Author: uSea
Description: Can the Twilight October evade the clutches of the Equestrian navy and bring glory to the motherland?Twilight October
Addiitonal Tags: Silly, Light-Hearted, Comedy, Submersible
[Comedy] Part 2!
Author: uSea
Description: The ponies are at it again. But the game has changed. Can the Twilight October survive in these troubled times?
October 2nd Google Docs
October 2nd Deviant Art
Additional Tags: Silly, Light-Hearted, Comedy, Submersible
71 comments:
Adorable and wonderful! Although Fluttershy got a bit too excited to go "toot toot" XD
ReplyDeleteVery cute and funny. A great little fic.
ReplyDeleteI lol'd.
ReplyDeleteGood stuff.
''Then what were you doing underwater?''
ReplyDelete''that is where the fish live''
Oh, man. i laughed out loud
HNNNNG
ReplyDeleteI have no natural defenses against cuteness of this magnitude!
ReplyDeleteRocket Propelled Pillows, FIRE! (doesn't work)
ReplyDeleteThe heatseaking ability on those pillows didn't work... PLAN B... launch the mattress! (some guy puts a bag over his head and promptly steps into a tub and starts singing)
This is really funny, Spike's dialogue was seriously awesome.
ReplyDeleteFor some odd reason while I was reading this I could not stop thinking that they have a LOT of pillows.
Damn it, I want enough pillows to play search and destroy.
I am but a simple fisherman!
ReplyDeleteThen what were you doing under the water?
That is where the fish live.
~Gack~ Cuteness overload...
Okay, someone has to tell me
ReplyDeleteHow is this NOT shipping?? Twilight is clearly on a ship...
@Windchaser
ReplyDeleteFluttershy nake a cute Q-ship but still... A Q-ship make from a tugboat will have some difficulty to sink that submarine like the twilight october.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteNot a ship, you fool!
A submarine! Quite the difference.
Silly filly thinks a sub is a ship....
This is the best thing, guys. The best thing.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, someone help me with my giggling!
Oh god can't stop loling at this. This was adorable overload.
ReplyDeleteI don't even care about the grammatical errors! I'm laughing too hard!
ReplyDeleteThis needs to be featured or something. It is so incredibly cute.
This ties with the D&D fic on the "my favorite story of the ponies being silly and using their imaginations" category. Looooove it.
ReplyDeleteGreat read, someone should write a Rainbow Six one.
ReplyDeleteAwesome stuff. Love these kinda silly and innocent stories.
ReplyDeleteOh god, cuteness overload.
ReplyDeleteFreakin' adorable.
ReplyDeletedasvidaniya pony.
ReplyDeletethis easily makes my top five favorite pony fics
five red stars for the motherland!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the positive comments (they feed me).
ReplyDeleteThis was, of course, based on the Twilight-is-a-submarine discussion in a thread several weeks ago (sadly it never received the general image so it was lost) along with the drawings based on the subject by Caluriri and a few stand-alones by anon's.
I welcome you to point out any errors (grammatical or otherwise), else I simply won't learn.
This was BRILLIANT!
ReplyDelete@uSea
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely wonderful. I'm the one who screamed "A TUGBOAT HAS NO PLACE IN THE COMBAT AREA" in that thread and it's fantastic to see a fanfic from that thread finally completed.
I have some of the Fluttershy Tugboat pictures if you want them.
this was better then what I could imagine when we had this convo, I must now have a picture of Spike as a Simple Undersea Fisherman
ReplyDeleteA wonderful and funny story that simply has to be made mandatory reading for anypony new to fanfics. Two solid thumbs, will read again.
ReplyDeleteWhy hasn't anyone made a propaganda poster featuring Spike wearing a ushanka yet?
That was a mighty fine read. I wish for a continuation of this...
ReplyDeleteWhat is "Twilight October" of which you speak? I am but simple underwater fisherman. And underwater is where fish is.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to have to red this now. I forgot what I came across a while back that I was suddenly thinking ponies and red october...
ReplyDeletehaha this is awesome stuff
ReplyDeleteCUTIE MARK CRUSADER COSMONAUTS, YAY!!
ReplyDeleteThis was very funny and sweet. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I officially love this fic. Are we gonna get a part three?
ReplyDeleteI thought Twilight was a blimp
ReplyDeleteI just made a reference to an image from an old Drawfriend post. And I have no regrets.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteEr, that's in reference to the "And then Twilight Sparkle was a submarine." thing at the top of the page. Forgot to mention that.
ROFL. I love this. Cute, fun and completely in character. The kind of thing that could be in the show-The best kind of MLP fic!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous Regret nothing! That story was hilarious and this one is cute overload material.
ReplyDeleteIf anything Twilight will probably be a formula 1 racer next.
So funny, I needed this today, thanks uSea, very much.
ReplyDeleteFirst rule of pillow warfare: Always have Twilight and Pinkie on your team.
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteDid anyone else get 40k vibes from "strike from the skies, comrades"?
How cool would it be for this to become part of an episode in season 2?
ReplyDeleteIt would prove that wherever ponies are being discussed, Lauren is watching you.....
Next stop: the destruction of the super-destroyer, codename "BIG MAC"
ReplyDeleteMy god this is so adorable.
ReplyDeleteFirst Twilight was a blimp. THEN she is a submarine. What next? Twilight Sparkle as a Tank Engine?
ReplyDeleteSay, that's not such a bad idea...
Be right back, gonna write a small fic...
The second is just as LOLwut as the first.
ReplyDeleteof course, this is not to say was bad, this is to say was very entertaining. be keeping up the good works, comrade.
This is perhaps the best fanfic i've read so far :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely phenomenal.
ReplyDelete5 stars!!
5 stars! Sieg Zeon@
ReplyDeleteOh lawd, this made me giggle harder than I have in a long time. I'd love for this to be made into an episode.
ReplyDeleteI'm positive that cute of this magnitude is banned by Poneva convention (sorry for terrible pun attempt, I just could not resist).
ReplyDeleteИз России с дружбой.
"STRIKE FROM THE SKIES COMRADES!" is the most awesome line Twilight has had so far.
ReplyDeleteAlso the shark reminds of me of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=skYRZ_-RXtk
(I always knew they could control the animals!!!!j THeyre spying on us from the tresss, with the squirrelss! pass it on!)
DON'T CLICK THE ABOVE LINK!! IT IS A TRAP!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66hen6sf1Xs&feature=fvsr
This is what I meant!
I NEED MOAR. MAKE MOAR.
ReplyDeleteIt takes something special to be able to break me out of a funk quite like that.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant work, comrade!
"'RAWR!' she said, in precisely the way a shark doesn't."
ReplyDeleteChanneling a bit of Douglas Adams there, eh?
By Celestia's beard! Part 2 is even better than part 1!
ReplyDeleteNow please a part 3! Maybe with Fluttershy and some of her birds as an aircraft carrier?
I giggled, I laughed, I d'awwwwwed, this fic has it all. Great job uSea! Those 6 stars are totally deserved. ^^
ReplyDeleteFirst I guffawed. Then I d'awwwww'd. Then I went just couldn't stop. Why can't I vote six stars on this, dagnabbit?
ReplyDeleteI have but one thing to say to this.... BWAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh LORDIE!
ReplyDeletePt.1: Hehehehehe, cute.
ReplyDeletePt.2: Pinkie-shark. Nothing else needs to be said. :-D
Toot, toot!
ReplyDeleteRead it exactly like the latter part of "You rock! Woo hoo!" You will die of Fluttershyness.
Yes, I have replaced the word "cute" in my English vocabulary. Clearly it was just a placeholder put in there for centuries to prepare for the arrival of the true embodiment of the concept.
Just gotta practice now. Man, that little kitty in that picture sure is fluttershy. With a gruff voice, the cop stared the criminal straight in the eye. "Don't get fluttershy with me." Oooh, oooh, today we will earn our fluttershyiemarks!
"That is where the fish live."
ReplyDeleteWhy, oh why can't I stop thinking about MST3K - The Touch of Satan...this fandom is awesome.
*squee*
ReplyDelete*squee*
ReplyDeleteROFL that was incredibly awesome. I wish I had that many pillows now.
ReplyDeleteThis was a cute read.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed that read. I thought it was very cute. Then I read how poor Applejack got taken out, and had to laugh out loud (I never do when reading fanfics). Fluttershy was being adorable as well with the "toot toot". I just noticed Part 2. I will be reading that tomorrow night.
ReplyDeleteThat was brilliant! XD
ReplyDeleteThis was absolutely hilarious.
ReplyDeleteso sweeeet! and the writing style is very simple are clear so it doesn't get in the way of the story.
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