Author: Twinkletail
Description: While helping Twilight rearrange her lab, Spike comes across a magical powder that changes him into a pony! While Twilight tries to find an antidote, pony Spike has some adventures of his own.Dragon Your Hooves
Dragon Your Hooves Part 2
Dragon Your Hooves Part 3
Dragon Your Hooves Part 4 (New!)
Additional Tags: Ponified Spike!
73 comments:
Oeh. This could be interesting. First chapter is short, but well written. Looking forward to the next.
ReplyDelete*inhale* yay...
ReplyDeleteThis is interesting and i am going to read it C:
Not buying this one yet, simply too short.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the INTRO SONG? Seriously? For real?
Maybe he has a chance with Rarity now? :P
ReplyDeleteOh hey I have a backstory now?
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteHmm. I do have to wonder. As it goes with -me-, it's pegasus Spike dating Apple Bloom.
Dunno about the theme song in there. Seems a bit unnecessary. skimmed very quickly while in class and looks like a good read though. :)
ReplyDeleteThe theme song is okay if your trying to make it exactly like an episode. I'm not sure if hes going for that yet.
ReplyDeleteDidn't read yet, but have some points just for the idea.
ReplyDeleteI've been waiting for this.
ReplyDeleteI hope the next chapter is longer, tho...
I lost it at the intro song, it's almost self-mocking
ReplyDeleteLOL!! THE INTRO SONG!
ReplyDeleteThis is PURE GOLD!
I like what's there so far, but just one short opening chapter isn't enough.
ReplyDeleteIn summary:
NEED MOAR.
great story, I love the idea you had.
ReplyDeleteffffuuu- this story is too short, need MOAR
ReplyDeleteMust has MOAR
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed it, but as stated by other bronies, MOAR!
ReplyDeleteI can almost see this as an episode.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next one. His cutie mark could be a little green flame or something though.
ReplyDeleteThe pony-Spike's cutie mark could either be a quill and paper or a microphone (he seems to love announcing, as seen in "Fall Weather Friends" and "Suited for Success")
ReplyDeleteVERY cute! And in-character too! I hope to see more soon!
ReplyDeleteI see this as a potential plot episode.
ReplyDeleteInb4 shipping.
ReplyDeletehey, author here. just figured i'd reference the two most common comments.
ReplyDelete1) the theme: i've seen a couple of other fics do this (and did it myself before, in a party cat-astrophe). i like doing it to denote the fact that i'm trying to go for a somewhat-realistic episode.
2) the length: hopefully gonna have the second part out tomorrow, but i just thought that was a good cutoff point.
glad y'all are enjoying it ^_^
The small horse joke made me laugh
ReplyDeleteprobably more than I should have... Keep writing this!
I need more. Also, dammit Twilight. You. Are. A. Nerd. We. Do. Puns. C'mon.
ReplyDeleteHey, I'm liking this so far. I must agree, it's a bit short right now; I can't wait for the next part! Also, the theme song seems fine to me; it adds a certain touch.
ReplyDeleteyou must continue or you will face the wrath of 4000 hooves.. in other words 1000 ponies stampede.
ReplyDeletePS: Twi, leave the puns to Rainbow you nerd.
Must become a real ep Would be best thing ever
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised it took this long for Spike/Sweetie Belle to appear. Seeing that Spike has a crush on her older sister, you'd think that'd be more obvious.
ReplyDeleteGentlemen, we are on high alert! This fic has reached... MAXIMUM D'AWWWWWW.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cute! Great job with this.
ReplyDeleteThis was really good I can't help but hope we get a sequel because that would be absolutely rad!
ReplyDeleteGreat so far. The second part was much better on length than the first. I am hoping it is not ending here though. This concept has way too much potential to stop now.
ReplyDeleteAaand it got adorable... just like I knew it would.
ReplyDeleteIs it over? If so, great place to end it. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete"Best game EVER, Midnight!" I laughed for real, that's hard to do.
Needs a shipping tag
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed this story. It does kind of seem like Sweetie Belle is the odd one out in the CMC, and it was very astute of you to notice that!
ReplyDeleteI'll never look at Sweetie Belle quite the same.
ReplyDeleteThis was cute and funny. Is it complete now? I wouldn't mind seeing more from you, even if it isn't this.
this story was too short, I was hoping SparkStar gets more airtime than this.
ReplyDeleteGreat story =)
ReplyDeletehe is no longer ... a pony whyyyyyy you could make so much longer story bot no it neet to be short omg.
ReplyDeletebtw. great story only a little bit short hoping for moor parts :D
A. Awesome
ReplyDeleteB. Let's hope this gets to be an episode someday
@Anonymous
ReplyDeletecoughcough stillgotanotherpartplanned coughcough
...i should really get this cough checked out...
@Twinkle
ReplyDeletewow, my cough is so bad it's making me forget to write half of my name
I like this story. It's...nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat story so far. And the Spike/Sweetie Belle thing is surprisingly sweet. Usually ya see Spike get paired with Applebloom, but this makes a lot more sense.
ReplyDeleteI approve of Sparkstar and the off shoot one offs this could take off into.
ReplyDeleteOh, good, so it's not over. I was going to say it seemed too short for an episode--clearly what you were going for, given the presence of the theme song--but if you've got some more coming up, great!
ReplyDelete"Don't you just love that game we play where we pretend to forget each other's names?" was hilarious, as was Spike's follow-up. Twilight teasing Spike at the end of part 2 was awesome, and I loved that Spike was unaware Rarity and Sweetie Belle were sisters.
And yes, I d'aaaaawwwwwwwwwed so hard.
I am really liking the story but its a little odd that you have already included the letter to Celestia before the story is over...
ReplyDeleteI lawl'd.
ReplyDeleteI liked the premise, and I liked the execution. Great story. Man, I wish this were an episode...
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeletei had been thinking of omitting the letter part, but i couldn't think of a good moral to go with the way part three is going to go, and i wanted to make sure to get a letter in there.
Spike/Sweetie Belle?
ReplyDeleteNow that's a new one!
Any idea when the third chapter will be up?
Usually I hate shipping, but when I read that Twilight understood and was playing along, I just lost it. I can't wait for the third chapter.
ReplyDeleteThis story could end right there, but I see another chapter where Spike wants to continue to be a Pegasus and two possible endings. I love the stories where Spike is turned into a pony, (or a failed attempt)and it's great to see how he reacts. I hope there are more chapters.
ReplyDeleteIt's a really cute idea but everyone seems to write twilight as kind of a b*tch moreso than she is in the show. i mean in the show she can be clueless and unthinkingly unkind but it often seems to be stretched to an extreme in fics.
ReplyDeletestill cute and a clever idea. Needs a better pic tho XD
This was such a cute story! Twilight was a little ooc, and the ending was abrupt, but maybe "Sparkstar" will come visit Ponyville again...?
ReplyDeleteThis is nice and smooth. I like it :).
ReplyDelete♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
ReplyDelete@Twinkletail
ReplyDeleteLoved the story and everything about it, just the fact that I could see the episode playing in my head as I read this was something I dong get from many fic's these days.
That being said I was wondering if you still had plans for part 3 ( and if so than any date ). If you dont reply within 3 weeks I'll assume that that's a no, then go kill myself =]
* mental note : proof read before posting excessively long comments
ReplyDelete♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
ReplyDeleteOkay. Why is there not more of this? It feels like it ended way too soon, though that's probably because I was ENJOYING IT SO MUCH. Write more!
ReplyDeleteSe-quel! Se-quel! Se-quel! Se-quel!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, but it feels like there's more to tell! Unless you're dead, in which case I understand why you wouldn't.
That. Was. AWESOME!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is on FIMFiction now, and I'm pretty sure it should be marked as "Complete".
ReplyDeletehttp://www.fimfiction.net/story/42131/Dragon-Your-Hooves
my computer won't let me read the spike fanfic!!!!!
ReplyDeletenever mind I read it and it was awesome!
ReplyDeleteShipping tag please? Part 2 looks an awful lot like Sweetiespike.
ReplyDelete@PikalaxALT
ReplyDeleteI agree - adding the shipping tag makes lots of sense for this story.
Actually reading further ahead it seems that it is spike with sweetie belle. @pegaSpike
ReplyDeleteActually reading further ahead it seems that it is spike with sweetie belle. @pegaSpike
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