• Story:...And Apple Accessories

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    [Normal] Some career day shenanigans. Written by Bobcat over on the Order of the Stick Forums.

    Author: Bobcat
    Description:  It's career day at Ponyville Elementary. All of the little ponies are so excited... so why doesn't Apple Bloom want Applejack to be there?
    ...And Apple Accessories

    Additional Tags: Apples are boring, aren't they?
    Wednesday, March 9, 2011 op
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    21 comments:

    1. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 5:46 PM

      Cutesy Buttons?

      What happened to Dinky Hooves?

      ~Scratch

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    2. BobcatMarch 9, 2011 at 5:48 PM

      Never heard of Dinky Hooves, so I made up a likely sounding name.

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    3. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 5:53 PM

      @Bobcat

      Dinky Hooves is a mini derpy unicorn. (Her daughter) seen in the first cutie mark episode

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    4. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 6:06 PM

      This was a great little story XD I enjoyed it alot

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    5. BobcatMarch 9, 2011 at 6:13 PM

      Ah. Well, assume that Dinky is in a different class. And Derpy's allowed to have more than one relative.

      Yes, that'll stick...

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    6. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 6:33 PM

      Loved this story! The writing was excellent; you do very nice dialog and it makes everypony feel very in-character. The plot was cute, and I appreciated all the little meme references.

      Plus, I always love to see Derpy portrayed as having transcendental wisdom that goes over all the other ponies' heads. 5/5 stars!

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    7. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 8:18 PM

      Applejack is A LOT dumber and more confrontational in this fanfic then she ever was in the show, 2 stars for poor character representation.

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    8. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 11:16 PM

      Adorable, funny, and heartwarming.
      Great job.

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    9. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 12:09 AM

      This needs the I SELL APPLES AND APPLE ACCESSORIES image.

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    10. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 12:34 AM

      Great story. 5/5

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    11. Golden FlipMarch 10, 2011 at 8:54 AM

      Before I read this, I sliced up and microwaved an apple.
      The combination of warm food and warm fuzzy feelings made this a well-wasted 10 minutes.

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    12. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 9:22 AM

      "Butterguy", that killed me

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    13. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 12:59 PM

      "Apples and apple accessories"
      -right there, i died

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    14. HawkysuMarch 10, 2011 at 8:03 PM

      "You think ah don't know a challenge when ah hear it? 'Cause ah won't have y'all challengin' my ability to notice a challenge when ah hear it! In fact, that sounds like a challenge right now!"


      I. Love. You.

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    15. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 3:52 PM

      @Anonymous

      Same here. :D

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    16. AnonymousMarch 27, 2011 at 1:09 AM

      I love these stories that are written like actual episodes and successfully capture the spirit of the show.

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    17. WierdplatformerJune 14, 2011 at 2:51 AM

      I think it needs more apples!

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    18. Colt.45July 11, 2011 at 4:10 AM

      The adorable randomness is palpable! Ollie Jump? Is he a brony, or a "brahny"? King of the Hill reference? And Derpy is giving away ponies' mail!? Jeezum crow! So many silly one liners and situations that I couldn't help but giggle nearly the whole time. All that being said, the sloppy ending wasn't satisfying, and this wasn't a good representation of Applejack's character. Other than that, fantastic!

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    19. The FerretJuly 16, 2011 at 11:02 AM

      It was cute but I wasn't crazy about the idea of applejack being uneducated and such since the only real reason for thinking that is the way she talks.

      The ending was kinda messy and the entire story felt very disjointed.

      That all said great references and very silly stuff tho derpy got another kid?

      cute attempt and i wouldn't mind seeing more though maybe the prereaders can give more help next time.

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    20. Present PerfectJuly 27, 2011 at 11:23 AM

      Best part of this story: Scootaloo's dad.

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    21. ProginoskesSeptember 18, 2011 at 6:23 PM

      @Present Perfect
      The other comments made me kinda reluctant to check it out, but seeing an actual Scootarelative is gonna be worth it.

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