• Story: One Last Day

    [Grimdark][Shipping][Random] What would YOU do on your last day...if you were a pony?!
    Description: Twilight is informed by Celestia that their world is going to be destroyed in one day. After revealing this news to her friends, they make plans on how to spend their final hours. From their desperation, some new and unusual bonds form.
    One Last Day Part 1
    One Last Day Part 2
    One Last Day Part 3
    One Last Day Part 4
    One Last Day Part 5
    One Last Day Part 6

    Yes, 6 chapters right at the start

    40 comments:

    1. I lol'd, although I saw the ending coming from a mile away.

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    2. Well, that was something. It was an original concept, for sure. Most of the ponies seemed pretty out of character, but it was still a fun story to read.

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    3. Fuck the author of this fic. Seriously.
      I am offended.
      Not at the shit pairing.
      Not at the AppleMac.
      But at the fucking weed.
      What. The. Fuck.

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    4. Dear god, this story was a complete Mind Screw. I liked it, even though it was nothing like what I expected it to be. That being said, I think it should rather be tagged as [Random].

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    5. I don't think Pinkie needs anything to get high, lol. She's practically a drug all on her own. Plus it almost seemed like she was forcing herself on Fluttershy just 'cuz she was horny; didn't really seem in-character for her.

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    6. Ahah, what a mindscrew. Definitly needs a [Random] tag though.

      I actually kinda like the characterization of Dash. Of COURSE she's not just going to sit there and blubber, she's gonna kick tail!

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    7. Pfft, I stopped after reading the beginning of the third part. I already let the fact of 'aliens nuking equestria' alone, but this is just utter shit. Plotholes and OOC-ness EVERYWHERE. This reminded me why I never read fanfics.

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    8. What.

      Okay, What?

      This REALLY should have been [Random].

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    9. Ok, I now read it completly and in all its insaneness it did made me chuckle a bit. So bad its good? No it's so bad it's awful. But I guess the mindblowing stupidity affected my amusement center in my brain. (Implying that even excists)
      The most appropriate reaction picture for the ending would be Celestia reading a letter with a trollface.

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    10. @Anonymous Fluttershy will stay heartbroken for a while. She is so sensitive. Also, I have the feeling that Celestia spread the word at every town of her principality, I bet that a lot of people did some kind of stupid things. I bet Celestia is better to make a rule that everything that happened this day has no legal way as long the one that took thing return them to their owners.

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    11. @Anonymous

      I agree with the last Anon. there...
      >So bad its good? No it's so bad it's awful. But I guess the mindblowing stupidity affected my amusement center in my brain ...(minus the part where I'm amused).

      Also, the whole 'thing' is way more Random than Grim, so wouldn't go before Grim (color tag) ?

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    12. “Well, it it's kinda a catchy tune.” Applejack smirked, getting a slice of Apple Pie alongside Twilight.

      <3 inappropriate capitalization.

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    13. @catherine-puce

      It also can't help Fluttershy's self-esteem that Pinkie tried to make out with Dash immediately after she arrived, lol.

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    14. pinkie pie and fluttershy smoking a blunt? win.

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    15. I thought it was funny.

      Was OOC though. Still funny. Plus I'm biased because it had Applemac, so that won points for me.

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    16. Its on end of the world fic.
      Ofcours ponys will do stupid shit!
      Thats the point of it!

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    17. Damn you author, I actually liked the idea of this

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    18. The idea was pretty awesome, but then suddenly
      "Metal Slug - Rainbow Dash Edition". Then it was ohgodwhy.jpg and epic at the same time, I guess? Shit, four stars for giving us so much from so little, but three stars for awkwardness with the characters (especially that blunt part; the hell, author).

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    19. This sucked horribly. 1 star. >:[

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    20. Everything from the apocalypse to explosion to incest to child-adult marriage. What else is there to say?

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    21. Ending spotted a mile away, but it was funny enough getting there.

      Pinkie would break the fourth wall to protect our virgin eyes

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    22. Good idea, mediocre execution. The beginning and end were fine, but you squandered so much potential in the middle!

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    23. Actually, I expected it was going to be a family guy moment and the whole thing turned out to be a hoax... Rainbow Dash defeating them all actually surprised me... Found it rather funny near the end actually.

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    24. That... was actually really cool! I thought the characters were actually very well done. Whole thing was very entertaining, I laughed out loud at least 4 different times.

      The freakin' R.E.M reference, ohmygosh lol. I acutally opened the song and began singing the Pinkie version with it laughing the whole time just because I could visualize the party so well.

      Loved it. Only tiny nitpick really was the whole "blunt" bit, and the fact there wasn't a ponified version. :P

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    25. wow... just wow.
      When i was in the middle of the story i was depressed. I mean, REALLY depressed. It just remnded me how short lives we humans have.

      and when i come to the ending of the story i was like: .... heh, what?
      I liked this story. It had some nice point of view and i like it

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    26. I believe the author is Dutch, I do so based on some of the language and themes, and from looking at the pixels and being dutch myself.

      This story is okay, you should just view it as the totally over the top random story it is.

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    27. Was a good read. Especially with having Majora's Mask music by part 6, made it even better.
      Kinda wish the story hadn't ended, but all good things must sooner or later.

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    28. Why did I read that? Uhg.

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    29. The ending appeared waaayyyy too early

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    30. Why do i think they're all better of dead . . .

      Someone needs to write an alternative ending with hot last RD x Gilda love and all die in a fire . . . or atleast make the aliens go "HAHAHA that was all a joke to make you ponies enjoy life again."

      Needs some typo fixes ...

      5 Stars bc it was 6am when i started reading and i'm really tired and confused and ... i cried a little .-.

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    31. Hm it was pretty good, but I feel really sad for Fluttershy, she has the worst ending in my opinion, everpony elses problems can be resolved.
      Also can't believe how cold hearted Pinkie was, this was out of character in my opinion.

      And ... I don't know about Rainbow Dash being able to do that stuff ... that's ... well ...

      But I still enjoyed the story.

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    32. I'm going back into the TARDIS to destroy the author and make sure this doesn't happen again...

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    33. This is the best Fanfic I've read.
      And this helped me too forgeting "Cupcakes".
      It was simply amazing, but a bit O.O sometimes, like applemac or flutterpie moments.

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    34. This fanfic was amazing. The other people may be talking shit about it, but i thought it was one of the best I've read. But that's just me. I tend to like apocalyptic stories. Bravo.

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    35. At first, I was like
      Damn, this is a downer

      And then at the end I was like
      Woah, explain what just happened.

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    36. The story was awesome, I even was able to overlook the Weed and the incest, but that FUCKING ENDING. ARE YOU KIDDING ME? IT WAS SO GOOD, AND THEN THE AUTHOR JUST HAD TO RUIN IT. YOU SHOULD HAVE JUST HAD THEM ALL DIE, I'M SORRY BUT THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN A BETTER ENDING THAN THIS LOAD OF HORSE SHIT. NO PUN INTENDED.

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    37. i would rate this story 85million out of 10

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