Author: Tumbleweed
Description: A masked and mysterious pony has come to Ponyville! He's looking for the bravest, strongest pony in town- and where better to start, than with Rainbow Dash?Whatever Happened to Captain Cloudsdale? (New Part 4!)
Additional Tags: Masked Superponies and Derring Do!
20 comments:
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Good premise.
If thats even a word, Im not sure
@Joshuotar:
Yes, premise is a word and you are using it correctly.
This story looks interesting.
uuh another mysterious pony?
Jeez, that face. Dem eyes. <3
Well this is intriguing.
do as the bromans do and toga party!
Interesting story. Holding off rating till more is written.
And wow. People call Twilight the socially awkward ones. RD may have confidence, but definitely no tact.
EDITING!
"Sorry, I should've introduced myself earlier." The masked pony said, and scratched at the back of his neck. I'm Captain Cloudsdale."
--- Missing a quotation mark
I assume the title is a reference to "Whatever happened to the Man of Tomorrow?" / "Whatever happened to the Caped Crusader?"
...which is kind of weird, because those were wrap-up stories, not intro stories, for those characters >.> Ah well, superheroes away!
Hmmm, strange. Title references Superman (Whatever happened to the man of Tomorrow), but story references Captain America and the Invaders (Human Torch and Namor)
Anyway, while there's already an Avengers crossover, I think I'll be keeping an eye on this...
If this is as good as "Whatever happened to the Caped Crusader", I might be addicted.
It's good and all, but it's a bit short, and there isn't much of it so far.
Hmm, Applejack = Spoiler, RD = Angel (X-Men), Captain Cloudsdale = Captain America. I'm okay with this.
This story's a fun read so far. I love the way you write RD, and the way you describe action feels natural (if a bit delightfully silly at times). Definitely a story to keep my eyes on.
Heh.
That is a cute picture
Not bad ending. Could use a minor epilogue though.
Aww, it ended.
I guess I'll just have to keep an eye out for your next story!
Excellent use of Twi's lecture powers, by the way. That part had me smiling so hard with suppressed laughter that my teeth hurt!
On another note:
Dear Princess Celestia,
Sometimes it's really fun to get your way by pulling rank on someone else.
Your faithful and highly important student,
Twilight Sparkle
Its complicated...
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