[Sad][Adventure]
Author: Captain British
Description: Twilight has begun experiencing visions of Equestria's Future and they do not bode well. The world is falling apart at the seams and Equestria's rulers are missing. Only one Pony knows what is going on, it is up to her to figure out how to stop it and return the world to normal.Elemental Bindings
Elemental Bindings Part 2 (New!)
Additional Tags: Expansive, Pinkamena, Cataclysmic, Trials, Emotional
7 comments:
ohhh.... gonna have fun with this one.
brb
Hmm..... this is rather interesting...
Two equestrian realities?
A hole that could be seen as a wormhole between neighboring universes.
I await, anxiously, for the next installment.
Well, I think I like where this is going. I await some exposition in the next chapter!
This looks promising. Expect me to be watching this.
That said, the document itself has a few spelling and grammatical errors, and the way the paragraphs are structured can make it difficult to tell who's speaking.
The general rule is a new paragraph for each new speaker.
@Anonymous
Aye, I'm aware it needs a bit of re-structuring. I'll get round to it :)
Would you mind kindly pointing out the errors you were talking about?
this isn't going to update soon, is it. :(
~Appletank
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