• Story: Shimmer


    [Sad]

    Author: Autumn Wind
    Description: Sparkler has a happy life with her adoptive mother and sister.
    However, a secret weighs heavy on her. Seeking some advice and relief,
    she comes knocking at Cheerilee's door.
    Shimmer

    Shimmer (Alternate)

    Additional Tags: Sparkler shares the family secret

    28 comments:

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    2. A fic with an Alternative story. Sounds amazing

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    3. Hmmmm.....Cheerilee sure seems to be getting a lot of fics recently...

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    4. I can't remember ever seeing a fic posted like that before, lol. It took me a while to find out how to actually read it.

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    5. This is what amazes me.
      It's like the show switched at birth, but with a pony story concept that can help make both original and alternative story simply Brilliant!!!
      ^_^

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    6. @Bombedrumbum

      Oh, I didn't notice that, never seen that before. I wonder if they're both sad though

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    7. Wow what an absolutely amazing story! ;-; a real tearjerker and just generally amazingly written story

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    8. @ThunderIce I know!!


      So.....sad......yet.......amazing.......Q.Q

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    9. I sure didn't see the ending coming. This was a very good read. Though you better have something happy on hand for when you're done. You just might need it.

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    10. Hmm...If it really is that good, bookmarked. I'll have to read it later though, it's too late here.
      On an unrelated note, I found out subscribing to pasts is not such a good idea

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    11. @Bombedrumbum
      HOW DOES YOUR EMAIL NOT DIE????!! lol, but seriously, even with Gmail's conversation view, just 7 comments is starting to make me reconsider subscribing to this post. When it says 'Follow-up comments will be sent to', I thought it meant follow up comments as in replies to your comment(s)

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    12. @Bombedrumbum
      Ah, okay. I don't even know why I mind, since my email is like 96% empty. Also, these comments have gotten complete irrelevant to the story
      And Blogger doesn't like posting my comments

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    13. It won't load!!! I'm asking Tia for a new computer, she still hasn't got me a Hearth's Warming present...

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    14. For anyone still unsure if this fic is worth the read or not - it's currently over on fimfiction right now, with an overall rating of 5.0 after 107 ratings.

      Yes, it's definitely worth it.

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    15. Sparkler? Why does that name sound familier to me

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    16. Sparkler with Sad tag?

      *adds to reading list*

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    17. A perfect 5 on FIM Fiction. Let's make it 6-Star here folks. It deserves it.

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    18. @Travis Smith She's Derpy's adopted daughter. She isn't as well known as other OCs are. That's the answer if you weren't being sarcastic, sometimes I just can't tell.

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    19. It's not a bad story, it's just, in the way of Sparkler/Derpy/Dinky stories, I prefer "My Sweetie" By Big Macintosh.

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    20. @Princess Luna
      I just didn't know, I'm still learning some OCs, I thought it was Twilight's daughter from that fic of her and Trixie having a kid

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    21. @Travis Smith
      That would be Midnight, or Midnight Sparkle as I refer to her to avoid confusion.

      And Sparkler's a background pony, not an OC.

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    22. If you're looking this far down for whether or not you should read this, it's a fantastically moving piece where Derpy isn't the one being sad for once.

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    23. Seth, it's 6-stars now. And it certainly deserves to be. The pacing is good, the characters are believable, the plot is solid, and the only problem I noticed was "Sparkler nervously settled down on Cheerilee’s sofa, nodding nervously" in page 4.

      The time spent reading this was well-spent. Good job, author.

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