How is it that nopony has commented on this? I think it delivers a unique look at Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves/Bright Eyes/whatever else the fanbase has named her. Who knew that she could be portrayed in such a way? I kinda feel bad for her, but, this is a fan made story. Anywho, while this comment may never be seen, and this story may never be read by anypony else, I think it's pretty good. I'd give this four and a half stars.
@Sir Peppermint JamAuthor here:This was posted before things really got rolling on the site (back in January, I think). I was afraid it might have gone uncommented on. Thank you very much, and I am glad you enjoyed it.
i really liked it. and its very sad to me because that is how society really is at times.