• Story: Starry Skies

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    [Sad][Shipping] Luna time! ...With an oc! We have seen it work before though, I have faith!

    Author: Neon Noble
    Description: Luna decides to leave the castle after a long time and runs into a pony that enjoys the night almost as much as she does!
    Starry Skies Part 1
    Starry Skies Part 2

    Additional Tags: Luna Makes A New Friend
    Friday, May 20, 2011 op
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    26 comments:

    1. NinestempestMay 20, 2011 at 12:02 AM

      using this image AGAIN already?

      Can't you find something else???

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    2. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 12:11 AM

      hmmm.

      part 2...

      CLIFFHANGER OMG >:( qq

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    3. SethistoMay 20, 2011 at 12:15 AM

      @NinesTempest

      The other one was replaced!

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    4. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 12:23 AM

      These types of cliffhangers shouldn't happen D:

      wtb part 3

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    5. NinestempestMay 20, 2011 at 12:27 AM

      @Sethisto
      Oh, well, er, I guess okay then.

      New adorable pic anyway though!!

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    6. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 12:48 AM

      How can you end it on a cliffhanger like that? D:

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    7. AndrewMay 20, 2011 at 1:09 AM

      It's not badly written, it just feels... Hollow and melodramatic. Maybe you'll fix it in later chapters, so I'm not giving up hope.

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    8. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 1:16 AM

      OH CELESTIA!!!! you can't end it on a cliff-hanger like that! D:<

      But I await for part 2, also getting the vibe that Starry is the bad pony, you know...pony's being scared at the mere sight of him, not explaining why, Then saying it's his last night like that, damn that's big cliff-hanger, But!, It has sparked my interest... please make part 3 soon, I would very much like to see what happenes. ^^,

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    9. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 1:17 AM

      oops I ment part 3. :P

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    10. goudakaesMay 20, 2011 at 3:40 AM

      Oh god i almost had to supress the tears right now.
      How will part3 be?
      For the love of Celestia please finish it quick.

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    11. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 5:10 AM

      What's an OC?

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    12. Everchosen May 20, 2011 at 5:13 AM

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    13. Everchosen May 20, 2011 at 5:15 AM

      "Please...call me Luna"
      Very common in all Luna's fanfic stories so far
      LOL

      I wonder if she say that line in season2 lol

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    14. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 6:54 AM

      @Anonymous

      OC means Original Character. That is, a character that has no roots in the source material.

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    15. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 8:54 AM

      - Okay, Luna...
      - CALL ME PRINCESS LUNA, I NEED RESPECT!

      That's what I want to read, at least in one fanfic.

      And yeah, cliffhanger!

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    16. Neon NobleMay 20, 2011 at 8:59 AM

      @Anonymous

      As funny as it would have been, Luna doesn't appear to have that type of personality. However, if you look hard enough, you'll probably find somepony who writes Luna's character that way! :P


      Also, I'd better get started on Part 3 the moment I get home!

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    17. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 10:58 AM

      It sounds like Starry is dying. I hope he does, it'll make the story so much better than, "LOL then Luna fixed him and he was all better the end!"

      I hate cheap endings like that.

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    18. Neon NobleMay 20, 2011 at 11:06 AM

      @Anonymous

      That's pretty cruel to say, wanting him to die, even for the sake of bettering the story.

      Though I will say I've never been the kind for cheap endings. You'll just have to wait!

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    19. GarnotMay 20, 2011 at 2:55 PM

      @Anonymous

      While it is cruel to assume that he will die, I agree with this comment, but at the same time I don't.

      Perhaps he could be 'moving on' to the stars himself? mayhaps he will become part of the universe ala Oogway style? Who knows.

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    20. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 2:59 PM

      Ending better make me cry or this story will be 'meh'

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    21. AnonymousMay 20, 2011 at 3:57 PM

      ohmygodineedthistohaveathirdpartrightnow

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    22. AnonymousMay 21, 2011 at 8:18 PM

      @Anonymous
      seconded

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    23. AnonymousMay 26, 2011 at 9:16 PM

      k

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    24. AnonymousJune 28, 2011 at 4:34 PM

      A month later after the last comment... No part 3 yet. |:

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    25. Muff_Muff94July 14, 2011 at 9:05 PM

      mabye neon noble gave up

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    26. AnonymousJuly 18, 2011 at 2:54 AM

      Omgwtf where's next part this is AWESOME so far!

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