That is completely amazing! I'll comment again after I read it. Also I'm pretty sure the title is a Pheonix Wright shout-out, at least I hope it is, I love that series~
Well, both Dash and Scratch are pretty badass. It was inevitable they'd be shipped.
I'm going to be needing more of this.
I look forward to the continuation.It's cute.
There will be more, oh yes, there will be more.I have been bitten by the Shipping Bug and its venom is infectious.
Yeeep definitely going to require more of this awesome.
Awesomely written, so I'll have to agree with the whole "more" thing people keep saying. Great job!
I haven't read alot of fics yet but this is definitely good! I'll be eagerly awaiting more.
thanks for the idea for a new comiche-he-he
The "Rainbow Smash", lol. I must now endeavor to create this drink, or find someone who can. Is it possible to create drinks with that kind of emulsion?
@madmaxBRACE FOR EPIC
@AnonymousProbably not, you'd have to find colored liquors with different densities so they would lay atop each other instead of mixing together.
Reading about ponies getting krunk and going home together, where did my life go so right?
It can be done (sort of)!http://www.alcademics.com/2010/07/the-double-rainbow-cocktail.html
@Anonymoustry the canadian zombie drink http://www.drinknation.com/drink/canadian-zombie This is the closed think I found from the rainbow smash. Also, This was a good story.
God dammit those where good, a big thanks to the author.
I hope there's more.
Nicely done very cute.
I really liked how this turned out. If there's more, I can't wait for it.
It was meant only to be two parts, buuuuut...that's the thing about having open-ended endings.If you all want more, I can write more.
It's not appledash, but damn if it isn't a good fic.
An interesting thought that Rainbow can use her wings to wrap around someone like that, lol.
Soo, safe to assume this gets the popular tag when it drops to the archive then!?
@ScherzoGo onto internets to fapfapfap.End up reading pony stories.Everythingwentbetterthanexpected.jpegAlso: MOAR PLEESE.
Feel free to write as many more chapters of this as you please, the more the merrier. Or mare-ier.Wow, that was horrible. OK, keep writing or I'll make more lame puns!
Nice job with part 3. Sooooo will this still be continuing since Dash hasn't even made it home yet. I feel you could do a lot with her inner confusion of lesbianism. It will turn out really cute I bet.
You know, normally I don't like heavy shipping like this... usually. This and swayback are about the only ones I liked. And I'll be damned if I didn't half swoon and half shudder at the end of part three.... and I'm gay...
@SethistoYes, I think it's very safe to assume that.
This story gets more explicit with each installment, yet I fail to be disturbed by it, lol. In fact, I love it!I hope it continues.
Please, for the sake of all equestria, continue with this amazing and captivating story and make a 4th instalment.
I must agree, keep this going.. It's not explicit, it's just nice.
0.0...more please,uh, if you can find the time, I mean, um, yeah....
I enjoyed it. Very much. Rainbow Dash was so cute, which is something not often seen.Also, your wordplay was great, with 'fillyfooler' and 'Alabamhoof'...well done.
I found the perfect theme song to this..."Smile" by Uncle Kracker. The lyrics just...work. Especially one line in the chorus. You can hear it if you listen.Check it out, there are some YouTube videos of it.
aaaaaaaaaaaand I have a feeling that this fic just single handedly developed most of scratch's fannon.also, how have I never thought of R/FS? seems so freaking obvious now.
I now have an odd fascination for young granny smith and her loose ways.
One problem.Isn't the epilogue supposed to go at the end of a story?I mean, you can't possibly mean for this to end, right?
Enjoyed this story immensely! And as much as I kinda want it to continue, I'd also love to read about how Fluttershy and Rarity got together. That would definitely be an awesome story.
GOD DAMNIT I HATE SHIPPING.So... why is this good?What sets this apart from other shipping stories?
@AnonymousYeah, I totally agree.
It's not surprising Dash can be shipped with anyone. She's guaranteed to either be the aggressor in the relationship, or to play against type to someone else (like Vinyl Scratch). She strikes me as the sort who would jump relationships pretty quickly -- I think she'd tend to avoid a committed relationship, knowing her sense of loyalty would require her to stick with the relationship and leave her feeling tied down.
Glorious. It was a very cute story from beginning to end. How accepting all the ponies were of Dash was just adorable. Also I think the Rarity/FLuttershy development was a nice touch to. I would never think to see those two together but you made it work. Bravo.
@PecanIndeed. After a preformance like this, does he really think he can get away without a BOOK 2?!?
That's it! R/FS is my new favourite ship.
@AnonymousYou could try a Rainbow Brite. That's a scoop of Rainbow Sherbert added to an ounce of Gin & 2 ounces of Tonic Water, & drank like an alcoholic float. You can also Taste the Rainbow (Dash) by pouring 1 & 1/2 oz. White Rum, 3/4 oz. Peach Schnapps, 1/2 oz. Triple Sec & 2 dashes Grenadine over ice in a Collins glass, stirring, then filling the rest of the glass with 7-up before serving.
<My icon best describes my reaction.(Me Gusta, or "I Like")
@Reading Brony: Really? R/FS is kind of the most obvious pairing to me. Rarity is sophisticated and genteel, so she wouldn't scare off Fluttershy, but also rather (ahem) dominating. Aaaaand she's got a shop full of sturdy-but-beautiful ribbons... >_>;
I cried a little. I'M SO RONERY.
really awesome stuff here, greatly enjoyed reading iti got one small bit of crit though.. i think it was in part four where you used teh phrase "tooth and nail"maybe it should be "tooth and hoof" instead?hope ya write more!
This is made of win, awesome, and more win.I D'aww'd heartily several times.
Rarishy/Fluttery = Best ending EVAR.
Turnabout: Turntable? HOLD IT!!! OBJECTION!!!(Yeah, I really love Phoenix Wright)
I'm late to this party, but just wanted to say that I think Scratch's portrayal was totally awesome. The confidence of a hot stage presence mixed with a mature, patient, nurturing spirit makes me dig her character as much as she dug Dash. 5 stars, would read more.
Just finished reading it. Without a doubt, one of the best fanfic of shipping ever to be posted. The ending was very sweet, i gave a 5 star, i oould LOVE to read more by this author.
“Sure as peaches and cream!”I see what you did there ;)
Needs label 'Vinyl Scratch'
Crazy-perceptive Vinyl Scratch is probably my favorite portrayal of her. Also I love how you kind of gave her a thing for ears. :3 It just makes sense that the good DJ would like stimulating the ears of other ponies--one way or the other. ;)
When will it ever just be outright addressed that the gender balance in Equestria is tipped waaaaaaaay to the female side? Seriously, no wonder there's so much girl on girl! There's not enough dudes left!
Amazing, bit heavy on the shipping but pure awsome, I love the awkward moment when pinkie is naming all the filly foolers