Description: During the final 24 hours of Luna's banishment, she reflects upon her time in exile, and towards what is to come that night.
good jobe i love it
Interesting interpretation; Though it disregards pretty much everything happening in the first two episodes of the series.Alternative universe, perhaps?
I dunno, in a twisted way it could almost fit.
short, but good
My word, this was one of the first fanfics I ever read. I'm surprised to see it pop up now.I must request that the author contact me at Pridethunder@gmail.com - I want to use something from this fanfic.
Eh, the seam between two parts of this is very... jarring. She goes from 'my love I deserved' it to 'eternal night' with very little encouragement or reason.
This story alone is... fine, but a bit light, I would say.In itself it's an OK story, but it's just that there's not many stuff in it.Basicly, it's a few good points that could be used to make a bigger story... Like the frame for something larger.
^^It makes seance if you see it as Luna having gone insane over the years
I think this story is pretty unique, there are very few that actually touch on Luna/Nightmare Moon whilst still in the moon and whilst it doesn't fit with canon as such it is a nice read.
The road to eternal night is paved with good intentions? Unexpected, but interesting!