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Author: Crash Jet
Description: Everypony has their secrets. Their own 'guilty pleasures' that they try to hide even from those closest to them. What kind of secret does Twilight Sparkle keep to herself, and can she indulge in it when she has the whole library to herself?Twilight's Guilty Little Pleasure
Additional Tags: Random, Secret, Silly, Twilight, Fun
81 comments:
Sounds appropriate for today.
ReplyDeleteTwilight, huh? Sounds interesting.
ReplyDeleteTwilight = me
ReplyDeletesecret =this show
Oh gosh. This was such a fun story to go through. I won't spoil it for you, but let's just say you better be ready for Twilight completely cutting loose.
ReplyDeleteTrust me, it's not what your dirty little minds think. This story is adorkable.
ReplyDeleteAlready read this, the pacing is great for the subject and there was much laughing to be had.
ReplyDeleteUh oh, her birthday next week. I think we all know what happens THEN.
ReplyDelete@ DPV111 Oh that's a relief wasn't so sure I wanted to read seeing that title.
ReplyDeleteso not dirty but something twilight wouldn't do?
ReplyDeleteI read this yesterday, and I D'awed the whole time. Uh DOOR able!
ReplyDelete@invizibilit3 Well let's just say she might be better at it than most of us.
ReplyDeleteI have a bad feeling about this...
ReplyDeleteHaha, that was great! Many funnies to be had here.
ReplyDeleteThis was pretty fun; nice work!
ReplyDeleteI love the heck out of this. It's just the most ador(k)able thing.
ReplyDeleteHad the goofiest grin on my face the entire time. The pacing was great (I read it along), and all in all it was just adorkable. 5 stars
ReplyDeleteOk to put everyone's mind at ease with no real spoilers: It's something she has done canonically on the show already.
ReplyDeleteDANCE BABY DANCE!
ReplyDeleteThis gave me a lot of laughs when I read it.
ReplyDeleteputs on hipster glasses*
ReplyDeletealready read this on fimfiction
It's been a while since I read one of these
ReplyDeletethis should be sent to hasbro. this might be at just the right spot to be made into an episode
ReplyDeleteI've got a bit of a headache so I probably didn't give it enough attention unfortunately. It's really adorkable and if you like silly cute things you should consider giving it a go.
ReplyDeleteI laughed through the entire story the ending was the best!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great way to end today for me! A hilarious, happy, silly story about Twilight being adorkable!
ReplyDeleteToo much lyrics.
ReplyDeleteSeems many others had the same thoughts I did upon first seeing this. Especially with an image like that used for it. lol We're all going to pony hell...
ReplyDeleteQuite a nice little story. I agree that there may have been a few too many lyrics, but that really shows how passionate she is. I also like how the story fits in with the canon of Sweet and Elite.
ReplyDeleteO_O will read!
ReplyDeleteTwilight you silly filly
ReplyDeleteAdorkable story is adorkable.
ReplyDeleteThis is by far the silliest story I've read yet
ReplyDeleteWhy can I picture this actually happening???
ReplyDelete@Octavia
ReplyDeletePony hell is best hell.
@Blackbelt You probably have a great imagination. Not to mention we have a few moments in the show as a sort of primer.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good read. Word of advice: reading in one sitting. Which shouldn't take to long either.
ReplyDeleteDANCE!
ReplyDeleteLuna and Conga... BUCK YEA
ReplyDeleteJamirotwi is best pony.
ReplyDeleteI really really needed this.
ReplyDeleteTWI U SO SILLY!
100+ ratings.
ReplyDeletewut.
Meh, this story isn't for me. What I read of it (beginning and end, skimming most of the middle) was adorkably cute, but I can't really get into a fic that is little more than lyrics and a dance description. Maybe if it delved more into Twilight's emotions and how the music made her feel.
ReplyDeleteThat said I really dig the concept, and would love to see someone turn it into an animated short.
Hey look, another story that definitely was most certainly not possibly by any stretch of the imagination star spammed.
ReplyDeleteThat would be absolutely, totally and in all others ways inconceivable.
Should this be labelled sausy?
ReplyDeleteAt least the story doesn't suck. That would have been a shame. Dance, Twilight, DANCE
ReplyDeleteOh and im back. Moar commenting time ;) niw wheres my buddies trotted off to?
ReplyDelete*Royal Canterlot Voice*
ReplyDeleteDO THAT CONGA!
*end Royal Canterlot Voice*
What part of RANDOM don't ya'll understand? She sings and dances to Jamiroquai adorkably. Jamiroquai is fucking awesome. 5 STARS.
ReplyDeleteSo its NOT sausy from what i gather. GOOD
ReplyDelete@duskwisp
ReplyDeleteThe description is a misdirect. It's not saucy at all. It's very cute and something I could actually see happening on the show.
That said, Love and Tolerate.
I'm assuming the star ratings are coming from the fans of this story on FimFiction in this case showing support over here. It was featured there for several days.
ReplyDelete@myboyj
ReplyDeletethars the spirit!
Now i gotta find some people to talk to
Well I trust everyone's read the story by now. Basically what @mycutiemarkisagun said. And then the next week, we got a sample when the gang crashed the party.
ReplyDelete@cityflyer502
ReplyDeleteactually no. Not enough time gotta go soon
Oh and hey: Anyone else notice FImFiction put a like/dislike rating system now and got rid of the stars?
ReplyDeleteThat was... short and simple.
ReplyDeleteNot sure I can say it was a masterpiece or anything, but it wasn't bad.
This would make an amazing animation. So, you know...get on that, fandom.
ReplyDeleteWell done. Easily the biggest smile on my face from an adorkable fic.
ReplyDeleteOr maybe I'm just a sucker for them. Either way, I loved it.
Love the 'Caught' moment.
ReplyDelete5/5 and 4 hooves up
That. Was. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteI would love to talk to the author for more ideas on pony dancing to help with my own fiction, even though it's still in its infancy.
That was adorable - I particularly liked how it turned out to be an episode like fic. Many lolz were had
ReplyDeleteThis needs a comedy tag. For sure! 5 stars!
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't what I was expecting, that's for sure. Although really, in hindsight, that's probably a good thing.
ReplyDeletethat was so incredibly great. The pacing was jsut so perfect, and the imagination. Oh god i could see it all and it was so adorable.
ReplyDeleteFirst the bad news: there are several flat-out errors in this fic ("She eyes shot open," for example), the writing is often clunky and unwieldy, and anatomical references have a distressing tenancy to switch back and forth between human and equine terminology (hoof and foot being used interchangeably was the most notable example). Also, the fact that every single word of the song's lyrics were written out was unnecessary and really dulled the effect of describing Twilight's flailing by spreading it out over too many words.
ReplyDeleteNow, the good: The canon tie-in at the end was a nice touch, and Celestia's bit was very funny. Also, I needed something silly to loosen me up after today, and this story did the job nicely. Thanks for that.
Also, I want all of you commenters to know that "adorkable" is an absolute travesty of a non-word, and as far as I'm concerned everyone who uses it should get an extra year in purgatory for each offence. I know I'm fighting a losing battle here, but dagnabit, the English language deserves better than that!
ReplyDeleteThe problem is that adorkable just describes Twilight so well.
ReplyDeleteI knew it would be something like Twilight dancing like a fool or doing something along those lines. It was a fun story, I just had to youtube the actual song while I read it.
I can relate kinda, I don't dance much, even by myself. But on rare occasions when the house is mine, I'll play some of my fav songs and sing along. So far, no one's busted me.
this would make a good comic
ReplyDeleteI really liked the idea, and naturally I kept picturing Napoleon Twilight here, but the lyrics...so many lyrics. It was basically 80% choreograph. So much of it was like reading through a technical whitepaper. The ending was fantastic, but the rest of the story stretched the adorkableness *glances at Chris* a bit too thinly.
ReplyDelete[Random] is right!
ReplyDeleteThe whole dance description was a bit too long for me, but it was still fun.
I read this before it was on Equestria Daily. *hipster glasses*
ReplyDeleteI was actually thinking about it recently, now it's here. Huh.
reading this with the music going was sooo awesome. also glad i found this song. new one for ye olde ipod for sure! XD
ReplyDelete@Chris
ReplyDeleteAah, the glorious smell of butthurt.
@Chris
ReplyDeleteI second this motion. Adorkable is the massacre of adorable and dork.
(It's Cerulean Pen, just using a different profile.)
Lololol
ReplyDeleteNapoleon dynamite reference
Retro twi is best twi
Oh how this sounds like a clopfic. But you guys wouldn't post a clopfic, right? <:D
ReplyDeleteThis deserves so many stars its not funny. It's too bad that FIMFiction is apparently having fits at the moment otherwise I'd be reading this over and over and over...
ReplyDeleteI think people nerdgasming about how adorkable isn't a word is adorkable.
ReplyDeleteWow. I commented on the story saying "hey, you should post this on EQD. Now look where it is.
ReplyDeleteThe usename is EpicBleye for proof.
Anyway, loved the story ^_^
Read it on Fimfiction, it's just too amazing for words.
ReplyDeleteThat was a cute story. I can totally picture adorkable Twilight dancing around! Thanks for sharing :-)
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