• Story: The Last Treasure

    [Sad] More spike stuff by Victorian Hellsly
    Description: The tale of a dragon and the last moments of his life.
    The Last Treasure

    18 comments:

    1. I have to admit, this was very moving, and very well-paced. Excellent work. I hope more people take note of this piece.

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    2. It's in download format for some reason, authors gotta change that i think :x

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    3. Victorian Hellsly eh?

      I loved this story, so I'll make sure to remember that name and read your future fics.

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    4. @Sethisto

      Yeah I think I uploaded this up wrong, anyone know how I can fix it?

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    5. @Victorian R. Hellsly
      I did the same thing by accident at first, and if I remember correctly I ended up deleting the document and then uploading it again with the "Convert to Google Doc Format" (or whatever) option was enabled. There may be a way to replace or convert it after, but I find the interface too clumsy (and so very slow) to poke around too much.

      Anyway, like I commented on AFFN, I love this poignant story. It's a tearjerker but so worth it.

      Oh, and I see you have another story out now too. :)

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    6. @Victorian R. Hellsly

      Just do what fairy slayer said and i'll throw the new link up.

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    7. Thanks Fairy, I love your stories too! : )
      Ok, I think I fixed it, if Sethisto could switch the old file with this I think it should be good then. Sorry, first time using Google Docs. : /

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/172kZqJNZ4E1oiA5oUZJyMtU7osSi_lX3uIHs4PMOd4k/edit?hl=en#

      And thanks for the reviews so far everyone!

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    8. My word, this was a touching story.
      Many thanks, Hellsly.

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    9. Hellsly, holy fuck.
      I will eat your brain and absorb your creative writing powers, I swear to gog.

      Awesome work! I honestly cannot 5/5 stars hard enough.

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    10. Good job! Good thing there's the Story Archaeology or I would have missed this.

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    11. I come back a month later and still find this fic highly enjoyable.

      I'm glad it was dug up. Hopefully more people will read it.

      A worthy addition to be placed under the "Spike" tag.

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    12. Wonderfully written, deserves more attention with the fic archeology.

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    13. Very well written and moving. It's is hard for us to understand immortality, or even a life beyond our meager century or so, yet you seemed to capture it nicely between the two central characters. Impressively written and succinctly stated, a more than worthy read.

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    14. Don't fucking cry.........:'(

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    15. Its brevity enhances its emotional punch. The narrator reveal at the end was handled deftly too.

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