Author: Chicken Vortex
Description: A malevolent force has come to Equestria. Can Twilight stop it? Can anyone?Slender Mane
Slender Mane Part 2
Slender Mane Part 3
Slender Mane Part 4
Slender Mane Part 5 (New!)
Additional Tags: Paranoia, Hallucinations, Schitzoprenia, Sociophobia, Multiple-personality Disorder
223 comments:
One thing bothers me. If Twilight and Zecora had to go back to get more salt in chapter two, how come they didn't drop off the berries back at the house? I mean anypony hauling around a heavy sack of berries would probably want to dump it at the first chance.
ReplyDeleteTo tell you the truth, I had been really excited about reading this fic after my sister said it freaked her out, and while I was impressed that it was scary without gore, I myself didn't find it all that scary and to tell you the truth, I was...disapointed.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good story though, and I think Fluttershy is alive, she is, right?
To tell you the truth, I had been really excited about reading this fic after my sister said it freaked her out, and while I was impressed that it was scary without gore, I myself didn't find it all that scary and to tell you the truth, I was...disapointed.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good story though, and I think Fluttershy is alive, she is, right?
I like the person of the Slendermane(man)
ReplyDeleteHe doesnt just kill you but gives you the worst time of your life. Nopony sees him except you, nopony can help you. You are on your own and the way he moves and actes is really awesome.
But sadly this story is to short forits start :(
To many questions are still open and nopony can answere D:
What was Twilight doing at thursday and where did spike go and WTF is there no happy ending god dammit!!!!!!!!
BTW nice story but I want more Slendermare with more background story and explanations
Thats okay, I didn't feel like sleeping tonight anyway.
ReplyDelete5/5 beautifully and masterfully written. art at its finest. rather avant grande compared to much grimdark and creepypasta styling. great work. i wish there was more.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous Anyone else thought a invader zim in that episode where he took kids organs? I dunno, just a thought.
ReplyDeleteRead this last week, loved it!!!
ReplyDelete...i planned on sleeping tonight though
ReplyDeleteYou know, it wasn't scary for me. It was well written, but not scary.
ReplyDeleteI've never been so scared in all my life.
ReplyDeleteI need to read cupcakes again after this.
I've never been so scared in all my life, and I've only finished chapter 3.
ReplyDeletePretty good. this fic is myfirst read and its awesome. with my current standards, 8/10 just because i hate cliffhangers
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ReplyDeletethe part in the hospitle reminds me of something creepy from dead space 2
ReplyDeleteWell, the story was pretty good, but i'd like to do something with that ending. I'm going to see of I can get permission from Chicken Vortex to make an alternate
ReplyDeleteending. Basically a happier ending.
Neeeeehhhhh its scary :C poor Twilight
ReplyDeleteThis is creepy! I love it!
ReplyDeleteI expected a boring Slenderman Lore ripoff when I started this today, but now I am thoroughly horrified by notion of a Slender Mane just popping up behind me whilst walking down long dark hallways or mirrors. Great writing style and awesome plot, I espesially love the epilogue, though it doesn't leave much for a sequel (not that the stiry needs it.)
ReplyDeleteCreepy and scary... I like it~!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteNo... THIS CAN'T BE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No Just No...
ReplyDeleteI FREAKIN ATE A SCARI BERRY!
The cure uuuhhhhhgggg I need the cure
GETAWAY SLENDER MANE
I'm Rainbow Dash enough!
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