Image by Madmax.
Author: Lucid
Description: A /co/mrade finds himself in the world of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Will he ever get back home, or will he be stuck in a fantasy forever?Stuck Chapter 1
Stuck Chapter 2
Stuck Chapter 3
Stuck Chapter 4
Stuck Chapter 5
Stuck Chapter 6
Stuck Chapter 7
Stuck Chapter 8
Stuck Chapter 9
Stuck Chapter 10 (New!)
Also check out the Comic Interpretation.
140 comments:
cccd, I must say I do miss your presence on lulz. But if this blog is what's been occupying all of your time, I support you whole-heartedly. The content you've collected on here is amazing.
ReplyDeletePlease continue this!
ReplyDeleteSethisto you can delete the image I'm gonna update the google doc.
ReplyDeleteummm.. it broken
ReplyDeleteTHERE MUST BE MORE TO THIS. D:
ReplyDeleteBack the fuck up, Sethisto = cccd?
ReplyDeleteIf this is true... Good job, cccd. You're redeemed in my eyes.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteIt's only a matter of time before I say something that scares everyone away :3
I am well known for not thinking before I speak! Or type in this case. I'm sure I already pissed some people off without realizing it.
Please continue to alert us of further developments. This was good, but there are a couple of things like "his thoughts were reeling with thoughts." But overall quite good!
ReplyDeleteAha! Here this story is.
ReplyDeleteLucid! Keep it up. Every chapter you write makes me interested in the next.
@SlyWit
ReplyDeleteI don't know SlyWit. This routine of making an ass of myself has become distasteful, even to me. I think I've become unbalanced. I'm not going to be in the threads for a while, have fun.
@Lucid
ReplyDeletesorry you are temporarily removing yourself from our threads for the time being, but YGTBKM here, once again...
I want to do basically the applecart scene maybe during it happening or after it happens. maybe the split second before it happens.
but as far as i know, you just want a picture correct?
i mean, clarification-wise you know...
@YGTBKM !EgjySd..5w
ReplyDeleteWell, the way everyone's responding to my predicament is quite ridiculous despite the friendship vibe we're supposed to uphold. I know none of them will read this, most of them hate me already for this bloody fic.
The applecart scene was pretty epic, because he's pretty much approached by the entire town. Maybe right after, Mike's all shell shocked and scared half to death as a bunch of ponies are staring at him. Dude if you can only draw the back of pony heads looking at him with his face towards you, that'd be perfect. Whatever you're capable of. 2 weeks of asking for ANYTHING... you're a fricken godsend man. The link to madmax's comic on here is a good reference.
Thx, bro. Oh, BTW, I have a vanilla Minecraft account if you ever want to drop the server in a thread.
@lucid
ReplyDelete:D id love to stop by any servers you play anytime
this show about friendship,caring,sharing,and hapiness, aparently turns people OFF...
PIC: i love your idea, i was thinking something like 'mid-mad-dash' to the library, but i took a liking onto your idea :D have him backed against the door to the library, everypony looking at him.
(also, yfw, i just added everypony to Opera's dictionary lol)
@YGTBKM !EgjySd..5w
ReplyDeleteDude, that sounds perfect. Take your time, man. Thanks.
I read this because I couldn't stand waiting for the new episodes. Now I'm stuck waiting for the updates for this. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. Well, you did a great job with this. Can't wait for the updates.
ReplyDeletei love this story! i cant wait to read about luna.
ReplyDelete>The castle itself has, for a lack of a better word, humongous.
ReplyDeleteI do believe I gave an audible "Yay!" when I saw this updated, I can't wait to see more fantastic work from you, dude!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you're still writing, I really enjoy your work.
ReplyDeletesometimes i wish i was mike
ReplyDeleteIn a cartoon world, cartoon physics are your best friend. Unless you're the walking gag character instead of the hero.
ReplyDeleteMOAR LUNA PLEASE!!!
ReplyDeleteFINALLY new chapter!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucid!
"I hope you guys had your Wheaties this morning."
ReplyDeleteBest line ever!
Hey Seth, you finally updated it. Thanks. I thought you forgot about it when I updated chapter 6.
ReplyDeleteGreat work on chapter seven, Lucid. Can't wait to hear more. :)
ReplyDeleteSorry I never got to reply much about the "predicament" on /co/. Personally, I felt it was a few more parasprite-like members who jumped at the chance to troll the heck out of a tripcode-member. I tried to ignore it and let it pass, but still wanted to say to you to just ignore those guys. I think there are far more looking forward to your updates than trying to spread anti-Lucid feelings.
ReplyDeleteBut that's all in the past, and on to a brighter subject!
Chapter 7, keep it up. I'm still quite entertained when reading it, and I admit to being curious how you'll portray Luna when taking into account your "secret" deleted scene of her AND I'm also curious how you'll portrayel will end up different than the one I have planned for her.
Minor editing note, be careful of repeating words too close together (like "castle"). If they occur too frequently in too short a time, it gets a little distracting (however, people like Ernest Hemmingway used this to great effect, so you know that any rule in writing can be broken if you know why you're breaking it).
This is so good!
ReplyDeleteI need moar!
Ah, the chapter headings make this a lot easier to jump to the new sections, thanks for adding them man.
ReplyDeleteLol, I was actually working on something that's slightly similar to this for weeks now. Different take on it though, and I wasn't sure if it would work out well, but now that I saw well this worked I'm pretty excited to finish! Really well done by the way!
ReplyDeleteThis story is awesome, it had me laughing all the time and the story is really captivating. Lucid, you are an awesome writer and I look forward to the story's continuation and conclusion. Don't leave us hanging now!
ReplyDeleteI am reading this for the umpteenth time and it still is kind of funny to me how it leads in to the story.
ReplyDeleteWith how the narration is, I expect something a little darker (might be wrong word for what I mean) in content but instead I get PONIES! YAY!
Good story, looking forward to updates.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteYou're more than welcome to write your own. It's not like I copyrighted the idea... or should I... mwahahaha.
When do you update?
ReplyDeleteThis stuff is super awesome :D
@Dawnlight
ReplyDeletePretty much whenever I'm not trying to write several papers for school as well.
:D
ReplyDeleteUpdate moar! Because I asked nicely and you're really good =3
Also - I will actually buy you some cake.
ReplyDeleteFuck yes. I'm going to look forward to this. Keep up the friendship, bronies.
ReplyDelete@SlyWit
ReplyDeleteSecret deleted Luna scene? Do want.
@SlyWit
ReplyDeleteYeah, sometimes I can't help but feed them. Unintentionally, of course.
You'll have to wait and see how I portray Luna. She's practically a blank slate of personality, which I like.
And regarding that "extra" thing with Luna? Maybe I'll let it emerge once I'm done with Stuck.
Need MORRRRRRE!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those time's im just Laughing all the way while reading it, This was exellent Just with the FUUUU I burst into laughter on the ground and that has only happend twice
ReplyDeleteI applaude you good sir.
Yes Lucid, you updated finally, and with separate chapters too! I was getting tired of CTRL-F'ing all the time.
ReplyDeleteI know it's kinda out of the ordinary, but this story is definitely one of the top 5 premier stories on ED, among all the shipping and grimdark. This and Paradise are my fav so far!
Don't take so long to update!
Well.
ReplyDeleteThis is surprisingly, greatly more interesting to read than I first thought. A lot !
Exceptionnal writting, it feels very natural and the progression is going nicely, so far. (Part 8).
I wonder if the physique of the human will be used for a specific occasion ? He's twice the size of a normal pony and vertical instead of horizontal, after all.
@nova_25
ReplyDeleteLol, was that supposed to be a fat joke? I know for a fact everyone on the Internet isn't a 300lb neckbeard.
From what I've seen ponies scaled to us would be to around 3'5", so it makes sense an average human would be giant to them. I figured a human of average build/fitness would be able to keep up with them better than a basement dweller, not that I'm implying anything.
@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
ReplyDeleteChapter 8 read. Oooooh! A promise of adventure, and the main cast working together for the first time all at once. I am interested.
Also, if you want to hear some more specific stuff sometime, we should arrange a time on google chat.
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ReplyDelete@SlyWit
ReplyDeleteSure SlyWit. I actually wanted to bounce some 'ideas' off of you anyways. You seem like anyone who would know a good plot line.
Anytime I see you in the threads?
has he broken the news to them about 4chan and their popularity yet? XD
ReplyDelete@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
ReplyDeleteThat sounds good.
If you see me in the thread, let me know you're waiting. I'll head to the newest Stuck doc when I see you post.
Please, keep up the good work, this is one of my favorite fanfics I've ever read so far.
ReplyDeleteConfound these ponies they drive me to read fanfiction!
ReplyDeleteSeriously, I haven't read fanfics in YEARS, and here I am reading yours. It's very entertaining. Like a comment above, it just feels very natural and everypony's portrayal is spot-on. And I guess we ALL want to be Mike. Can't wait to read more!
wow... i was amazed by this fanfic. best i ever read.
ReplyDeletep.s. for some reason i have a weird feeling to Celestia is hiding something and will happen to be a bad guy or Luna will try to dethrone her sister (i hope it ain't what you planned for us, i like the whole accuracy to the real series and it would make it all... cheesy). i like where this story is heading, expanding the ponyverse and it's history.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI have a plan for expanding on one of the more confusing lores in the series (if you can guess it), which will also introduce and then slay a villain of sorts as well as explain how Mike got there in the first place.
Everyone will either love it or hate it, but that's what writing's all about.
I'm not used to anticipating the continuation of a story... And I'm anticipating this one oh so much.
ReplyDeleteAny time is good......soon perhaps?
ReplyDeletegood story LIKE
ReplyDeleteGreat story, very nicely written. Very fluid and natural so to speak. I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteupdate anytime this year please!
ReplyDeleteThis is good, far better then I expected a 'human in Equestria' to play out, lots of laughs too, awesome stuff, looking forward to more.
ReplyDeletethe story is starting to turn to shit why would anyone want to leave equestria. add more pinkie and fluttershy you homo
ReplyDeleteHa! The author fit in a "Cupcakes" reference! I laughed at that bit. I can't wait for more of this.
ReplyDeleteHe sticks his hand up to pre-emptively guess pinkies explosion of words. You can almost hear his mind going " LOL. NO!"
ReplyDeleteI know I'm not the only one who thought the "FFFUUUUUUUUUUU"-to-theme song trade-off was hilarious.
ReplyDeleteOh, boy...an almost subtle mention of THAT story...but of course, this is Pinkie after all.
ReplyDelete@Display Name
ReplyDeleteThat was quite good.
I really like where this story is going, yet somehow I really want to see the ponies discover that he's aware of their world on Earth. Just to see reactions.
>cupcakes reference
ReplyDelete>"no, that's what the brownies are for!"
>mfw
I see you added a little element of mystery and suspense to the story now. If people weren't asking questions about why Mike is there, they are at least now wondering about Celestia and this crystal.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I wonder if Rarity always sews to montage. And I'm quite curious if you'll make any sort of a joke with the fact Rarity doesn't know human fashion customs, and has never designed a suit for someone bipedal. I laugh at the idea of her adding a fake tail to the back because Rarity finds this will make him more like a handsome stallion (how STRANGE it is to not have a tail in the back!). Though, that might be taking it a little too far.
"I'm NOT wearing a tail!" Mike said. "I'd feel like a furry!"
"What's a furry?"
". . . best you don't ask that. Celestia might kill me outright."
Mike finds Pinkie annoying? >:(
ReplyDelete@SlyWit
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure you're the only on that noticed that Sly, since I told you the entire plot now.
Also you're implying you don't come up with the best inside jokes. I'm thinking of using this, dude!
These are absolutely fantastic. Well written, funny and an interesting plot that puts jelly into most bronies heart.
ReplyDeleteMake more stories please! :D
ReplyDeleteThis culture-clash story is way better than others! keep it up! until I get to see new episodes rolling up every friday! :D
ReplyDeleteThis is delicious!
ReplyDeleteMore Please!
ReplyDeleteThis is a deliciously well-written fanfic. (My favorite scene so far was "lying" to Luna.) Heart-warming and fun. Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteSo, This dead?
ReplyDelete... chapter 10, anypony?
ReplyDeleteI have done similar story like this one, but he didn't show up for a long time now, if you can please do so :)
ReplyDeleteHave faith in Lucid, everypony.
ReplyDeleteI'm sure he'll be back with part 10 any day now.
Sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've been a royal jackhole to everyone that's been following this story. I've been dealing with a lot of personal issues lately. I'll have 10 up in a few days, when I get time.
ReplyDeletehow do i read this shit it says private
ReplyDeleteFantastic! I don't usually read fanfic but I just tore through all 10 chapters. Hope the next update comes soon!
ReplyDeleteScrew going home, I'd just tell the ponies that there was no way to send me home.
ReplyDeleteGreat story.
i hate the new chapters. i prefer the older.
ReplyDelete@Lucid!0oSwOEGDel
ReplyDeletewell done dude. I'm now hooked onto this, to me sounds like you nailed each character and the brownie part made me lol :D + comic part made me lol hard to
an update, woot! finally!
ReplyDeleteWow. I've just gotten into fanfics a bit, and I have to say, this one surpassed most of them already! I'm looking forward to the continuation. Nice work, brony.
ReplyDeletei intend to read this one day
ReplyDeletebut before i do
is it worth the time?
this is actually really really good please continue it
ReplyDeleteThis is simply excellent! :D
ReplyDeleteYEEEY ...he's back :D
ReplyDeletei love this story...i was kinda sad thinking it was a dead topic :D
can't wait for the next one :D
...This is the best thing. Ever
ReplyDeleteThank you Lucid! I was almost starting to get a little bit afraid that my favorite fic wasn't going to be finished. I'm glad you're back.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, can't wait to read some more of it.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I was thinking about writing something similar to this one, maybe an indirect sequel of sorts, like some nods to this one but otherwise completely different.
Is it scary that I left my room after reading this, only to realize I wasn't in Ponyville???
ReplyDeleteIt's been a while so I had to reread all the previous chapters again before I read 10.
ReplyDeleteI love this story so much, but I've gotta say, I'm seeing a lot of sentences with words dropped from them. They're still readable enough to know what the missing word was, but there are quite a few of them.
Other than that, keep up the great work!
I'm liking this so far, and I'm curious to see where all this goes. Aside from a few sentence structure nitpicks, I think this is just fine. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete@Mischief
ReplyDeleteGo right ahead, Mischief. Enough people have written these stories already. I think mine was the first one on Equestria Daily before the fanfiction explosion, but that doesn't trademark the plot. Go for it!
I love the idea of a human in MLP and I love the idea of it being one of us even more! I beg of you to continue this!
ReplyDeleteI lost it at:
ReplyDelete“No, silly, that’s what the brownies are for!”
ROFL, this is alot more entertaining than I thought it would be. Kinda like reading a comic strip.
W-Wait...N-NO That can't be the last chapter! D':
ReplyDeleteThere needs to be much more...if this was a book I would buy it!
Please! Please continue this.
Every chapter I read makes me want to see what happenes in the next Chapter.
I question I have is,
(1.)When will the next chapter be here? if there is another...How long will it take?
I don't mean to sound inpatient but I simply must read more!
I really enjoyed it and I crave for there to be more to this story...
thanks for the fun story, was both fun to read, And it has inspired me to write my own story.
~Your awaiting reader, Anonymous
ps.I will also have this face till the next chapter...
www.youtube.com/watch?v=80jXvWjFe9s
This was a lot of fun to read.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteSorry anonymous. Summer for me usually means staying inside as little at possible. I'm still working on this, just at a slower pace.
Will there be anymore of this?
ReplyDelete@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteYou bet your sweet flank there will be. Lucid always delivers.
Oh in the name of Trollestia, please update soon. I love these so much.
ReplyDeleteI'd hope by now you're done with Chapter 25. I'm getting antsy for the next update.
ReplyDeleteso this i'm guessing the author has been killed because its been months without an update
ReplyDelete@Muppetz
ReplyDeleteGood Lord lets hope that isn't the case...
Please update brony, we're counting on you
ReplyDeleteLucid Y U NO UPDATE. For reals bro, this is my favorite story only next to The Ponies Meet /CO/.
ReplyDeleteHoly Crap Lucid, you were NOT kidding when you said "Summer for me usually means staying inside as little at possible."
ReplyDeletewhat are the names of all the fanfiction mentioned in this story
ReplyDeleteLucid, please update.
ReplyDeleteThat is all.
I beg you man, this is my favorite fanfic. You have to update this, please! xD
ReplyDeletewhat are the names of all the fanfiction mentioned in this story
ReplyDeleteHa, I got some good laughs out of this.
ReplyDeleteLucid.
ReplyDeleteQuit sitting around and take my money!
^what he said
ReplyDeleteThis is so much fun to read ^^
ReplyDeleteAlso am I the only one that realized that nopony noticed that he told them he was from Earth that they have 3 kinds of ponies Pegasus, Unicorn and Earth?
Will there be an update anytime soon? :O
ReplyDeleteSorry I've been a ghost guys. I've pretty much been working for the summer. I'll get going again once the new season starts. I PROMISE.
ReplyDeleteGreat, can't wait for an update :D
ReplyDelete♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
ReplyDeleteWell the new season started, time to start writing.
ReplyDeleteAlso my names Mike! (just needed to get that out)
It's October...
ReplyDeleteSeason 2 Episode 3 plays this Saturday.
Why do the good ones update Tri-Annually?
I really hope you continue this storym it's really good! :)
ReplyDeleteAaaaany day now.....
ReplyDeleteBut seriously Lucid, any estimate when you'll update?
Something a bit more specific than the implied "Somewhere between any day now and some time in April".
just wanted to say that i love your story so far.
ReplyDeleteIt's been practically four months now, times up, you gotta deliver.
ReplyDeleteI guess this story is dead.
ReplyDeleteAwww, no more, I was hoping for some epic adventures
ReplyDeleteAww. That's too bad, this was one of the earliest fics I read (and my first "human-in-Equestria"-type story too), and I was quite interested to see how it goes on. :/
ReplyDeleteMore of this, por favor! This fic is what turned me into a brony in the first place!
ReplyDeleteWhat happened to this story? It was a great story, and it made me a Brony. Please finish this story.
ReplyDelete@Lucid I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it takes so no rush and please never stop with your incredible story xD
ReplyDeleteA few more months and we can celebrate the first anniversary of this fic being dead! WOO!
ReplyDeleteOH WAIT, it will be the SECOND anniversary, my bad!
ReplyDeleteLucid... You promised us more!!!!!
ReplyDelete