Monday, March 7, 2011

Story: After Mare-Day Gras

[Shipping][Random] Hangover time! Some grammar errors but it's entertaining.
Description: Twilight Sparkle tries alcohol for the first time. Hilarity ensues (I hope).
After Mare-Day Gras

31 comments:

Windchaser said...

Magic and booze do not seem to mix.

Filly said...

This was possibly one of the best storie's i've read. It made me laugh so hard, its amazing.

Fon Shaolin said...

Giggled like a motherfucker.

Anonymous said...

An entire story about drunken lesbian pony antics, and not a single mention of Rainbow Dash. Writefriend, I am disappoint.

Nah, just kidding. Really funny story, I enjoyed it alot! You seemed to shift back and forth between present and past tense alot near the beginning, but it didn't make the story unreadable or anything.

Daffodil said...

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

siraj said...

*facehooves and proceeds to die laughing*

RefractedPegasus said...

HILARIOUS! Absolutely hilarious! I'm sure my neighbors are thinking I'm crazy, laughing out loud at 1am.

Roy G. Biv said...

If I keep this up, I may get a writer tag someday... Must write better! And not get sucked into IRC so much! And get more proofreaders!

Anonymous said...

I must admit... I was not expecting Princess Luna to factor into this anywhere!

Anonymous said...

Confound this ponies, they drive me to drink, I mean make babies with Princess Luna!

Pacce said...

Now write one for each of the other five!

Anonymous said...

@Anonymous

You mean get drunk, then make babies with princess luna.

ruff1298 said...

Dear Celestia, this is one of the best stories ever.

Anonymous said...

TwilightxLuna shipping? Did not see that coming...still lol'd though.

Anonymous said...

Why 5 stars? It's funny but...

CANDYBAG said...

That was hilarious, will there be a sequel?

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SonicBrawler1992 said...

@Roy G. Biv I might help proof-reading... As long as someone tells me what exactly I have to do. I guess it means reading and correcting any errors?

BunkieBunny said...

I just finished reading this twice and I'm still laughing!

Pride said...

Brilliant. 5 stars

Anonymous said...

Great story, but it would be awesome if this was some kind of mini-series. The Hangover, equestrian edition, with each story another pony wakes up post mare-day gras.

Anonymous said...

Hehehehe, gross

Anonymous said...

... and that's the story of why we now have two mares in the moon!

Anonymous said...

I think my face broke from lulzing....

ToonNinja said...

@Anonymous
Pinkie would TOTALLY be Alex! This story must happen!

Doc Steedly said...

OMC Pls tell me you plan to do more to this . . . i died laughing at the end. This was just SOOO random. SOrta how i could picture Twilight if she was . . . *clears thraot* well inebriated . . . . . AND LUNA . . . wow!! Somepony's got some BIG plans . . . . .

Kjh242 said...

Must... Resist... Urge... To LAWL... At someone... Else's house...
Pfftbhftbh... HA!

Solar Eclipse said...

OMG best drunk twilight shipping ever must have squel can't stop laughing hahahahaha

ItsTheWhinyGuys said...

Wow, that was crazy. As I said on DA, good read.

Daxter Galaxy said...

Don't drink and magic.

Melodia said...

Sucks that little silly shorts like this would never get accepted now a days (to say nothing of spamfics)

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