Nathan here. Pointing out that the fanfic is not yet finished. Last part due by latter tonight if not earlier.
reading.....reading...that is supes man!
And once again, the day is saved, thanks to FRIENDSHIP!
One of my favorite pieces of Pony-fiction. Mostly for Spike/Bloom.Great job.
Finally got around to reading this. Well done! You nailed Apple Bloom's accent pretty well, and that last line was cute. If I had to pick something to critique, I'd say that sometimes you switched to different locations in the story without a whole lot of padding or explanation. It was a little jarring, but nothing that broke the narrative.
Aww, I finally got around to this, and I loved it! There is not enough Spike/Apple Bloom in the world. I think you pulled off the dialog perfectly, and as Cereal said the last line mad me D'awwww hard. Great stuff, in character as always!
Great. I got type two diabetes from looking at the page picture. Thanks, jerk!Oh, who am I kidding, I can't stay mad looking at that. D'awwwwwwwwwwww...
THE FIRST PONYFICTION EVER PUBLISHED ON EQUESTRIA DAILY! *ooooo's, aaaaaahh's, and UUUUUUUU's)Now the low amount of grammatical and spelling errors, the accurate characterization of the... character, and the overall look of the story really makes Porcelain Secrets a "standard" on what writers should aim for. I'm not saying "rite spike/bloom an'd u b gud" (although some more from this pairing would be adorable), but the way this story is structured just...Fuck explaining; to me, this story is the bar that you either get a 4 or a 3 from me (note the grammatical/spelling errors this story has; if you really looked, you might've found maybe two of them). I love this story.
Wow, this was amazing! It almost feels like a real episode.
What a cute story! 5 stars!
My eyes almost blged out of my head when Applejack mentioned getting a "switch" for Apple Bloom. That honestly doesn't seem like something that would go down in Ponyville...Other than that, though, an excellent story :)
I don't know why, but I've always loved this pairing. And this is a great story. :3
This was all perfectly in character, and the end was d'awww. Very nice read!
This is an awesome fan fic. I was wondering where the comic I found about this came from. Good to see the whole story was just as cute as it was!
I know this is very off-topic, but I feel I have to say this? Is it just me or have I seen this exact same artwork way before the onset of these particular ponies?
Wow. EqD's first Fan Fic. Very adorable.
Loved it. Also, *pout* want more.
DYK: This appears to be the first story on EQD.
Wow this is old they talking about /co/