticed. That's embarrassing. Thanks for the heads up! It should be up to snuff now!
ReplyDeleteGlad you're enjoying it!
Wow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteI think I'm becoming a fan of your writing, Squeak.
Wow, thanks!
ReplyDeleteMFW I can't post a face when I have fans.
*EEeeeehhh*
-spoilers- ?
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw that those god-forsaken stone angels where in this story...
Nope.jpg?
This is great! You need somepony to go over your story and fix the remaining grammar and spelling mistakes, but the story itself is excellent. Keep at it!
ReplyDeleteI would just like to add that, while several other people had encouraged me to watch Dr. Who over the past six months,this is what convinced me to finally do it. I finished the episode "Blink" tonight, and the combination of the show and this story made both of them far more entertaining.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work, and I expect/hope for more in the future.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI got someone into Doctor Who! That is so awesome! Thank you! Glad you liked it! Welcome to the world of the Whovians. *EEEEEEHH* Knowing that tickles me so much. Thanks for reading!
Jesus, this may be one of the best stories I've ever read--and that includes published ones, mind you. Your work is brilliant, and I found the characters especially well done, this (referring to Number 12) honestly seems like it could've been an episode of either show.
ReplyDeleteAlthough short, Traveler also has me hooked, and I eagerly await the next installment.
I really liked this fic, because it's a True Crossover. It manages to capture the feel of both a Doctor Who episode, and that of an episode of MLP:FiM at the same time.
ReplyDeletesqueak seriously, marry me now!
ReplyDeleteI will be waiting for you in Notre Dame Cathedral in Paris.
also bring a shobel with you
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteOh Wow!! Thanks! That has to be one of the best compliments I've gotten! Thank you! I shall work diligently to keep it up!
@RommyWolf
Thank you! I try to keep it consistent, it's hard, but wish me luck!
@Maxie
But I'd already gotten tickets to Venice! Darn, oh well, Paris it is I'll be there! Shobel in hand!
These are wonderful! I really enjoyed reading these, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteWhen you say "Theme Music," at the start of the story, do you mean the MLP theme, or the Doctor's theme? And if the latter, which one?
ReplyDelete@Darkhawk1
ReplyDeleteWhichever one pops into your head, is the correct one! It's up to the reader.
My fellow ponies, I bring you a
ReplyDeleteDoctor Whooves/Twilight pic that I found on ponychan.
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/pony/src/129909150560.png
@Sandman
ReplyDeleteHa! I love that one! Madmax did it for me a little while back. I'm quite happy it seems to be popping up in places other than 4chan! That's a pleasant surprise.
@Elijah
ReplyDeleteReally?
Cool, Madmax does damn good work.
I did not know who drew it and thought it fit with this story well enough to post.
I do not think that there is a unit of time small enough to measure the time between I saw this and when I saved it. Definitely one of my favorite images.
@Elijah
ReplyDeleteActually I thought I was the one that requested it I thought. She did it in an effort to cheer me up a little while ago. I adore that image.
am i the only person who read all of the doctors lines in david tennants voice?
ReplyDeleteI love this story! <3
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I don't like is the severe lack of Rainbow Dash.
And here come the reapers.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous You are not alone, I do the same thing.
YES
ReplyDeleteSqueak, you managed to capture the Doctor's mannerism and you've made him credible as a pony. Your story is captivating, well written and I really can't wait to see how you continue and conclude the story. Keep up the awesome work!
ReplyDeleteSqueak, your work is awesome.
ReplyDeleteHey, it already caused a paradox... after all, Twilight met two of 'em in the shop! Get it, a paradox, pair o' doc's, doctor whoof...
ReplyDeleteOh crap, I feel awful about that horrible, horrible pun...
Very nice stuff. As a brony AND a Doctor Who enthusiast, I gotta say you really nailed the characters, no question.
ReplyDeleteAny hope of seeing Dalekorns in a future installment?
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteHa! Glad you like it! Hopefully I plan to remedy that in future installments!
@Steglad, thank you! I'll work hard to keep it up! I'm ecstatic to hear I'm doing well!
@Anonymous, thanks! But, I can always be about 20% cooler.
@Darkhawk1 careful, I may have to steal that one!
@Anonymous, thank you! And yes, you might see Darlekorns in the future! Perhaps some Cyberponies too!
I cant believe this is what make me go and start watching Dr Who =P
ReplyDeleteOh and yes great story =3
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ReplyDeleteAlso an avid follower of MLP:FiM and Doctor Who, I have to agree with Steglad in that you have captured the characters beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThe telepathy with Twilight was a good scene and looking into the mind of a being as old as the Doctor and all that he experienced would be akin to looking into a star. He isn't known as the Destroyer of Worlds or the Oncoming Storm for nothing.
I have to be honest though, I think I may have done a bit of a mental happy dance at how the Doctor snapped Twilight out of her trance.
@locojom
ReplyDeleteHa! Wow! My fic got someone else into Doctor Who!! That always tickles me so much. I hope you enjoy the new world of being a Whovian! We have cookies, bow ties and extremely long scarfs in the corner. Glad you enjoy my fic!
@Sandman
Thank you! I try to keep everything in character as much as possible. And yes, the Doc is mostly patterned after the 10th, but I try to toss in a bit of the 11th and maybe even a little of the 4th while I'm at it.
Glad you liked the the Doctor snapped her out of it! I did it as a little bit of an homage to that art Madmax did. Though it may pop up again. I'm about to head into the future, and who knows what'll happen to the pair of them there! Wish me luck!
@Squeak
ReplyDeleteGood luck!
I'll enjoy seeing where you take us next.
Add one more to that list of people you've gotten into Doctor Who. Right as I type this I'm downloading the latest season on iTunes. (I hadn't meant to get the whole blasted thing, just an episode or two, but I accidently pressed the wrong button! Ha!)
ReplyDeleteAnywho, can't wait to see where this goes next!
I have a sudden urge to watch every episode of Doctor Who.
ReplyDeleteI would just like to say that I just watched my first episode of Doctor Who, and I wouldn't have done it without this fic. Thanks!
ReplyDelete@Brain
ReplyDeleteAnd another one! Wow, it always makes me squee a bit when I covert a brony into a Whovian. I hope you enjoy the Wonderful World of Who! Glad you enjoyed the fic!
@Nikita
Yeah, that'll happen.
So when can we expect the next part? Cant wait!
ReplyDeleteYou can add yet another to the list of people that became a fan of doctor who and its all because of how well written your fic was.
ReplyDeleteOne of the best fanfics I've read in a long, long time. The Doctor was perfect and the story brilliantly Who.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update Squeak! Top notch!
ReplyDeleteWow, did not see the development in "Away from Home" coming. Nice twist!
ReplyDeleteThe best Dr. Whoof yet :D
ReplyDeleteI bet 20 bits that the whole soup was started by Vashta Nerada.
@Nikita I'll put 20 on Vashta Nerada as well. Those suckers would terrify anyone, and rightly so.
ReplyDeleteWow, I've worked up a little backlog of comments over my hiatus! Sorry, I really do dearly appreciate every comment you guys take the time to give me!
ReplyDelete@ThisHomeBoy24
As I've said before, it will never cease to tickle me when that happens. You're welcome! We're both 20% cooler now. Enjoy being a whoovian! Thanks so much for reading!
@Anonymous
Thank you so much! That's quite a good review! I'm so happy about the continually positive response! I shall try to maintain it!
@Windchaser
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I'm setting up for something big!
@RommyWolf
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the twist! There are more to come!
@Nikita/Sandman
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying where the story's going! We shall see if you're correct!
The next part of the story is in the works now! It shouldn't take me nearly as long to finish the next chapter. So keep an eye out! There's things to come, and travels to be had!
I don't know what it is about Doctor Whoof fics, but they're excellent. This is excellent. I tend to be very picky about the fanfic I read, and this is just. IT IS SO AWESOME. I've been checking here daily for updates!
ReplyDeletefor some reason I was expecting that twilight absorbed some of the time lords powers.
ReplyDeleteeverything went better than expected :D
you are great squeak! <3
@Madmax: I'm getting that feeling as well, actually. Either way, this series is awesome, and Squeak is awesome!
ReplyDelete@Reg,
ReplyDeleteWow! Thank you! I'm glad I'm up to awesomeness standards! I shall continue to try and remain there, and stay in the circle of fics you take the time to read! Thanks for taking the time to check this one out!
@Madmax/Brian
The story's not over yet, Maxie! You both may yet be right...muahahahaha! Thank you! I'll try to keep it up!
I think Twilight still has a remnant of her connection with The Doctor, that kind of experience doesn't leave one unmarked. She had power to begin with, but that fragment gives her the knowledge (or at least the intuition) of how to use it.
ReplyDeleteAgain, this story exceeds all expectations and I set the bar quite high for Doctor Who fics. Wasn't expecting Twilight taking over, so kudos for surprising me.
Vashta Nerada are definitely the scariest of the DW creatures to me. Their name literally means: The Shadows That Melt The Flesh, and the fact that they aren't every shadow but they could be any shadow would scare the hell out of me and unbelievably paranoid. Course, anyone not aware of them would just think you're schizto, there's something you can't see that's out to get you.
Princess' deterioration explained.
Really good update, can't wait to see the next.
ReplyDeleteAs a fan of the 10th doctor, you pulled his mannerisms off amazingly. I always believed that it'd be quite hard to pull off the complexity that is Doctor Who but you didn't just accomplish that, but you did it with style. The Doctor as well as Pinkie and Twilight were characterized amazingly and the stories are different but similar enough to the show that it feels comfortable and familiar as if I were watching the real show. Thank you for giving me more 10th doctor goodness.
ReplyDeleteOK, time for me is an issue, and I don't like to stop reading half way through a story. So tell me, how long does this take a fast reader to read?
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI'm a fast reader, it took me around 20-30 minutes to finish Number 12, and Traveler's chapter's are pretty sort. So not long at all.
When might we see an update?
ReplyDelete@ThisHomeBoy24
ReplyDeleteOh, in about an hour or so.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!! I'm glad I did a good job with the Doc. I'm also quite a fan, and I love that people think I'm doing a good job with him. I'll try to keep it up!
GENERAL STORY NEWS
If you'd like to keep track of my progress, and get updates on how things are going. I now have a Devaintart account:
http://squeak-anon.deviantart.com/
@Squeak
ReplyDeleteCan't wait.
CLIFFHANGERS!! :X
ReplyDelete:( Why... Why so many Cliffhangers?
Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh!!!
ReplyDeleteLe Resistance finally.
ReplyDeleteNow we will see what really happened.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWell it wouldn't be a good Who story without cliffhangers :P
"Must every universe have an eighties!?"
ReplyDeleteGreatest. Line. Ever.
And now that I've actually finished reading the new chapter...
ReplyDeleteIt was awesome!
the doctor surely loves peanuts :D
ReplyDeleteGreat story Squeak! It was your series that inspired me to write my Doctor Whooves fic, well, you and Victorian Hellsly!
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the use of Timey-Wimey in the second story(s), can't wait to see how it all ties together!
Read the update on your DA account last night, and once again it was amazing. Can't wait to see the next part.
ReplyDeleteOH CLIFFHANGERS, WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?
ReplyDeleteI enjoy Doctor Who, and I enjoy My Little Pony, so this whole series is like some sort of enjoyment multiplier!
ReplyDeleteIf you'd asked me what I would think of a crossover story before I read this I'd probably have rolled my eyes. This whole thing is way better than it has any right to be! Good job
so awesome!
ReplyDeleteI love it when the Doctor just throws a wrench in everything. :P
ReplyDeleteGood for nothing Le Resistance... Not telling what happened before the chapter ended
ReplyDeleteTHIS LATEST CHAPTER IS FANTASTIC!
ReplyDeleteSO AWESOME!
ReplyDeleteReally good job, Wonderful and filled with Ze Magics
Got to love a good Doctor Whoof story! And so close to the new season start too! Need more, great job!!
ReplyDeleteOnce again amazing update that left me wanting more. Can't wait to see the next Squeak.
ReplyDeleteI have been a fan of Doctor Who for a long while. Now suddenly after being given a link to your story i suddenly have the urge to discover what My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is thanks to you. :D
ReplyDeleteOut of curiosity, might there be more than one doctor in this story, the doctor who visited equestria by accident and the parallel Doctor Whoof who is native to the MLPFiM universe and originally lived in Gallopfrey or whatever the ponyverse equivalent of Gallifrey is.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Can't wait for the next part.
ReplyDeleteYour Deviant Art account hasn't had an update listed in a while. Is everything ok?
ReplyDeleteOkay, you've hooked me. This is good stuff. I look forward to the next installment.
ReplyDeleteA disturbing idea occurred to me, did Twilighttwo stole Raimbow wings?
ReplyDeleteJust read Number 12, and it was amazing. Love the name thing, and I stomped in laughter when The Doctor questioned why ponies name everything after horses. (Gallopfray!) Twilight and Pinkie Pie make great Doctor's companions.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for an update! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThanks to you I have become a bronie... can't say that I can complain. I like the show now. A lot.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I have recently been searching for information about this topic for ages and yours is the best I have discovered so far.
ReplyDeleteSpoiler for latest chapter!!!
ReplyDeleteThose things Twilight and the Doctor both found...first thing to come to my mind were Daleks. Am I right?
That was my inference too, Brian.
ReplyDeleteHmm, pinkie spent a lot of time in the inside and then went missing. Well, I'm sure it's nothing important, certainly won't be a plot point.
Actually I have a really bad feeling that I know exactly what happened to pinkie but I won't say anything because it might be a huge spoiler.
OH MY GAWD!
ReplyDelete...I have a feeling I know what's going on now. I'll be squirming in my seat until the next chapter to see if I'm right...
Wow, so many new comments. How wonderful!
ReplyDelete@Hephestus, I inspired you to write something? That's so cool! I'll have to look it up! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like the way I'm writing this!
@Asalis
I've made someone else a brony....again..yep, I can die happy. 20% Cooler, I hope you enjoy the show!
@Benschachar
I'll never tell.....
@kriss1989
Everything's fine, I've just been busy with the storybook project, and the recent remix war. I'm almost done with both though, so the next chapter should be out MUCH sooner.
@Anonymous
Hope you enjoy it!
@Anonymous
Read and find out! (It's in this chapter
@Kkat
Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it, I love it when people enjoy the bits of humor I insert. It was great fun having Pinkie and Twilight in the Tardis for the first time.
@Anonymous
Thank you! There are some great Whoof fics out there, that is a very high complement! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@Brian
Sorry, if I told you I'd have to kill you.
@Escher
Oh yes...certainly not a plot point...nothing planned there....nope...not me.....ignore the pony behind the curtain.
@Anonymous
Hope you enjoy it when it comes out! Things are coming to a crescendo .
What are the metal cylinders?
What happened to the Doctor, and for that matter, Pinkie Pie?
How will they stop the reaper 50 years in the past?
What is the future Doctor crashing around ponyville for?
What's any of this got to do with Fluttershy?
Find out next time on,
Traveler.
In anycase, the next chapter should be out a lot sooner this time! Sorry for the wait! You guys are awesome!
You are a marvelous writer Squeak, i enjoyed the reading a lot and i require, if it is no rude to ask for, more of your creations.
ReplyDeleteStay awesome forever. :D
At 1st and saw a new chapter I was all
ReplyDelete:D
and when I read it I was all
:D
Great work, also (Probably because I read it at 5 in the morning) I couldn't stop laughing when I saw your little comment at the end.
Also a question, how far have you written in the next chapter? Not started? 1? 10 Pages?
Just wonderin'
Heh, I was in the middle of sewing on the last patch on my Raggedy Mare plushie & being generally unhappy as there were no updates thus far aaand BOOM! I looked at EquestriaDaily and there's an update! Yay!
ReplyDeleteYour fanfic is so good I ended up designing a plushie inspired by it! Keep up the good work!
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you! It's not rude at all! I'm always happy to provide my stuff to people who enjoy it! Thank you for reading!
@Besse
Such a complex range of emotion!! JK, Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, liking things is cool. As for how far into the next chapter I am, I'd say about two pages. Its'a biggun though, probably going to end up around 12 or so.
@Meliadhor
That.Is.SO.AWESOME! I want to see that plushie! Ask Seth to post it on the blog, or take a pic and send it too me at: [email protected]. I'd just love to get a look at that thing! Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story that much! The next chapter should be out soon!
Glad you like the idea, the newest update on the Raggedy Mare looks pretty much like this: http://meliadhor.deviantart.com/art/Raggedy-Mare-WIP-2-210146308
ReplyDeleteI hope it's OK to link deviantArt stuff here, my email is currently giving me the 'maintenance & stuff' error message. DERPY, I TRUSTED YOUUUU!
@Meliadhor
ReplyDeleteIt's perfectly okay!
Also, I personally could not ask for a better 100th comment, I never expected it to come with a Plushie! So awesome.
Awesome story as always and I find myself anticipating the next release.
ReplyDeleteAlso thanks for this stories awesomeness for it introduced me to Doctor Who and I am proud to call myself a Whovian now because of it.
Keep up the good work!
The concept of Rainbow Dash without wings make me physically ill but, no, really? No, she, no that's just, no, no, no, that's just, how can, so evil and sadistic bitch!
ReplyDeleteGod dammit some of this is really pissing me off but I'll be damned if it isn't awesome. I love it.
No, that's, how can anyone, THAT sadistic?
Must... the next part soon...
Also why the hell are you so good at emulating the Doctor? That's so badass.
(This is just in reference to Number 12.)
ReplyDeleteThis needs a beta read, and the dialogue was a little tetchy in places, especially near the beginning, but what a cool story! I got chills in the scene where Derpy tells them where the letter came from. It was exciting and well-plotted, bravo.
I need to see where the heck these Weeping Angels come from. Time for Dr. Who!
The Doctor's reaction to Canterlot and Camelot was perfect. Perfect!
ReplyDelete...And the rest of the story was great too!
... Omg this is awesome...
ReplyDelete"Something insignificant"
ReplyDeleteThat may be one of the best lines I have read in a truly long time.
Truly impressive story.
@Squeak Heh, you got me interested in doctor who again. Before the current doctor, the plot was easier to follow. But, I'll try my best to keep up. Now, all I can say is, MORE.
ReplyDeleteAmazing. Complex plot, excellent characterization, and incredible dialog. You really captured the feel of a Doctor Who episode here.
ReplyDeleteGreat work, keep it up.
Hmm, I wonder if Twilight gets to meet Twilighttwo...
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the few fanfics that has absorbed me and given me the desire to read more.
ReplyDelete@RommyWolf
ReplyDeleteYes and it does it without betraying the spirit of either series it is just that awesome. I've loved Dr. Who ever since I was a kid. MLP not so much but it's got good characters, some interesting stories, and some wonderful easter eggs for the geek in me.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, this must be completed...it's required by law!
ReplyDeleteAmazing story so far, I'm fairly certain this was the only Doctor Whoof story I've read on Equestria Daily and it's still something that I enjoy completely. I love the thought of Rarity going along with the doctor, She actually fits quite well not that I think about it.
ReplyDeleteHaving the Doctor in my own fic, I intend to look back to your work to get a better feel of his mannerisms. It's one thing to have him spout a few lines he's known for, ponyfied or not, but it's another to go off of his mannerisms and way of thinking to simply have him say anything you wish with the exact tone you'd expect.
All in all, Thanks for the good read!
Your writing makes me scared to read any other Doctor Whoof fanfics on Equestria Daily. I want this to be the official way the Doctor comes in to Equestria, because your characterization and dialogue is astoundingly accurate.
ReplyDeleteThis has been a fantastic read. It has kept me quite busy. This is rather good, hope to see more of this out and about.
ReplyDeleteI just finished Chapter 5 and am definitely looking forward to more. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteI finished the first part of 12. I gotta say I enjoyed it. Great sense of humor, and a fantastic job of replicating the feel of a Dr. Who episode with a backdrop of purple and pink prancing ponies.
ReplyDeleteWho'd have thought such an odd combination would work so well?
Any sort of timetable on an update? This has been silent for a long time. Whoof withdrawal. :(
ReplyDeleteJust read everything posted here so far. While the grammar/spelling can be minor problem, you characterized everyone perfectly. I must say, this is the best Whoof fic I've read. Keep up the great work :D
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWow, so many wonderful new comments. I'll reply to you each in turn later.
In anycase, the new chapter should be out by the end of the week with any luck! In the mean time hold tight!
-Squeak
Excellent stories! Can't wait for the next chapter Squeak!
ReplyDeleteAn update? Hallelujah!
ReplyDeleteThanks for keeping this going. This is definitely my favorite fan-fic on the site. Looking forward to the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteYES! It updated! :D
ReplyDelete*One read later*
And it's still a great read. Keep up the good work, Squeak!
So fucking awesome!
ReplyDeleteHmm, I dont know if this was intentional, but if Twilight met up with Twilighttwo and nothing happened, does that mean that Twilighttwo isn't actually Twilight's future? No paradoxes happened, and we learned before that this universe isn't used to being manipulated through timestreams. This means one of many things: either you forgot that a paradox would result, the universe has gotten used to the Doctor in it by now, Twilighttwo is a copy of Twilight and not a direct future, or the initial paradox was something else entirely that was a lot more complicated than I initially thought. Anyway, still a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more of this in the future.
ReplyDelete@Ponies!!!
ReplyDelete"People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but actually—from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint—it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly...timey-wimey...stuff."
— The Tenth Doctor
Still, you raise a good point.
@Ponies!!! There's also the implications of Twilight knowing exactly how her past self escapes from her and not planning accordingly. "Now, then, Dalek. Exterminate them. Wait, I've heard this part before, haven't I? Oh, crap this is the part where the doctor crashes a train into my factory, isn't it? Damn, I've known that for over 40 years, why didn't I plan on that?" See Time Crash for probably the best example of this sort of thing.
ReplyDeleteThat could have also made for a funny scene like this, "I'm not you. You're a twisted abhorrence." "Oh no? Think of a number. Any number." (Both at the exact same time) "7. 13. 45. Applejack. Canterlot, Manehatten, Hooftah. Okie-dokie-loki-ramma-lamma-ding-dong."
Day 1: read the first story.
ReplyDeleteDay 2: read the second story.
Day3 : watched the whole first season of Dr. Who.
Anyhoof, You are awesome Squeak
did anyone else play the Doctor Who theme music when it said *theme music*?
ReplyDeleteDoctor Whooves is indeed quite Whoovian, but after about the sixth time he get's Twi's name wrong, I wanted her to start hitting him until he got it right. When Doctor meets someone new, they tend to follow him around dumbfounded, but for me that doesn't really mesh well with ponies.
ReplyDeleteI loved how the Doctor couldn't believe in what kind of universe he has landed now:
ReplyDelete"So, she is a basicly a goddess, why are you calling her princess?"
"Does everything here has to be named after horses?"
"Equestria? You aren't kidding, right?"
"Fillies and Gentlecolts ... no way!"
i just made my own tv intro kind of thing to doctor whooves and uploaded it to youtube its my first attempt at using Sony Vegas and its not amazing but still...
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOC4EtApdmk
love the storys btw
got a little confused at first when the doctor said "darlocks" i thought it was a typo lol keep up the good work! :D
This is amazing. Keep up the good work, Squeak!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderfully written! The plot has me totally absorbed, I can't wait for it to be concluded!
ReplyDeleteFirst unfinished Fanfic I've bothered to bookmark, too.
ReplyDeleteThis website needs an RSS feed lol
How many months since this last updated? I thought that this fic was dead, but now I am all /)(^3^)(\.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteAn RSS feed?
You mean one like this one: http://feeds.feedburner.com/EquestriaDaily ?
There's going to be quite a few answers next chapter...
ReplyDeleteOh man, that was intense. These last two chapters are just paradox city here, and still no reapers have come. This makes me think that initial paradox is some huge really complicated paradox.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm so happy Fluttershy is finally in this story (my reaction while reading: yesyesyesyesyesyes!). I absolutely love how you're giving each mane cast character their own role without making them all companions of the doctor. This is definitely one of the best fanfics on this site.
GAHH THIS IS WHY I HATE INCOMPLETE STORY'S!
ReplyDeleteI get caught up in a wonderful narrative that's doing its job in making me exited to read more, only to reach the end of the road with a under construction sign blocking my path. All the momentum ending in a big unsatisfied heap.
Please update and finish this story soon, my patience is being spread thin by all of these other story's that have me in the same bind.
I was putting reading this off for a while, now I'm ecstatic that I read it.
ReplyDeleteI have to say, my favorite part so far, besides all of it, was when the Dr. questioned how trains were invented before the steam engine. WHY WERE THEY PULLING THE LOCOMOTIVE IN OVER A BARREL?!
Anyway, tirade aside, this story kept me on edge the entire time, and I can't wait to read more.
-Joe
I like the new chapter and am eagerly anticipating the next one. But, ah, do you actually know much about railroad technology? Don't worry, you left things vague enough that they'll still work, but there are some...oddities in your train design.
ReplyDeleteOh god, still not complete D:
ReplyDeleteIt's still amazing, just... not complete :(
I would like to read this considering I love the doctor who series but is there any recommendation of any seasons to watch first?(I have seen the 5th and a bit of the 6th and just a tad of the 2nd.)
ReplyDeleteThe old series or the new series?
ReplyDeleteWith the old ones, I recommend Tom Baker, Davidson, and Colin Baker The other doctors were good, but those were the one that really stood out for me.
New series? Tennant and Smith are brilliant, but for Celestia's sake, DO NOT WATCH ECCELISON. It's like watching Steven Segal play Jean-Luc Picard. It's terrible.
This still going? D:
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteIt's been less than a week since the last update dude. Chill, he won't leave us hanging.
Anon Imus
ReplyDeleteNOT AGAIN!
I keep stumbling upon unfinished masterpieces-then I have to wait! RAAAAAAAAAA!!!
If it makes the author feel appreciated, this story actually got me into dr who. i didnt know anything about it until i saw a few mlp vids parading dr who. kudos to you
ReplyDelete> If it makes the author feel appreciated, this story actually got me into dr who. i didnt know anything about it until i saw a few mlp vids parading dr who. kudos to you
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I am very much enjoying this story, I was a Whoovian first, and a girl brony second. Once I found out about the Doctor being a pony... you just can't imagine. So I go scouring the internet for fanfics, and I found a real gem. But, as a firm Tennant/10 supporter, why "Onwards and upwards?" Why Not "Allons-Y?" Just wondering, because allons-y is my favorite quote and all... sorry for bothering you with my incessant Whoovian rant. :)
ReplyDeleteHoly balls, I need more of this. The Traveler is amazing.
ReplyDeleteWhen will the next chapter will come out?
ReplyDeleteThis so needs to be updated...
ReplyDeleteHello! To anyone waiting on an update, sorry about the long wait, I've been really busy as of late. But it's coming soon! Just hold out a little longer. You guys are the best!
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Yay! You're awesome!
ReplyDeleteThis story is great! I'm glad to see that it's still being worked on.
ReplyDeleteI hope this gets updated soon
ReplyDeleteWow that was good. I haven't watched any of doctor who and now I am completely hooked.
ReplyDeleteWhy are so many of these fanfics SO DAMN GOOD!?
Squeak said he was going to update today but he hasn't and now I am sad
ReplyDeleteEven sadder
ReplyDeleteI said I would update by NEXT saturday. Not this one. Don't worry, I'm on top of things!
ReplyDeleteOh look I am not sad anymore.
ReplyDeleteToday is the day thank god
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ReplyDeleteno updates... oh well
ReplyDeleteSorry guys! Something came up, just a bit longer I promise.
ReplyDeleteReally.
I'm serious.
I really am. And it will be extra awesome to make up for the long wait.
Squeak I love your story so much that I forgive you, I could wait a whole year for your story but I'd prefer it at least within this month lol you are possibly one of my favorite fanfic writers in the internets :D
ReplyDelete@Darkhawk1 when I read this comment I instantly thought "someone, somehow, MUST make a mixture of the 2 for this story
ReplyDeleteBy far my favorite Doctor Whoof fanfic. Take all the time you need. After all, Doctor Who has nothing but as well.
ReplyDeleteThank you squeak for your fantastic dedication to the Dr Whoof fan fiction! You have inspired me to finally start writing my own spin of a dr who/mlp fanfic (it was originally intended as a dr who/starfox fanfic, but ever since i fell in love with the mlp fim scene, I rewrote the concept to work with mlp. Oh yeah, and the last audio recording was fantastic, hope to see more of Berry Bubbles, Loool!
ReplyDeleteI hope this isn't dead
ReplyDeleteoh please tell me it isn't dead and you will write more if you don't i will seriously cry this is so addicting i need to know what happens next since this is totally what the doctor is like and i can't just stand wait not knowing whats gonna happen!!
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what now?
About time this was updated! Eh.. I can hardly remember whatever was happening!
ReplyDeleteYES! Thank you :). Time to reread this whole series.
ReplyDeleteThis needs more readers. This is awesome! And yay! New chapter!
ReplyDeleteJust read the whole thing. Absolutely brilliant
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ReplyDeleteOh dear me... things just keep going from bad to worse! One monster after another, everything apparently bleak and hopeless! Another universe about to descend into fear and misery and turmoil!
Sooooo... pretty much a typical Doctor Who episode! :D
I shall save the day! (and so Charles swooped in and saved the day! Because he's cooler than even Rainbow Dash... 20% cooler to be exact)
This story is the one that introduced me to how wonderful world of MLP fanfiction. Glad to see it's still in development.
ReplyDeleteI've started reading this recently, and I'm already hooked, you need to do more soon. Also, can you give us an update on Chapter 9?
ReplyDeleteDidn't Squeak-Anon produce what essentially seems to be a dramatic reading of Number 12?
ReplyDeleteSo...when's chapter 9 coming out?
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