• Story: Exiles Final Night

    [Normal] There haven't been many prequels yet to the whole nightmare moon thing.  I'm glad someone decided to do it.

    Author: StarLite
    Description: During the final 24 hours of Luna's banishment, she reflects upon her time in exile, and towards what is to come that night.
    Exiles Final Night

    Additional Tags: Luna, short, prequel, solo, depression

    10 comments:

    1. good jobe i love it

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    2. Interesting interpretation; Though it disregards pretty much everything happening in the first two episodes of the series.

      Alternative universe, perhaps?

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    3. I dunno, in a twisted way it could almost fit.

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    4. My word, this was one of the first fanfics I ever read. I'm surprised to see it pop up now.

      I must request that the author contact me at Pridethunder@gmail.com - I want to use something from this fanfic.

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    5. Eh, the seam between two parts of this is very... jarring. She goes from 'my love I deserved' it to 'eternal night' with very little encouragement or reason.

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    6. This story alone is... fine, but a bit light, I would say.

      In itself it's an OK story, but it's just that there's not many stuff in it.

      Basicly, it's a few good points that could be used to make a bigger story... Like the frame for something larger.

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    7. ^^

      It makes seance if you see it as Luna having gone insane over the years

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    8. I think this story is pretty unique, there are very few that actually touch on Luna/Nightmare Moon whilst still in the moon and whilst it doesn't fit with canon as such it is a nice read.

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    9. The road to eternal night is paved with good intentions? Unexpected, but interesting!

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