Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Story: Hiatus (Update Sequel!)


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Author:
Vargras
Description: After a thousand years, Luna finds herself finally freed from the form of Night Mare Moon - the ordeal has left her weakened, though, and she is ordered to spend the next year regaining her strength and getting herself up to speed on what has transpired during her thousand-year absence. Finding ways to spend that time? That... might be troublesome.

Hiatus

Additional Tags: Luna, Celestia, Absence, Daily Life

[Slice of Life]
Description: A sequel to 'Hiatus' - Spurred on by her sister, Luna decides to open a summer camp dedicated to the arts and sciences in an attempt to become further involved with the daily lives of Equestria's citizens, hopefully improving her reputation in the process. The campers that sign up prove to be more than what the Princess of the Night was expecting, however. 'Camp Counselor' certainly wasn't supposed to be part of the royal duties.
Stuck In The Middle With You (New!)

Additional Tags: Summer camp, friendship, Luna, Mane 6

26 comments:

theexogenerate said...

Shrodingers comment may or may not be first.

Spikely Whiplash said...

@theexogenerate

Did you know that Schrodinger's Cat was originally conceived to show how preposterous certain theories of quantum physics were? True story.

Tim said...

nope, it is first

Mr. Unsmiley said...

Huh. This sounds promising, but it seems to have an idea almost identical to that of Progress.

Homfrog said...

Ooh, I've seen this on FIMfiction.

Vargras said...

@Mr. Unsmiley

I've read Progress before, and they seemed nothing alike while I was writing Hiatus. Regardless, I hope the rest of you enjoy it.

Shadow Heart said...

So, another fic like Progress.

Sounds nice.

theexogenerate said...

@Spikely Whiplash
Yeah, the uncertainty principle and such. I personally agree with special reletivity, although now with those neutrinos reportedly travelling faster than the speed of light...

Jack Knox said...

@theexogenerateIrrelevance levels are at an all-time high!

RED SANDVICH said...

Great story, I recommend it to everypony!

White Ink said...

Wow... we have a Luna fic where everypony is talking about physics is the comments...

Actually, I don't mind. I'll take a look at this story, although it does sound like Progress (which I haven't read, so who cares?).

warhunter said...

@theexogenerate
Actually, they found that experiment to be fatally flawed. They're apparently redoing it.
Good news, this means that nothing-is-faster-than-light is still in effect, and fast travelling to the future is still a possibility.

iisaw said...

@Tim
"nope, it is first"

But not until you looked at it.

Jukashi said...

It's an ok story. Not great. There are a few plot holes, mismatches with the show, and it's sort of simplistic - even a bit cliched at times. A few amusing moments, but I wouldn't read it again.

Autumn Wind said...

Hey, you made it to EqD! Good work!

Also, this is only like Progress in that both follow Princess Luna.

Tundra said...

I saw this a bit earlier this month. It was a good read. Time-consuming, but it was a good read. I really like how Luna effectively banished her nightmare (in more ways than one).
I don't know why the comments are comparing this to "Progress" because I don't see any similarities.

Forderz said...

This... has very little in common with Progress.

I'm with Jukashi here: enjoyed it, but not something I'll come back to.

Vargras said...

@Forderz

It happens. I enjoyed writing it, and I know others have greatly enjoyed it as well, but it won't be everyone's cup of tea - no story ever is.

Still, I appreciate that you both took the time to post comments about it.

richfiles said...

So basically, this is Schrodinger's story...

It is either just like Progress or is not like Progress at all. Without observing the story, it is simultaneously like and not like Progress. Only once I chose to observe it, will it be measured to be one state or the other.

Wow... This is the most intriguing result of a "first" comment in the history of ever!

Vargras said...

@richfiles

Of all the possible off-topic discussions that could have started, we get a physics discussion instead.

And I'm strangely okay with it.

Traxus said...

I really did like this one.

csos95 said...

awesome story im glad its finally on eqd

Xamrin said...

There are a lot of references in this one. One to Oblivion and another to 2010. I thought that was great.

DPV111 said...

I absolutely loved this story.

Bigyeti1369 said...

Its already 100% updated complete

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