Friendly Uncle here. Story's done, the link you've got here should lead to the whole thing.
If you want a summary: "Twilight discovers that Spike's ability to send her research to the princess isn't all it's cracked up to be. Maybe it's possible for Celestia to learn a little TOO much."
Finished reading it yesterday. That one was really fun to read! It's one of the only fics that I've read multiple times for MLP. I hope you write more stories in the future!
I couldn't help myself from giggling during the first half all the way to when Celestia came to the scene. This was very well written and I only noticed, like, one place where a word was missed, but other than that...
What a nice story! Entertaining through the whole thing. Since this is a shipfic a was expecting twilight and celestia to get together from the beginning. But the way you wrote it, I was really doubting it once Celestia arrived. And then I was pleasantly surprised again. So..great story bro.
Sweet Luna, that was hilarious. I loved Spike's deadpan attitude throughout the first scene, and freaked-out, TMI-spewing Twilight was wonderful. You also really nailed Pinkie; that little apocalypse prediction was pure gold.
There's barely any support out there for Celestwi, so it's great to see the one that does is such a brilliant piece of work. Bravo, I think I've read it five times by now and I still love it!
"I'm going to talk to Princess Celestia, and I don't care how awkward it's going to be because we both know she's read my ten page story about singelhoovedly saving her from a dragon and making furious love to her on the top of a mountain in the middle of a lightning storm."
That may be one of the finest lines ever crafted by a brony, ever. EVER.
In the middle of the fic, where Pinkie is talking about Gilda and Trixie and stuff, is there another fic like that then? If so, could somepony hit Trevor up with a link? It looks intriguing.
Hayyyyyy, that was pretty good! Although, to be perfectly frank, one had issues with the other mane five's lack of response to what Twilight was saying, especially when she was getting more... Descriptive, in what she wrote. One just has trouble visualizing that, or that she had ever told them anything! Even if she had, none of the other mane five blushed or anything from her descriptions/language? That was about the only thing taking away from this fic. Otherhoof, great job! Trevor gives it... 4.5/5 stars! (And an internet.)
Finally getting around to commenting on this, I read it months ago and really liked it. Twilights reaction is perfect. This was sweet and very in character most of them time, well done.
Ok first of all, LOL ROFLMFAO, and second that was the most pedo-philic fanfic I have read so far, so many levels of awkward... 5 stars for making be rofl
To this day, this remains on the front-bit (don't have to click any submenus) of my favourite list. Almost reads like an episode, if not for the lovey-dovey. Everypony in character, hysterical, silly, cute. Oh mah gawd. So good.
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This one was quite funny and entertaining. I do hope there is more to this. I really want to know what happens next!
Friendly Uncle here. Story's done, the link you've got here should lead to the whole thing.
If you want a summary: "Twilight discovers that Spike's ability to send her research to the princess isn't all it's cracked up to be. Maybe it's possible for Celestia to learn a little TOO much."
Anon 1 here.
Finished reading it yesterday. That one was really fun to read! It's one of the only fics that I've read multiple times for MLP. I hope you write more stories in the future!
This was awesome.
There's not enough Twilight/Celestia out there :(
I couldn't help myself from giggling during the first half all the way to when Celestia came to the scene. This was very well written and I only noticed, like, one place where a word was missed, but other than that...
6/5, would ship again
What a nice story! Entertaining through the whole thing. Since this is a shipfic a was expecting twilight and celestia to get together from the beginning. But the way you wrote it, I was really doubting it once Celestia arrived. And then I was pleasantly surprised again. So..great story bro.
Much love for creepy, obsessive Twilight. This fic brings a smile to my face. And by smile, I mean huge goofy grin.
That was...nice
Adorable fic was Adorable.
I AM OKAY WITH THIS.
Eh, the age difference doesn't really bug me, female horse can mate with their own grandfather and its not weird.
But the student/teacher thing is sort of creepy.
bow chicka honk honk
"She's seen the diagrams of all the different ways I want to make love to her"
I lold so hard xd
Also, I'm going to get you some psychological counseling.
xd yea.. that is normal when you dont want to talk.
I don't usually comment, but when I do... it's about great My Little Pony fanfics. I liked it alot, it had a good mix of funny and sweet.
Sweet Luna, that was hilarious. I loved Spike's deadpan attitude throughout the first scene, and freaked-out, TMI-spewing Twilight was wonderful. You also really nailed Pinkie; that little apocalypse prediction was pure gold.
It's quite sad there are not many Twilight/Celestia fics out there, especially as funny as this one.
This is pure hilarity gold. Great job!
that was funny and quite cute and well written! you did a good job
Crackin' up at crack shipping. Seriously, some great dialogue in this. Ought to be in the 6-star group if you ask me.
Just found it. Loved it!
There needs to be more for this ship!
There's barely any support out there for Celestwi, so it's great to see the one that does is such a brilliant piece of work. Bravo, I think I've read it five times by now and I still love it!
D'awwww.....nuff' said
Had to dig around for this. Totally glad I did.
5 stars
@Anonymous tucker shut up
I read it in search of hilarity in hindsight from Do You Really Want to Know.
I stayed for the epically hilarious ship fic.
Also, Molestia implications FTW.
5-Stars!
Twilestia is the best shipping that everyone's too afraid of.
"I'm going to talk to Princess Celestia, and I don't care how awkward it's going to be because we both know she's read my ten page story about singelhoovedly saving her from a dragon and making furious love to her on the top of a mountain in the middle of a lightning storm."
That may be one of the finest lines ever crafted by a brony, ever. EVER.
I love this!^_^
It's really great!^_^
A good story!^_^
/)^É›^(\
i got my penis out for THIS?
*reads*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
*dies from sheer overload of awesome cuteness*
Seriously, 5/5.
I have no complaints.
Celestia is best troll.
*Stopping in the middle of the fic to type this*
In the middle of the fic, where Pinkie is talking about Gilda and Trixie and stuff, is there another fic like that then? If so, could somepony hit Trevor up with a link? It looks intriguing.
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Hayyyyyy, that was pretty good! Although, to be perfectly frank, one had issues with the other mane five's lack of response to what Twilight was saying, especially when she was getting more... Descriptive, in what she wrote. One just has trouble visualizing that, or that she had ever told them anything! Even if she had, none of the other mane five blushed or anything from her descriptions/language? That was about the only thing taking away from this fic. Otherhoof, great job! Trevor gives it... 4.5/5 stars! (And an internet.)
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Finally getting around to commenting on this, I read it months ago and really liked it. Twilights reaction is perfect. This was sweet and very in character most of them time, well done.
Now to go embarrass Twilight... *skips off*
Ok first of all, LOL ROFLMFAO, and second that was the most pedo-philic fanfic I have read so far, so many levels of awkward... 5 stars for making be rofl
it's... nice
5star
I had the lotion in my hands... Then it ended :(
"She's already read about me saving her from a dragon on top of a mountain and then making furious love to her!"
"Celestia's tail is poetry in motion!"
"[Fluttershy] I'm going to get you some psychological counseling."
So. Much. Hilarity!
And a little d'awwwwww to top it off. :)
Five star for sure!!
@Daxter Galaxy DUDE
anyway, that...disturbing comment aside, great fic had a nice blend of comedy and Shipping, and kept everyone in character
To this day, this remains on the front-bit (don't have to click any submenus) of my favourite list. Almost reads like an episode, if not for the lovey-dovey. Everypony in character, hysterical, silly, cute. Oh mah gawd. So good.
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