Author: zaptiftun
Description: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. It teaches so many life lessons. In this one, Twilight and her friends learn a difficult lesson about partying too hard, and the price that comes with it.A Night (to Try) to Remember Part 1
Stay thirsty, my Bronies.
A Night (to Try) to Remember Part 2
A Night (to Try) to Remember Part 3 (New!)
Additional Tags: Last night was a bad idea
42 comments:
so many stories today :0
ReplyDeleteThe picture and the description combined confuse me. Now I have to read yet another story.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing a cover can do is make me want to read the book. This one does that.
ReplyDeleteFluttershy an Big Mac sharing a happy moment while AJ is passed out on his back...
ReplyDeleteWorth a read
Mmmm shipping... But it's also comedy with ALCOHOL!
ReplyDeleteI'm torn, but since its LIGHT shipping I'm inclined to give this a read tonight.
I'm in the tags!?!? What?!?! I thought this was Fluttermac shipping not-*shudder at the thought of being shipped*-L-L-Lunac...
ReplyDeleteI don't normally complain about descriptive passages, but that first paragraph felt a little much.
ReplyDeletePonies and alcohol? Hmm. I believe I'll have a look at this.
ReplyDeleteCool story bro
ReplyDeleteI AM FAIRLY CURIOUS!
ReplyDelete*sets in "to read" folder*
so its a fluttermac?
ReplyDeleteplease may i be right. fluttermac is best shipping
Fun read. Ponies and alcohol once again prove an interesting combination, mostly because drunk Fluttershy is adorable.
ReplyDeleteThis seems interesting, might give it a read. :3
ReplyDeleteIt seems that every time I read a story involving drunk Twilight, I end up two inches away from falling off my chair laughing.
ReplyDeleteNeedless to say, this was quite hilarious!
I got a good chuckle out of the story
ReplyDeleteBut I kinda failed to see anything shippy in that between BIg Macintosh and Fluttershy. The image desives!
@Travis Smith
ReplyDeletewait, it isn't that shippy?
oh.... :|
This is only Part 1, the rest will come...eventually. And yes, there will be some light shipping, but not until near the end.
ReplyDeleteFlutterMac FTW ;)
@wackypony
ReplyDeleteI feel bad for you since I know you like ship fics
Which is odd why I'm here at all...since i don't read them. Hm must have been the lack of sleep...
8.5/10 good job! I laughed!
ReplyDeleteyes fluttermac FTW indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteIf the ideas that people act inebriated after drinking and that hangovers are unpleasant are funny enough to you to sustain your interest in lieu of any other jokes or story direction, or if you like the particular ship so much that you don't much care about anything else so long as it's there, then you will probably find this story to be okay. Myself, I really can't do much more than 2 stars on this one. The alcohol, which isn't even a particularly natural-feeling element to the setting, overburdened with the responsibility of providing every shred of potential comedy, with excusing excessively exaggerated and predictable personality alterations, and with being the beginning, ending, and central focus of the story. Just don't like it; sorry.
ReplyDeleteWHY CAB'T I REMEMBER LAST NIGHT???
ReplyDelete@The RPGenius I don't drink so I have no idea if this is what really happens, I'm just going by all the old movies and Disney/WB cartoons I've watched and having fun with it. :P
ReplyDeleteSorry you're not enjoying it, but it's not meant to be taken seriously.
To quote CardsLafter:
ReplyDelete"The Magic of Hangovers. Its like the Friendship of Magic, but alot less subtle and alot more painful."
See? It makes people mess up titles of quotes just like me.
ReplyDeleteIt's a silly amusing story. It doesn't strive to be anything more, and thus it's enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteHell, chatterbox Fluttershy alone makes it worth it.
@zaptiftun You will never please everypony, don't get upset over one you lost. Believe me, it's not worth it.
ReplyDelete@MedicShy...You are very perceptive, thank you. :)
ReplyDeleteYou guys are fickle. This story is hilarious. Perfect for New Years Day in fact.
ReplyDeleteAHAHAHAHAHAHA! DRUNKEN PONIES! THAT IS SO FUNNY!
ReplyDelete"She bumped into him several times, giggling each time; having caught a whiff of her breath, he was very glad that there weren't any open flames about. He shuddered to think what would happen if he were to receive a letter when she was close by."
ReplyDeletePURE GOLD.
entertaining little story. Easy formula of ponies + alcohol = fun times. Will follow updates. For a person who doesn't drink, you're well within what works for drunkeness as our little ponies go.
ReplyDeleteIts not a story to take seriously, its one to just chuckle with the familiar and take an simple turn with.
FlutterMac is inferred, expecting to hear about after Twilight's regailing of her misadventure is wrapped up.
Haha! I haven't laughed so hard in a long time! There needs to be a fanfic with a plot similar to The Hangover movie, anyone else agree?
ReplyDelete@Sketchy
ReplyDeleteI think there was one a couple of months ago, but I haven't read it.
Thanks everyone for the comments, I'll try to get the next part out before too long! :D
I NEED MORE! Drunk Twi is best Twi.
ReplyDeleteI've seen trailers parodying the hangover and MLP but if there isn't one,I'll probably write my own.
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ReplyDeleteHeeeeee.
ReplyDeleteAwesome 2nd chapter. Pinkie was hilarious. Poor Dash. She's lucky to be so durable.
ReplyDeleteAJ and 'Shy next. Can't wait.
Sorry for the lull in between parts, Real Life's been kinda hectic of late.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading! :)
Update!
ReplyDeleteYay! Great chapter. Perfect wrap up to the story.
IT'S OVER!! Good story, I guess. Not a fan of FlutterMac, so I guess I am biased. D:
ReplyDeletePace felt a bit fast at some places, but I guess you were aiming for only 3 parts, so that's OK for this story.
Somehow, I think the last Mac going to 'Shys for apologizing and getting a date is a bit unnecessary (since there were pretty strong hints of FlutterMac anyway), but that part, in itself, wraps up pretty nicely :D