• Story: Party Rock

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    [Random][Friendshipping]

    Author: Casca
    Description: After losing to Tank the tortoise in the competition for best pet, Boeing the falcon finds himself dejected, violent and lonely until he meets a rock - and it begins to have a conversation with him.
    Party Rock

    Additional Tags: Headcanon, aftermath, falcon, psychic rocks
    Thursday, December 15, 2011 op
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    34 comments:

    1. Sheffield MakotoDecember 15, 2011 at 1:00 PM

      Ohhh

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    2. wackyponyDecember 15, 2011 at 1:01 PM

      <_< the fuck... weird description

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    3. derpy dash typhlosionDecember 15, 2011 at 1:03 PM

      THE FUCK AM I READING.........lol
      so now were shipping birds and rocks together.....
      so do they scissor or how does that work? lol
      this is funny

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    4. B34rDecember 15, 2011 at 1:03 PM

      PARTY ROCK IS IN THA HOUSE! SHOUT OUT TO MAH BOY TOM!

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    5. Sgt ByrdDecember 15, 2011 at 1:04 PM

      inb4 Everyday I'm Shufflin'

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    6. klstixbroDecember 15, 2011 at 1:04 PM

      What have we done.....

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    7. AfroMikeDecember 15, 2011 at 1:05 PM

      well then...

      *shrugs* when in rome

      *bookmarks*

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    8. Sheffield MakotoDecember 15, 2011 at 1:05 PM

      Friendshipping, lol. There's no sexual themes involved with friendshipping.

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    9. Offbeat SoulDecember 15, 2011 at 1:06 PM

      This was pretty good. Four stars.

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    10. RyonneDecember 15, 2011 at 1:08 PM

      >Go on Equestria daily; this is the latest entry
      >Sees title- "Party Rock", hums to self quietly
      >Scrolls down to see image
      >You have got to be kidding me...

      Nevertheless, you have piqued my interest. I'll take a look at this fic. Oh well, how bad could it be?

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    11. DSNesmithDecember 15, 2011 at 1:09 PM

      wut

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    12. MaquabraDecember 15, 2011 at 1:11 PM

      This description left me with widely open mouth.

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    13. MKC7162387December 15, 2011 at 1:12 PM

      T...Tom? Is that you?

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    14. OctaviaDecember 15, 2011 at 1:13 PM

      Of course the very first thing that comes to mind when I see the title is the song Party Rock Anthem. lol Dat description. Certainly sounds like a rather interesting story.

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    15. Somepony ElseDecember 15, 2011 at 1:15 PM

      A GOOD READ

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    16. pmcollectorboyDecember 15, 2011 at 1:22 PM

      That reminds me... I've put my Tomity story, Stone Hearts, on hiatus, in case anybody even remembers that and was wondering. I'm ironing out a few chapters of my Scootaloo adventure epic, my Fancy Pants romance, and a couple chapters of my Rarity's Tale second revision.

      THEN I'll get back to it!

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    17. MatoroDecember 15, 2011 at 1:25 PM

      This will be interesting...

      HERE COMES TOM!!!!!!!!!! xD Lol! Rarity!

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    18. OmDecember 15, 2011 at 1:27 PM

      Seems Legit.

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    19. pmcollectorboyDecember 15, 2011 at 1:29 PM

      I think it was a hawk, but that's a minor quibble. An even bigger quibble is that the bird in question left the episode looking like he was a good sport about the loss. But I'll give this story a look anyway.

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    20. Vincent ChiantelliDecember 15, 2011 at 1:35 PM

      Tom gets its own story? OMFG FaceHoof.

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    21. pmcollectorboyDecember 15, 2011 at 1:44 PM

      "Tom gets its own story?"

      Uh... >.>

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    22. WardenDecember 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM

      There is one major flaw that I can't believe the prereaders let this fic go through for:
      Italics. OMFG so much unclear italics! Apart from that I liked it until Fluttershy showed up in Tom's story, but that's a headcannon clash so completely personal.
      Italics should not only be used a bit less, you switch between which characters get the italicized comments as well as using it for thoughts.

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    23. Melon HunterDecember 15, 2011 at 2:01 PM

      Discworld references ahoy! That was an... interesting take on the outcome of that episode, I'll give you that. For some reason, I always thought of the falcon having a French accent.

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    24. AnonymousDecember 15, 2011 at 2:12 PM

      PARTY ROCK IS IN DA HOUSE TONIGHT! ♪

      *begins reading and shufflin'*

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    25. Rodrigo OsorioDecember 15, 2011 at 2:48 PM

      Hahaha. Boeing the falcon. Haven't I heard the name Boeing somewhere? That alone has sparked my interest. Definitely going to take a look.

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    26. MuffinsforeverDecember 15, 2011 at 3:27 PM

      wut?

      Must read about the talking rock...

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    27. Ergo CogitoDecember 15, 2011 at 3:30 PM

      I will read this. But it gets an automatic 5 star for the title/image combo.

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    28. John PerryDecember 15, 2011 at 3:45 PM

      I really enjoyed this! It's short, it's sweet, and there's just something I love about talking inanimate objects.

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    29. GenocidalAssasinDecember 15, 2011 at 4:30 PM

      Is the name "Boeing" reference to the Boeing aircraft company and that they kinda helped General Dynamics to make the F-16 Fighting Falcon?

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    30. MasterContinuumDecember 15, 2011 at 4:41 PM

      *homer simpson*
      Headcannon, hmmmm......

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    31. BearDecember 15, 2011 at 6:11 PM

      I didn't expect to feel bad for a rock. :(

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    32. DeftCrowDecember 15, 2011 at 6:13 PM

      New headcanon about Tom Balboa, neat!

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    33. kesssandrraDecember 15, 2011 at 11:02 PM

      Author here. As you may have read at the end, this started out as mere crack. I have no idea what to think of it as a story, but I thank you all for reading and commenting!

      @Warden: Yes, the italics abuse was a gamble. I was relying on the establishment of the scene and character speech styles to do the work of name tags. If FF.net allowed multiple fonts, I probably would have used that instead.

      @pmcollectorboy: I could have sworn that he left looks very disappointed. Hmm. ==

      @GenocidalAssasin: The tortoise was named Tank. I just picked the closest aircraft name that came to mind for the falcon, and that was Boeing.

      @Everyone else, including the lurkers, 800+ of you according to FF.net statistics: Thank you once again for reading!

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    34. AnonymousDecember 18, 2011 at 7:46 AM

      Never judge a book (or a fanfic blogpost for what matters) for its cover...

      I was expecting something completely ridiculous but you wrote some surprisingly deep stuff here (while keeping it simple and random enough to not dive into sadfic territory).

      This little story also made me think about something... I'm so used to see [Comedy] and [Random] tags mixed together that it's hard to picture a random fic without being a comedy one (I think I've read some authors dong the same mistake, by tagging something random and doing comedy too).

      The only critic I have would be the lack of sense some of these events make, but why should I judge that in a [Random] fic? There is also the little issue with the Italics but it becomes less noticeable after a few paragraphs. (or maybe I got used to them, I'm rarelly bothered by this kind of issues)


      This was a good read. Nothing mind-blowing nor awesome enough to consider it a masterpiece or a MUST for any fanfic readers out there, but a really enjoyable read.

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