• Story: After Mare-Day Gras

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    [Shipping][Random] Hangover time! Some grammar errors but it's entertaining.
    Description: Twilight Sparkle tries alcohol for the first time. Hilarity ensues (I hope).
    After Mare-Day Gras
    Monday, March 7, 2011 op
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    31 comments:

    1. WindchaserMarch 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM

      Magic and booze do not seem to mix.

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    2. FillyMarch 7, 2011 at 10:32 PM

      This was possibly one of the best storie's i've read. It made me laugh so hard, its amazing.

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    3. Fon ShaolinMarch 7, 2011 at 10:34 PM

      Giggled like a motherfucker.

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    4. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 10:38 PM

      An entire story about drunken lesbian pony antics, and not a single mention of Rainbow Dash. Writefriend, I am disappoint.

      Nah, just kidding. Really funny story, I enjoyed it alot! You seemed to shift back and forth between present and past tense alot near the beginning, but it didn't make the story unreadable or anything.

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    5. DaffodilMarch 7, 2011 at 10:45 PM

      WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

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    6. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 10:46 PM

      *facehooves and proceeds to die laughing*

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    7. RefractedPegasusMarch 7, 2011 at 10:55 PM

      HILARIOUS! Absolutely hilarious! I'm sure my neighbors are thinking I'm crazy, laughing out loud at 1am.

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    8. Roy G. BivMarch 7, 2011 at 11:21 PM

      If I keep this up, I may get a writer tag someday... Must write better! And not get sucked into IRC so much! And get more proofreaders!

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    9. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 11:33 PM

      I must admit... I was not expecting Princess Luna to factor into this anywhere!

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    10. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 11:59 PM

      Confound this ponies, they drive me to drink, I mean make babies with Princess Luna!

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    11. PacceMarch 8, 2011 at 1:47 AM

      Now write one for each of the other five!

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    12. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 2:02 AM

      @Anonymous

      You mean get drunk, then make babies with princess luna.

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    13. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 2:11 AM

      Dear Celestia, this is one of the best stories ever.

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    14. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 6:41 AM

      TwilightxLuna shipping? Did not see that coming...still lol'd though.

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    15. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 7:08 AM

      Why 5 stars? It's funny but...

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    16. CANDYBAGMarch 8, 2011 at 9:30 AM

      That was hilarious, will there be a sequel?

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    17. Evil EnchanterMarch 8, 2011 at 10:29 AM

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    18. SonicBrawler1992March 8, 2011 at 10:31 AM

      @Roy G. Biv I might help proof-reading... As long as someone tells me what exactly I have to do. I guess it means reading and correcting any errors?

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    19. BunkieBunnyMarch 8, 2011 at 11:02 AM

      I just finished reading this twice and I'm still laughing!

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    20. PrideMarch 8, 2011 at 1:07 PM

      Brilliant. 5 stars

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    21. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 1:53 PM

      Great story, but it would be awesome if this was some kind of mini-series. The Hangover, equestrian edition, with each story another pony wakes up post mare-day gras.

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    22. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 3:35 PM

      Hehehehe, gross

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    23. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 5:15 PM

      ... and that's the story of why we now have two mares in the moon!

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    24. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 8:42 PM

      I think my face broke from lulzing....

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    25. ToonNinjaApril 16, 2011 at 9:24 PM

      @Anonymous
      Pinkie would TOTALLY be Alex! This story must happen!

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    26. Doc SteedlyJune 2, 2011 at 11:13 AM

      OMC Pls tell me you plan to do more to this . . . i died laughing at the end. This was just SOOO random. SOrta how i could picture Twilight if she was . . . *clears thraot* well inebriated . . . . . AND LUNA . . . wow!! Somepony's got some BIG plans . . . . .

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    27. Kjh242June 4, 2011 at 11:54 AM

      Must... Resist... Urge... To LAWL... At someone... Else's house...
      Pfftbhftbh... HA!

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    28. Solar EclipseJune 29, 2011 at 12:42 AM

      OMG best drunk twilight shipping ever must have squel can't stop laughing hahahahaha

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    29. ItsTheWhinyGuysJuly 14, 2011 at 1:45 PM

      Wow, that was crazy. As I said on DA, good read.

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    30. Daxter GalaxyOctober 17, 2011 at 4:03 PM

      Don't drink and magic.

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    31. MelodiaNovember 8, 2011 at 9:09 PM

      Sucks that little silly shorts like this would never get accepted now a days (to say nothing of spamfics)

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