• Story: Breaking Bricks (Update Part 6!)

    [Noir-mal][Dramedy][Wth are these tags?] "This is one of the only, if not THE only, ponies-in-a-realistically-" dark"-world stories I've had almost nothing but pleasure reading and want to read more of....It certainly sets a high standard for character-driven first person pony noir."- Pre Reader #2

    Author: Aquaman52
    Description: If this were a normal case, I wouldn't be chasing after a foalnapper who keeps mailing me riddles that he expects me to solve. I wouldn't be living with an alcoholic perfume salesmare who can't hardly remember her own name, let alone mine. And I certainly wouldn't be turning the fair town of Ponyville upside-down looking for somepony I didn't really want to find in the first place.

    Then again, if this were a normal case, they probably wouldn't have hired me to crack it.
    Breaking Bricks Part 1
    Breaking Bricks Part 2
    Breaking Bricks Part 3
    Breaking Bricks Part 4
    Breaking Bricks Part 5
    Breaking Bricks Part 6 (New!)

    Chapter One Livereading

    Additional Tags: Private investigator meets persistent interrogator.

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