• Story: Pinkie's Party

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    [Normal] This one actually has a pretty crazy twist, definitely one to check out! And absolutely no shipping for once! Amazing.
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    Pinkie's Party
    Tuesday, February 1, 2011 op
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    18 comments:

    1. SqueekFebruary 1, 2011 at 12:31 AM

      Author here! I'm new to the writefag game, and any comments or tips are greatly appreciated!

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2011 at 1:56 AM

      I can't get to it.

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    3. SethistoFebruary 1, 2011 at 2:00 AM

      @Anonymous
      Hmm you are right. I think squeak needs to make it public, I can only access it when I'm logged in to my Google account.

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    4. SqueekFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:25 AM

      Oops I'll change that.

      There we go.

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    5. ChinFebruary 1, 2011 at 9:04 AM

      This was a great fic. I'm glad to see no shipping and no grimdark and so on, and it was.. rather touching. It gives a new edge to Pinkie, without making the subject go out of hand like it usually has.

      Well done!

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    6. SethistoFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:26 PM

      Updated the picture with some related awesomeness

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:34 PM

      Well done Squeek.

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    8. SqueekFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:39 PM

      Awesome! I love it Sethisto!

      Thanks , Anon, glad you liked it!

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    9. ChinFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:41 PM

      I updated the drawing. I posted it at the end of the general!

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    10. SqueekFebruary 1, 2011 at 5:09 PM

      Thanks Chin! It looks awesome! There are few things which can't be improved by cupcakes!! It fits perfectly with the story.

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    11. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 5:07 PM

      Goddamn you to hell for making me cry, Squeek.
      Still, loved it.

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    12. SlyWitFebruary 17, 2011 at 7:45 PM

      You've heard a critique or two before, so allow me to just introduce what I liked.

      Amazing levels of bittersweet! and it unfolded in a way that didn't seem at odds with the show. I especially love Pinkie Pie's role in it. This story just may get a tear in the reading, but I am sure people will be smiling anyways at the end.

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    13. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 6:04 PM

      Dang cryed to dame good story brony

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    14. AnonymousJune 22, 2011 at 6:56 PM

      ///SPOILERS///

      OK... I know this is an old story so I don't know if anyone will see this...

      Call me stupid but I don't understand the ending. What is the picture supposed to be of?

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    15. AnonymousJune 22, 2011 at 6:59 PM

      ...

      ///SPOILERS///

      Nvm. Just got it. I guess this story was written before Cutie Mark Chronicles aired, the episode where we see Pinkie Pie's parents. The description of her parents was throwing me off.

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    16. Click ClackJuly 17, 2011 at 9:20 PM

      Hm, thanks to the above anon for figuring that one out for me, I wouldn't have gotten that! Although, I'm still vaguely confused about how the parasprites are involved...

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    17. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 5:52 PM

      ^ How did Pinkie Pie know how to get rid of the parasprites in Swarm of the Century?

      Based on this fic, it's because wherever she grew up there was a parasprite infestation and her parents were killed in that. I guess the ponies there figured it out and Pinkie used this knowledge when the parasprite swarm came to Ponyville.

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    18. McPoodleMay 13, 2012 at 4:46 PM

      Canon or not, I thought this was very touching.

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