[Grimdark-Violence] More long epic style stuff!
Author: MrFugums
Description: Nightmare Moon has returned, and the only ponies able to stop her have failed to activate the Elements of Harmony. With Equestria in eternal darkness, Celestia must traverse this ruined land to find a way to bring peace to a world without any.The Night Will Last Forever
The Night Will Last Forever Part 2
The Night Will Last Forever Part 2.5
The Night Will Last Forever Part 3
The Night Will Last Forever Part 4
The Night Will Last Forever Part 5
The Night Will Last Forever Part 6
The Night Will Last Forever Part 7
The Night Will Last Forever Part 8
The Night Will Last Forever Part 9
The Night Will Last Forever Part 10
The Night Will Last Forever Part 10.1
The Night Will Last Forever Part 11
The Night Will Last Forever Part 12 (New!)
Additional Tags: Longfic Epic Celestia Battle Adventure
23 comments:
Poor Aj.
ReplyDeleteNeed moar.
Mr Fugums Here:
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for posting this!
This is my first time writing a fanfic, so i want every piece of constructive critisism you guys got!
The story will focus primarily on Celestia and her journey to defeat Nightmare Moon, but I got carried away with that moon battle and didn't write enough story, oops...
Ch 3 will pick up with what happened to Celestia after the end of Ch 2, So if your here for Molestia, you will not be disappointed!
Ch 3 is also where I expect the real meat of the story to show itself. Expect many more epic battles featering the goddess Celestia!
A few more notes:
ReplyDeleteI hope the violence tag doesn't turn too many people off, it's not like Cupcakes violence. *shudders* It's more along the lines of Dragonball Z-stlye fighting violence, the first chapter is the only one with any descriptive grossness, the rest will be cleaner, leaving out unecessary bits.
As above, this will focus more on epic battle scenes featuring the sun goddess Celestia, I've noticed a distinct lack of epic unicorn battles and I set out to do some niche-filling.
Anyway, read on!
Hoof Of The North Star?
ReplyDelete...what, you never know!
I'm fuckin' half drunk and not givin' a shit right now.
ReplyDeleteI'm gonna read this thing on my way to London tomorrow and that's gonna be awesome. Luna/Nightmare Moon is the best, man, and expect some epic traditional medium fan art of her from me a month or two from now, because that's how long epic takes to make. Respect the princess, baby.
Two great first chapters! Keep up the good work and write some more epic battles, I can't await it!
ReplyDeleteBrony-tip: Read the epic parts while listening to the music of "Two Steps From Hell", for example "White Witch" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c0YDcQCOhZ4).
The story becomes 20% more epic!
Brony-tip: Read the story while listening to soundtracks from Heavy Rain. The spicness was so intense, the shivering up my spine almost made my head explode!
ReplyDeleteJust made it to the most recent chapter. I really like what you have done with the story so far. Well, except the major plot point of said recent chapter D: Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethis story made me way too sad.. i'm staying away from this one now...
ReplyDeleteListen to this in chapter four as the Mayor makes her speech: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0V7aUT13qtM
ReplyDeleteThis isn't a plug for my favorite show, the music really, really fits.
Chapter 4 made me freakin' cry, man. D':
ReplyDeleteI'll be waiting patiently for the next installment. :3
Why? Why did you have to make me cry? I await your next chapter.
ReplyDeleteI highly approve of this story
ReplyDeleteAll of the mane cast are going to die, I just know it. Thanks for the awesome story man, I can't wait for more
ReplyDeleteI'll probably regret but going to read this
ReplyDeleteThis post is missing 4.1 - That's a painful read. :(
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ReplyDelete^^; The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor... Apologizes. He commented on the wrong tab... ^^; However, one IS looking forward to reading this fic, and shall comment on it once one has done so!
ReplyDelete[Grimdark-Violence]?
ReplyDeleteOkay Seth, seriously, what the FUCK is that supposed to mean? That's like a [Sad-sad stuff happens] tag.
Well some of us are willing to read violence but not rape for instance... I like it more specific.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, if the Mane 6 are getting offed in this I'll hold off reading until it's done so I know if they get revived.
This is actually on ePUB by the way. I'm going to download the ePUB and read this story
ReplyDeleteI had actually been avoiding this one for a while now because I was afraid of how sad it would be, but then I remembered that I had actually read all of the chapters way back in May of last year.
ReplyDeleteSo I guess I'm following this now, no matter how sad it may be.
I'm having a blast with this story so far. I hope you finish this story or continue the flow of the depressing yet so filling story you have here.
ReplyDeleteGood luck :)